Patrolling the Mountains and Seas, Your Destiny Becomes Holy!

Attention if you want to read reviews! Absolutely true and objective Advantages: The world view is vast. I estimate that the 3,000-mile radius of the Tea Horse Road is only a small map. The characters are more three-dimensional than Xiaobai's novels. The characters of Master Shen and the corpse-carrying man Huang Zheng are relatively distinct in the few chapters. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the description of the fighting and power system, such as the mountain and sea seals corresponding to "search the mountains and seas to reveal the holy and true king", the three basic levels of martial arts, etc. Readers who value this aspect can enter without thinking. Disadvantages: The author's writing power is still not enough, and some settings are swallowed up. At the same time, the plot progresses slowly. Sometimes it takes a long time to explain a truth, and a psychological description or an insignificant environmental description can be rendered in a long paragraph or even a chapter. It can be seen that I want to promote the growth of the protagonist through the push of the environment and characters, but it is too complicated. The characters are vivid but relatively flat, a bit like the tone of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Different points are in the eye of the beholder: Mutton, Grandpa, and Xiao Luchen are the points most criticized by readers. Let's start with mutton. Personally, I think mutton can be equated to Jianlai Tanghulu. It is the point that anchors the protagonist's cognition. From not being able to eat it to eating it occasionally, from eating it occasionally to eating it regularly, from eating it often to eating it casually, and eating it casually until it is useless, it is a step-by-step reflection of the protagonist's growth. Don't you think? Do you think it will be full of flavor to mention the original mutton when writing the ending? Then there is the grandfather. The role of grandfather is a reasonable motivation for the author's cognitive changes and growth. In fact, it is also in line with the facts. The principles passed down by the older generation are often the resources for our growth. Everyone thinks that the reason why it appears frequently is precisely because the protagonist needs it frequently, and why it needs it so frequently is because it grows up quickly. This is a logical closed loop, and there is nothing to question. Finally, there is "Xiao Lu Chen". I actually think the author overemphasizes Xiao Lu Chen, but this is not harmful. Those who really want to read the book will not care about this. The above is my experience after reading Chapter 60. Generally speaking, I think it is still good. I gave it five stars because the author also said that this is the first writing practice book. In fact, if someone who has written a novel can understand that it is the first time to write and write like this, it is really good.

What should I say, you can read it to pass the time. Needless to say about the subject matter and content, the protagonist's character is set to look like he is wearing something but not wearing it. I think it is a taboo and affects the reader's sense of immersion. There is nothing toxic about the content, but the background setting is very important. It depends on the author's later control. The pace should be gradual, a bit slow, but not too exciting. More than 200 photos were released. .

Five stars, but in fact there are some shortcomings. The writing is good and the rhythm is good. However, many of the things like the art of leading sheep seem to have never been used after learning it. It feels like many foreshadowings have been forgotten at all. .

The writing started very well. I feel very knowledgeable. I'm looking forward to this story. I don't know why it started at chapter 1890. It feels like it was written by a different author. I always feel that the writing is a little different. It's not that engaging and has a bit of a fast food style. [Thinking] I've read more than 300 chapters. Let me review it again.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book written like this. It's so beautiful and immersive. I gave it a 5-star review at first, but when I reached chapter 28, I didn't want to read it anymore.

Everything I write is okay, but it's too overwhelming. Let me give you an example. Before 20 pictures, I will break through. Within 20 pictures, my foundation will be stronger in the middle. I am about to break through. After 20 pictures, I will finally break through. After a few pictures, I will finally break through, haha

The writing is very good, not a cool one, and a little bit naive. However, on the Internet, which is so violent nowadays, there are still some that write about truth, kindness, beauty, and correct values. Not many, and it is worth reading.

Up to Chapter 70, it can be said that it is the best fairy grass. The author has great control over the plot, the plot settings, and the character arcs are all excellent. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it. In terms of writing, it can be said that it beats 99%🍅 of similar articles. Keep the momentum and rhythm and don't be disturbed by what others say. Let nature take its course and write your story, and there will be applause to greet you along the way.

It is beautiful and well written. It not only depicts big scenes, but also has thrills in the mountains and seas. The big characters' ruthless outlook on the overall situation and the little characters' cautious thinking are all vividly depicted. The protagonist's combat power is not draggy, and the plug-ins are also very enjoyable. Xiancao belongs to it. The only drawback is that the author cannot update ten chapters a day [laughs]

Okay, I can see it. It all depends on what happens next. The protagonist feels a little blessed by fate, and every time he goes into the mountain, he can come across good things that he just needs to use. I don't know if there will be any emotional scenes. I've seen several movies where the emotions were not written well.

The writing is very innovative, Feng Shui, Feng Shui, and fate practice are all my favorites. Although there are some twists and turns, the male protagonist also has to endure hardships. There is currently no female protagonist, and I am looking forward to having no female protagonist. Of course, a single female protagonist is also possible, as long as the emotional line is not too awkward, come on.

As far as I have read dozens of chapters so far, the characters and the three-dimensional structure of the personality can easily emerge in my mind. Then the names and principles in the book are very well explained. I like it very much. If you keep writing, your grades won't be too bad. Come on, author!

I have read more than 30 chapters of this book, and I feel that its rating should be 9. 7.8 Is still too low. If you are short of books to read recently, you can read this one. It's not the kind of white text suitable for old bookworms. The logic is clear, and I think those settings are okay. And the calculations inside are not particularly old-fashioned. You can still read this book.

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking, the content is relatively detailed, the plot is ups and downs, a poor boy's road to heaven

It looks good. The protagonist is really good-natured. He is neither arrogant nor impetuous. He can always understand what his foundation is. More importantly, there are no women who are eye-sores. I hope it can be maintained without writing messy emotional lines. The career line of the protagonist is more attractive.

The setting is quite good, and the character of the protagonist is quite likable, but the outline may not be filled in too much. It feels like the skeleton is not substantial enough, and it is just a single line. In the middle and late stages, I feel that the author's writing power is not enough, and he starts to produce in an assembly line, which sometimes conflicts with the previous plot. In short, if you want to relieve your boredom, you can read it, but you can't study it in detail. It can be regarded as a book with some highlights on Tomato.

Having read Chapter 12 before, I can only say that if I can keep it up. It's definitely a really good book. Even if it's not Immortal Grass, it's definitely not that bad.

The writing is quite good. Regarding the various psychological activities of the protagonist, he talks to himself too much. The plot of the story unfolds so slowly that I doubt my life.

The writing is good, the protagonist grows up step by step, from young Lu Chen to Lu Chen, he is cautious in doing things and there is no brainless plot, it is still very good

This book is an ambitious genre novel. It may not be the most exquisite mythological adaptation in the history of online literature, but it is indeed an important attempt to systematize and develop a long-form narrative of "The Classic of Mountains and Seas". For readers who are tired of the Western fantasy paradigm and long for a "familiar freshness" in the Chinese context, this book provides a charming enough entry.

The writing is quite interesting, there are some minor flaws, but the flaws are not covered up, it is very good, five stars.

It's very interesting. It's rare to see such a good-looking male video on Tomato. The characters have their own characteristics, the plot is ups and downs, and the writing style is also very good. It makes people read it. So far, I haven't found any big surprises. Come on, it's well written. I wish the author will become popular as soon as possible and write more.

Believe me, this book is definitely one of the few in Tomato that is worth reading and is also hidden. The characters are well drawn, with delicate emotions and independent images. The story is also very layered, but there are not many people. I urgently hope that more people can take him up.

The book is okay, but I know how to read it. The setting is called Mu Prince's Mansion in the early stage, Duke Cheng in the later stage, Dragon Roar Iron Cloth Shirt in the early stage, and Golden Bell Cover in the later stage. It can be said that it is very chaotic. From the beginning of the herb collector, the holes dug by the Qimen skills have not been filled in properly. It has turned into learning martial arts, such as Wusheng Xuanbing, learning Tao and cultivating immortals, and then the immortal power, Dao fruit ability, and then what kind of expertise is the protagonist? The descendants of those big bosses who killed the Dragon Vein, then killed the second prince of an enemy country and made him a marquis. The reward included no food or territory. The son of a small prince could open a mansion and build a government office. In this way, the character plot is very boring.

A good work worth reading, a story about a poor orphan who strives to make progress. It is full of flesh and blood, sentimental and meaningful. I give the author a thumbs up and hope that the following stories will have greater surprises.

How can I put it, the plot can be dealt with. You can also be a little more enthusiastic. It would be better to write more stories about searching mountains and conquering demons.

Recently, I have been reading a lot of Tomatoes, Many Children, Many Blessings fantasy stories, starting from the ancient martial arts, but most of the writing is not very good, or the framework of the book is not well constructed, whether it is about cultivating immortals or lowly martial arts, anyway, it is very frustrating to read. This book can't be seen to be written by a new author. The literary skills are very solid, especially the section that introduces the realm of Wu Xia.

Chapter forty-eight is well written. If you keep writing at this quality, it will be very good on Tomato. You haven't broken through the Grandmaster in seven hundred chapters, so just read it and you won't say a word.

It's okay. There's really not much to see. You can take a look. The subject matter may be that the author's writing skills are not strong enough and he is a bit pretentious.

The protagonist is thoughtful, has a strong sense of justice, and is not afraid of shrinking. The master treats his disciples just like his own son. The plot of the novel is not sluggish, and it is good to read. I read the book after reading the comic, but the comic is too slow to update.