Otsutsuki Toneri opens his hollow eye sockets, the decayed shinobi world reflected in his Tenseigan.
Nobles exploit the common people, shinobi are reduced to tools, and the Otsutsuki main family harvests planets like fields of grass.
“When human morality crumbles, the Tenseigan shall awaken, and the Fist of the Moon shall set the shinobi world right!”
If this world is not what I want, then I'll turn everything around!
Naruto main setting + Sequence Pathways + Infinite Flow + Shinobi World Revolution. No Hidden Village storyline. Multiple heroines. The queen is on the cover: the truly charming direct-line ancestor! Let's go!
If you really want a multiverse harem, I suggest only having one harem per world, or just a few people in total. This makes it easier to write and avoids having too many people later on.
It seems I can't comment within the chapter, so I'll just say one thing: it's "Eighty Gods' Empty Strike," but the name of one of the eighty gods is mispronounced. The simplified version is "Empty Strike," or actually, "Empty Palm." There are still more chapters to come! I haven't had enough!
I understand now. Reading your novels requires immense patience, and you can't just skim through them; you have to think about them carefully as you read. 🤦 I finally understand. You can't just skim through a novel; you need to carefully consider the details as you read. That was true for the previous book, *The Beekeeper*, and it's true for this one, *Otsutsuki Toneri*.
The writing is good, and there are many ideas. Some parts seem a bit trivial, but as long as updates come in, it's fine. Let's give it some time to develop.
Black Zetsu: I'm going to create a world where there are only aloof moms and no stepfathers! 😂 The portrayal of the naive and innocent Otsutsuki is so adorable; the thoughts and feelings of a young girl are captured perfectly.
I want to see the plot, but less character interaction.
It's pretty good, keep it up and give it your support! 👍
I've finally released a new book.
Why did the protagonist insist on developing chakra? Developing chakra makes him so vulnerable to being countered by the future Otsutsuki aliens!
So far it's alright, quite good-looking, and very interesting.