HP: Hello, Master of Potions! I'm Here to Deliver the Ingredients!

A very nice professorial article, the writing style is very humorous. In the humor, you can see the regrets and weakness in the original work, but they are slowly made up for in this fanfic. Many professorial novels like to make the original protagonist too humble, as if he will get Sif's love if he prays in a humble and bottomless way. On the contrary, the character of Snape is OOC. Snape always has some strong feelings and longs for the light, so this book is difficult to read. I have to ensure that the original protagonist really gets along with Sif on an equal footing. Although I have only updated the opening chapter, I can feel that the logic of falling in love in the later period is there, and I have not committed the mistakes that many fans tend to make. They over-amplify stereotypes and write the professor in an overly extreme and harsh way. It's so gloomy that it seems like the nerves are gone. The professor in this book is just right. You can also see that the professor is a gentle and delicate person in the original work. The progression of the two people's relationship is also handled very well. There are all the necessary foreshadowings. You won't feel that you fell in love all of a sudden. How? Suddenly, I trusted him. This author was serious about creating a beautiful world for Sif that was different from the ending of the original work. He cared deeply about every character he wrote, and he also respected the original work. As a reader, I could see from the words that you loved them.

The setting is interesting, a prophet! A mysterious identity appears in Hogwarts. It's exciting to think about what kind of story he will experience as a student. I hope that those who can save the original work will have a happy ending in the follow-up! We're currently at chapter 38, and the direction is reasonable, and it's interesting to watch!

Author, I beg you, please update more! I finished reading it in less than a day, author, my god, please update more, it's really good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking, very good-looking. Otherwise, be careful I come to your house to steal the toilet in the middle of the night [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Super super love! I like the image of the protagonist very much! And it can be seen that the author is trying his best not to be OOC, and the logic of the writing is also very smooth! There is no obvious blackness or forced whitewashing! There are no misleading relevant sentences, and the comment section is very friendly! It's one of the few HP articles I'm satisfied with on Tomato I really love it [crying][crying][crying] The author writes very carefully, and you can feel her serious thinking and layout in the words. Many words inspired me very much. It is truly a treasure article! ! !

It's super good-looking, and it doesn't matter how long it lasts. Due to habit, I spent most of my time off the internet reading the article, and I've actually finished it. By the way, whether the protagonist is up or down, I have itchy hands and want to write [shy] I don't have too many requirements for the character design. As long as it's not particularly OOC, I'll be fine. I've been blown away by the character design of a book before, and it was a very serious one. I'm digressing. I highly recommend this book, but the professor's character is a bit inconsistent.

Very nice! Why is the update discontinued? It's so funny and touching. Everyone is so nice. The author should finish it quickly. It's so uncomfortable to see the update discontinued [almost crying]

In fact, I don't think the relationship between the male protagonist and Snape is like love. I feel that the two of them are more like close friends and close friends.

The setting is quite attractive to me. I like that it doesn't overly repeat the original plot, but integrates the protagonist's personal story line based on the original plot. The teachings in this book are so cute, and the psychological activities are particularly cute😭Boss, please be sure to write steadily until the end, okay😭 Moreover, the author's writing style is very interesting, and it always gives me a silly yet warm feeling... Soufflé is as sweet and light, and I feel very good after reading it.

Very interesting! The setting is very novel [please update] Big cheers for more updates! Don't give up on the article! This is the only request I have for all writing teachers [crying]

Chapter 92 is tied, and the author hasn't coded for four days. I feel like my life is so miserable. If I had known better, I would have chosen a finished book from the book collection group... But this one is very, very, very beautiful!!!