Otsutsuki Toneri opened his hollow eye sockets. The decayed ninja world was reflected in his Tenseigan:
Nobles exploited commoners, ninjas had become tools, and the Otsutsuki main family harvested planets like fields of grass.
“When morality collapses, the Tenseigan shall awaken, and the Fist of the Moon shall set the ninja world right!”
If this world isn’t what I want, then I’ll turn everything around!
Naruto main world + sequence pathways + Infinite Flow + revolution in the ninja world. No ninja-village route, multiple heroines, the official heroine is on the cover, and a truly charming direct-line ancestor! Let’s go!
If we really want the harem of all heavens, I would suggest just one harem per world, or a few people in total. This way it will be easier to write and avoid having too many people behind to write.
It seems that I can't comment in the chapter, so I'll just say one thing, it's Yasugami's air attack. Yasugami is the god's name. The wording is wrong. The simplified version is air attack or it's actually empty palm.
There are more updates, not enough
I kind of understand. Reading novels written by you, the author, requires a lot of patience. And when reading novels, you can't just pass them by, but you have to think about it carefully while reading [face covering]
I finally understand that when reading a novel written by an author, you cannot just read it, but you need to think carefully while reading it. This was true for the last Beekeeper, and the same is true for this Otsutsuki Toneri. Judging from my many years of experience in reading novels on Tomato, if this novel can be extended to two or three hundred chapters, the lowest score will be over 8.4.
The writing is good, with a lot of ideas. It seems a bit trivial in some places. As long as it is updated, it will be easy to talk about. I will give it a try first.
Hei Jue: I want to create a world with only aloof mom and no stepfather! [Laughing and crying]
The writing of Otsutsuki Silly Baitian is really cute, and the little girl's thoughts are vividly written.
I want a plot with less character interaction.
It's still pretty good, please support me [Like]
Finally opened a new book.
By the way, why does the protagonist have to develop chakra? Developing chakra is really easy to be restrained by the future Otsutsuki Jupiter!
So far it's okay, it's pretty good-looking and interesting.
If we really want the harem of all heavens, I would suggest just one harem per world, or a few people in total. This way it will be easier to write and avoid having too many people behind to write.
It seems that I can't comment in the chapter, so I'll just say one thing, it's Yasugami's air attack. Yasugami is the god's name. The wording is wrong. The simplified version is air attack or it's actually empty palm. There are more updates, not enough
I kind of understand. Reading novels written by you, the author, requires a lot of patience. And when reading novels, you can't just pass them by, but you have to think about it carefully while reading [face covering] I finally understand that when reading a novel written by an author, you cannot just read it, but you need to think carefully while reading it. This was true for the last Beekeeper, and the same is true for this Otsutsuki Toneri. Judging from my many years of experience in reading novels on Tomato, if this novel can be extended to two or three hundred chapters, the lowest score will be over 8.4.
The writing is good, with a lot of ideas. It seems a bit trivial in some places. As long as it is updated, it will be easy to talk about. I will give it a try first.
Hei Jue: I want to create a world with only aloof mom and no stepfather! [Laughing and crying] The writing of Otsutsuki Silly Baitian is really cute, and the little girl's thoughts are vividly written.
I want a plot with less character interaction.
It's still pretty good, please support me [Like]
Finally opened a new book.
By the way, why does the protagonist have to develop chakra? Developing chakra is really easy to be restrained by the future Otsutsuki Jupiter!
So far it's okay, it's pretty good-looking and interesting.