Entwined with You in a Corner No One Knows About

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading my family's depression Q, my child is no longer OD, and I don't cut pig's trotters anymore. I want to see 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and the OS finally lets me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok, ok, I directly wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine. Anyway, it's very interesting. Go and watch it.

I grew my eyes just to see this. The Lily God is here to save us😋😋😋 It smells of Japanese youth, and the emotional scenes are described very delicately, smoothly and without any abruptness. Wen Xi's tsundere kitten and the first-person psychological description are really great. They are simply the best lilies I have ever read on Tomato😋😋😋

My first reaction was to think of Adachi and Shimamura. The teacher used this kind of first-person narration, which may seem thankless in online articles. Coupled with the occasional switching of perspectives, it actually serves the inner description better. The detail of the writing has surpassed most of the online articles I have read. The ultimate deliciousness! Although many plots can be guessed at a glance, classics never go out of style. I love watching them unfold like this, so this is the sweetest way to write them. After reading nearly 30 chapters, I personally think that I have read it quite carefully. Except for the almost no repeated descriptions of smell and vision, I think a super highlight is the kind of problem that is solved quickly without delay, without stomachache, and 100% pleasant unfolding. It is very suitable to open and read when you are exhausted physically and mentally, and watch your aunt laughing in bed. Anyway, I'm very grateful to the teacher for bringing us such a good book (Gasho) (Gasho)

There are spoilers, so I have no choice but to express my love without thinking. What on earth is this? How come the childhood sweetheart, first love, Bai Yueguang, and redemption are all integrated into one? I can only say that it's so beautiful. This is the kind of Japanese couple I should read. I haven't found anything that I can't accept. This book is really good, very good, very good, very good. The writing style is good, Shuang Jie, the writing style is also very delicate, and there is no reason why I like each other. In fact, I can't understand why the rating is so low. The three views are correct, love is equal and there is no multiple swords, and they are all sweet, and there are no unacceptable points. I think this book should have at least 9 The rating is above. I don't know what to say about these two people. They are really too sweet. The characters are all my favorite. The pace is very fast. I feel very comfortable and there is no pulling. The author is right. I can only say that I am too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet, too sweet. I I think Wen Xi is very cute. She said that this guy is too bitten, but in my heart, I just want to have sex with Song Li. This guy is simply too arrogant. Both of them are serious. Song Li is really too gentle. He is afraid that Wen Xi will forget the original agreement and use another identity to approach Wen Xi. Knowing that Wen Xi clearly knew that she was just Nian Nian, she did not blame her or tell herself, and I feel that my identity has suddenly changed and I am shy. I can only say that Wen Xi is a bit bad. Since I haven't read this book for a long time, I have forgotten some of the plot. I don't know what to say. I think Wen Xi is like a kitten and bites people at every turn. Song Li, you just continue to pamper her and you can continue to enjoy it secretly. The quarrel that broke out in the middle was too sexual tension. , So unexpected. This book really makes me want to read it a second time. I will add a second review when I have time. I don't like second readings very much. I feel uncomfortable watching two people who are in love getting to know each other again. This one is different because it is too sweet. If possible, I will probably print this book out and continue reading it after the author finishes it. Young lovers, when can we hate each other? This is really important,

This book is different from many lily novels written by Yang Persimmon. This one is more Japanese. Whether it is the rhythm or the psychological description [smile] [smile], it may look a bit awkward and the progress is very slow, but it is very beautiful. If you feel that it is not enough, I suggest you read "Buy Your Classmate Once a Week" [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart], an absolute masterpiece, you will fall in love with this type of novel after reading it

I will use the most straightforward, the most direct, the least roundabout, the least embellishment, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straight to the point, the least roundabout, the least merciless, the least falsehood, the most naked, the most thorough, the most harsh, the sharpest, the most profound, the most realistic, the least roundabout, the least Roundabout, the most heart-wrenching, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the neatest, the most straightforward, the most decisive, the least ink-blazing, the least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most poignant, the least humane, the least showy, the most disrespectful of dignity, the most straightforward, the most direct to the core, the most tearing apart the appearance, the most tearing apart. Pretend, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least greeting, the least flattering, the least hypocritical, the least trick, the least hidden, the least embellishment, all euphemisms, all politeness, all euphemisms, all beautifying shells, all polite words , without any subtlety, without a trace of euphemism, without any cover-up, without any foreshadowing, without any word games, without any stage talk, put aside all ambiguities, throw away all ambiguities, and give up all euphemisms to tell you: this book is beautiful [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

It smells of Japanese youth, whether it is the first person or the psychological description, it is very youthful. The plot is very sweet, and the interaction between the heroine is also very sweet. The tsundere heroine and the first person psychological description are so cute. I have long eyes to watch this! It seems that no one is watching, maybe you are still not used to the first person perspective? But the author should work hard, it is so rare to write such a touching article.

Very delicate pure white! The writing style is so delicate, and the emotional description is also very smooth. The very rare first-person writing method is very novel. It is really not enough! ! ! So sweet, so sweet, please give me more stickers! Wuhu [love]. However, the plot is really classic. The character design of an arrogant cat and a sincere dog can be said to be very orthodox and royal. The only unhappiness is that I met this article too early! The author must finish writing it successfully! Also, let's complain about Tomato's current writing style. It's so hard to find such a special book. Please don't be assimilated!

Let's talk about it from the following aspects: 1. Plot design: I think one of the highlights of the plot design of this book is that the conflict is very "comfortable". There is no design in the book that is particularly heart-wrenching or speechless. "It doesn't make sense for a long time" conflict plot, but uses common conflicts between friends in life as the conflict points, such as misunderstandings caused by the other party's sudden breach of appointment, etc. The conflict points are easy for people to accept, which will be more real and perceptible for character creation. 2. Plot advancement: So far in this book, the plot line is very clear. There are no messy branch lines here and there. It is just a drama about "the former childhood sweethearts meet again and find ways to fall in love with each other and renew their relationship." It is a very old-fashioned drama. However, the problem is how to write a cliched plot in a novel way. This book does it very well. First, it uses dual perspectives to narrate (the two heroines take turns to write the same or different things from the first perspective), which makes the distance between the two heroines and the readers. It is shrunk so small that there is no feeling like "I only see the relationship between the two heroines from the perspective of one party"; secondly, the plot unfolds in an "inexplicable" way, in which one heroine deliberately approaches the other heroine as a "good friend". The meaning of this unknown and deliberate behavior is an important means to promote the development of the plot and arouse readers' interest in reading; finally, the article designed the remaining CPs to promote the development of the relationship between the two heroines sideways, but these CPs do not occupy too much space and text in the article, which is rare. 3. Character creation: ① This is the most outstanding point. I think it is quite amazing, especially because the author is very good at using detailed descriptions to create characters, especially some micro-expressions and small actions, such as "thumb gently caressing the tiger's mouth", "eyes seem to say "Come and ask me"" and other similar descriptions, and because the two heroines have similar personalities It can be said that they are completely different, so the details of the description are also completely different. For example, when facing a scene with many people, Wen Xi will have the action of "clasping the corners of clothes tightly with her hands", but Song Li will not do it at all. She will "block in front of Wen Xi and convey warmth with her hands": ②The second is the side description, which is even more delicate, not to mention the use of several pairs of deputy CPs To highlight the two heroines from the side, what the author most often uses and is good at is to highlight the current character's heart and state through other surrounding things, such as the scene of drinking milk tea in a milk tea shop. The plot took place in the summer. He wrote that "the doorbell of the milk tea shop made a sound like a dying struggle", which is both writing about things and people. ; ③ Finally, and the most special point, there are clue words throughout the whole text. Here are a few of the more common ones, such as "corner", "amber", and "origami" (this was mentioned more later and is a plot advancement word). Each word corresponds to shaping the character arc from different angles, which is quite remarkable. 4. Emotional core: I think what I like most about this book compared to other BH books is that the emotions in the book are too real and even a bit artistic and delicate. Many times, when we experience a relationship, it is difficult to have so many detailed experiences or feelings, but this book expresses many delicate emotions. Furthermore, the emotional context between the two heroines completely follows the most basic "acquaintance→getting to know each other→falling in love" ", but because the subsequent plot (there was also foreshadowing at the beginning) tells you that the two people were actually "green plums" in the beginning, it also caused the previous context to change, that is, the same context happened twice, which led to a superposition of feelings. Because the feelings for people in the past are repeatedly superimposed on the current feelings, as a reader, it will be easier to feel the emotional entanglement experienced by the two heroines in the current book, which is quite interesting. All in all, this is the most detailed and delicate novel about emotional description that I have seen so far. The emotional description in this book is not about how real and touching it is, but about being "too detailed". Too many details and side descriptions make the entire emotional exchange deeply rooted in people's hearts. If you also like delicate and pure emotions, then this book is quite suitable for you. However, if what you want to read is not romantic and beautiful love, but ups and downs of plot conflicts and constant entanglements of love and hatred, then the real book is not suitable for you.

The author specified that I have read it several times, it is so delicious [Blow a kiss] I want this kind of delicateness, Wen Xi, you little kitten [Sending my heart]