The White-Stockinged Senior Won't Leave Me Alone, and She Says She's My Future Self

Although it's not my cup of tea, the content is bland and not that exciting. But at least the logic is complete and it is not a poisonous novel. From my perspective, it seems like I am watching the life of a naive rich second generation. The evaluation is a novel written by human beings. It is not poisonous, but it is not suitable for ambitious people. It is okay to use it to heal the soul.

After watching it for a short time, I liked being a licking dog, so I thought it looked good 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰, but it's a bit poisonous to travel back in time and become a woman.

Pulls well. The character design is also well written.

Fortunately, it looks good

The plot is quite good, and the setting is also very novel, but some things are described too much and are not suitable for minors, but overall it is quite interesting.

I hope the relationship can be properly handled

The story is good, but the narrative layout needs to be improved. You need to pay attention to paragraphing and white space. Don't use any polish. I can see it. Don't talk about the eggplant system. Pay attention to the writing skills of line drawings. Use accurate words and everyday sentences. Reduce the use of adverbs and adjectives. Use verbs accurately. Hide feelings in things. Pay attention to the perspective. Don't have God's perspective for a while and the protagonist's perspective for a while. Eat, drink and have sex. If it does not advance the plot, you can delete it. Looking forward to improvement!

Is this still a sweet article? Or is it just like what the girl said, when you lick a dog to earn health points, it lasts until the finale. Is there anything that is a fixed target?

This book is actually quite interesting, but it's a pity that its popularity is so low.

Not bad, not bad, getting better and better