My Online Girlfriend Is Vermouth
网恋女友是贝尔摩德
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 52k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- English
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Synopsis
Stats
21Chapters
223Reads · 30 days
11.6kReads · all time
9Listens
In booklists 1
Reader comments 12
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It's clear the author is still a bit inexperienced 😄 I suggest making the paragraphs more concise for easier reading. Also, adding more detailed descriptions would be helpful. Furthermore, the logic of some events should be carefully considered before writing, otherwise it will feel abrupt. The plot could also be made more engaging, with exciting moments and depth, to retain more readers.
Very creative; it would be great if you could keep writing like this. It would be excellent if you could maintain the pacing of the Detective Conan world. If possible, it would be best to bring Ran into the main storyline as well; no one can resist a karate girl battling the Black Organization.
It's very well written, I like it very much. Vermouth 🥰🥰 hehehe
It's pretty good, but there's a lot of unnecessary dialogue. Please, author, give us more screen time with the male lead and Vermouth! 😘😘
Great, that's a new perspective, I love you, Sister Bei.
It would be best if the updates were faster.
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Great job, keep it up! I love Bayonetta!
Good-looking, I love watching it
Haokan, author, keep it up!