Bocchi the Rock!: FILY, the Special One

The strong Japanese light novel style, coupled with the fact that it is the only fanfic on the Internet with PA-chan as the heroine, these two points alone are enough to make people look forward to it. Come on, author, don't stop updating, keep writing, I can do anything! [Sending heartfelt wishes]

So pretty! Oh my god, how can there be such a delicious fan? It has a very youthful feel to it, and the author's writing style is superb! The feeling of youthful pain in the first part of the acquaintance is very satisfying, and the interaction between them is also very well written [blowing kiss]. The author grasps the emotional description very well, and writes the vague stomachache and distance in the front very delicately. The love part later is also very sweet. The male protagonist, Miss PA and others are all well portrayed. Overall, it is a story worth watching. Oh my god, how could there be such a flavorful novel? This feeling is definitely unique to Tomato! Very recommended! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a very good book. I didn't find any bad points or flaws after reading it. The 197,000 words are just right for someone like me who has no patience_(:з∠)_ However, the campus chapter at the beginning felt like a light novel, but it didn't feel like it at the end. I don't know why╭(╯ε╰)╮ Also, when SS took PA to meet his parents, it felt a bit strange to me that SS's parents behaved the same as most parents in China. Maybe it's because I've been reading this book as a Japanese light novel. But in the end, this is still a fan fiction worth reading, and I hope everyone can find their own PA or SS٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و (By the way, can the author write something to talk about later?)

Come on, author, the writing is sufficient and delicate, and the Japanese novel is strong. Novels that are not written in the first person may be difficult for ordinary online readers to accept (Japanese literature guys like me are already used to this). It has great potential! ! Although it is a short to medium length of 100,000 words, it is actually an advantage for fan works. It can ensure the flow of the main plot of the original work, and can also add your own original plot, without causing readers to quickly lose the sense of freshness. In fact, authors with this kind of writing skills can try original novels. Although fan fiction can provide a complete setting and is easier to write, your original plot is also smooth, so you can consider it. It's less easy to become popular than people with peers. As for originality, redemption articles tend to be niche, so you might consider Japanese daily sweet articles, which I feel are more suitable. Anyway, keep up the good work, the author I like [top post][top post][top post][top post] The progress is going smoothly so far, the word count is sufficient, the plot progresses smoothly, the sweetness is very considerate, and the original plot will not seem so abrupt, which is a sure way to avoid fan fiction (in my opinion, it is purely a personal opinion) There are very few Lonely Rock fanfics, and there are even fewer that can keep updating. Come on, author, from now on you will be the Lonely Rock general, the Lonely general. (The reward ranking list has reached more than 300 male videos. Congratulations!) Ah ah ah ah ah, baby Blue Sky, you are a fragrant, soft, sweet and glutinous honey, creamy, sweet, greasy, crispy, smooth, tender, dense, elastic, silky, smooth, fluffy, fragrant, sweet, oily and moist. Thin, soft, dense, moist, sweet, crispy, soft, tender, smooth, fluffy, soft, sweet, thin, fragrant, fragrant, bouncy, tender, fragrant, sweet, sour, sweet, spicy, refreshing, salty, salty, fresh, bitter, bitter, sweet, smooth and tender Tender, crispy, crispy, soft, bouncy, oily, fresh, refreshing, mellow, subtle, hot, icy, cool, sticky, crispy, fresh, tender, spicy, bitter, spicy, soy sauce, vinegar, olive oil, rapeseed oil, sunflower oil, fish, shrimp, crab, lobster, shellfish, beef, mutton, pork, chicken, duck, goose, turkey, sausage, ham, bacon, meatballs, burgers, hot dog pizza, sushi ramen, curry stew, grilled fish, grilled chicken, salad soup, porridge, mango lemon Lemon, grapefruit, passion fruit, chrysanthemum, kale, celery, shepherd's purse, amaranth, Italian grilled vegetables with herb sauce and olive oil. Delicious, juicy, crispy, smooth, rich, mellow, sweet and refreshing. Spicy, sour, sweet, bitter, spicy, salty, crispy, soft, glutinous and smooth. Delicious and fragrant, attractive color, bright color, tangy aroma, rich texture, distinct flavor, unique aroma, endless aftertaste, good color and fragrance, delicate taste, tender meat, golden color, crispy outside and tender inside, rich aroma and taste Delicious taste, smooth and tender taste, mellow taste, unique flavor, unique aroma, attractive taste, delicious taste, rich taste, rich taste, delicious taste, mellow taste, unique aroma, tangy taste, delicate texture, fresh color, golden color, crispy outside and tender inside, rich aroma, delicious texture, smooth and tender taste, mellow taste, unique flavor, unique aroma, attractive taste, delicious taste, rich taste, rich taste, delicious taste, mellow taste, unique aroma, small cake

Let me start with the conclusion: For those of you who closed the book when you saw the first one in first person, you may have missed a very good book. If you want to write a first-person light novel, this book can be used as a study. Even authors in other categories can also refer to how to write heart lines. The number of interactions between the male and female protagonists in the early stage can be said to be a breath of fresh air in today's online articles that often contain dozens or millions of words. The relationship came naturally without stretching the word count, and it didn't feel abrupt at all. The time jump is also quite well grasped. High school, then meeting directly six years later, and finally a memory, the nodes are very crucial. This book is not particularly in-depth with the main storyline of the anime, but that is why it has its unique charm. Maybe this is a story unique to SS and PA. Finally, I would like to say that the author has really good foundation. It is extremely difficult to write the first person in online novels. I wasn't very interested at first and wanted to see how it would end, so I went straight to watch the Tokyo night scene. I was so shocked that I went back to watch it again. Despite the low rating, it is quite good among Lonely Rock fandoms, well... It is the undisputed number one in my current bookshelf. The only pity is that the subject matter can succeed or fail. If the author's original writing is good, he will gain a group of loyal book fans, and there is no problem in making a living out of writing books.

The first Guyao fanfic I've read. I was attracted by the Guyao group friends and came here. At first I just had the idea of ​​giving it a try, but later I found out that it was really good-looking. The writing is delicate and has a strong light novel style. The characters are well created and the handling of details is basically impeccable. After reading it, I felt very refreshed, as if I had returned to the days when I watched the Yami Mi-sensei Four Seasons series. What, you ask me if I have any shortcomings? Some brothers have, this book is too thin, the author will write another one with hundreds of thousands of words (≧ω≦)

It's great. It's one of the few light novels with Pa Sang as the heroine. The early stage of it is really full of the hazy, unsteady but beautiful emotions of high school (forgive me for not saying this is love). Because I also had a relationship that ended due to the final placement of classes. She was very good, but in the end I was still unsteady (or too confused). I didn't know how to proceed. It was also like the situation in the novel where there was only one layer of window paper left. In the end, I still didn't have the courage to take the last step. Even when I think about it in college, I still regret it sometimes. The feeling of being a teenager is like the breeze, which can't be exchanged for a thousand pieces of money. But it is also like fallen leaves, erratic and directionless. People cannot have youth and the feeling of youth at the same time. This is a regrettable time in the sudden eighty years of life with infinite scenery and yellow leaves in the sunset.

This is a masterpiece of love in my mind. It turns out that it's not that I can't stand the love theme, but that it has too much industrial saccharine [laughing] The refreshing style of writing in the light novel style and the first-person narrative also fit the story of love very well. It's a pity that due to space limitations, the plot is relatively simple. It would be better if the story could be more ups and downs and the plot richer. In addition, the author's new book seems to be similar. Why? In addition, I personally recommend that you choose some girls with "complex" backgrounds as heroines, who may have more tension, such as Hayasaka Ai? I quite like this kind of character [Sending my heart] Finally, I wish the author a Happy New Year

This novel is a very strange perspective among lonely rock fans. It has only one shortcoming, and that is that it is too short, but it is indeed a very good short story. Even including its impact of less than 200,000 words, I think this novel can score above 9.2 On this platform (if the fan novel is too short, it will have a great impact on the score). Well, maybe it's also because of the short length. This article can be regarded as a high-quality novel without any poisonous points. I highly recommend everyone to read it and have a sweet love [laughing]

It's rare to find a lonely rock fanfic with PA as the heroine, but more than 90% of the content is original, and the characters are not OOC. The setting of the protagonist not being given a clear name is also very touching. Coupled with the first-person perspective (in fact, I personally don't like first-person articles, but this book is really good), it is simply not very interesting.