Cultivating Immortality Begins with Managing a Market

The protagonist is very kind and has a pure heart. He treats his friends and subordinates with all his heart and soul, and gives away valuable treasures and opportunities for enlightenment. He is very humane. In addition, although the protagonist is as clumsy as a child when fighting against others, he still fits the image of an unexperienced time traveler. If we put ourselves in his shoes, wouldn't we not have any defenses in the first battle after time travel, and just watch the enemy attack in a daze? In addition, although you often let your opponents run away, you can also get good gains. Overall it's ok.

Let's evaluate it objectively. The writing style and plot are not my favorite type, but it is quite real. I think if it really traveled to the world of cultivating immortals, the author may have written it like this. Everyone is for profit, no matter how much they hate it, they have to be passable on the surface and play dirty tricks behind their backs. The characters are well-drawn and not just black and white. At least I think many of the supporting characters are flesh-and-blood, and the plot progression is not abrupt. The protagonist, like Han Paopao, is involuntarily swept up in the current of the times on his spiritual path. Overall, it is a masterpiece on Tomato that is popular among ordinary people. You can read it!

Not bad, not bad. The character relationships and family relationships are set up reasonably, especially the senior sister who is like a mother and has a real maternal love for the protagonist. The story is compact and logical. I hope the protagonist can achieve enlightenment for his family.

You only said that you like mortals cultivating immortality, but you didn't say that you really wrote about mortals cultivating immortality. Alas, it doesn't suit the character. Why is this kind of person cultivating immortality? It's boring. Wouldn't it be better to just become an immortal?

It is very delicate, logically rigorous, and the plot is compact. It is a rare good book.

This is a good fairy tale, and the rating of 6.5 Is too low. The writing, plot, structure, suspense, details, and the control of human emotions are all good. Overall, it should get a score of 9 or above. The reason why the score is so low is probably related to the start. The background explanation at the beginning is too long and too long. For old fairy friends, it is all nonsense. Those who are impatient will probably just stop reading. To be honest, I only took a closer look after the protagonist appeared, and I basically didn't read it before. Unexpectedly, it gets more and more exciting.

It mainly focuses on human emotions and sophistication, and mostly contains conversations and other writings. The characters are quite full-bodied, and the protagonist also has shortcomings. The fight scenes looked good to me. The protagonist is not a good person, he is the kind of person who will retaliate for his anger, is petty, and does not want to suffer losses. Of course, this is limited to people with no background. What made me uncomfortable was that the protagonist was tricked by the second generation of immortals, but he acquiesced to being tricked on the grounds that he was a friend and had made sacrifices.

@Author, I have read dozens of chapters so far. The writing is very detailed. Although it is a bit slow and has minor bugs because it is too detailed, it is harmless and still good to read. But, but, I hope the author can study the original work again. The story you wrote about being seriously injured by a group of first-level broken mosquitoes + second-level mosquito kings and escaping in the Swamp of Lost Souls in the early stage of the Nascent Soul is so disgusting. Han Li didn't charge so hard. Come on, I have no money and can only give you a shout [laughing] I'm done chasing you now, waiting for updates. The author wrote about the Five Dragon Sea, and I thought the protagonist would follow the trend and go to the Star Sea. The writing of Wulonghai is very good, the power is described in detail, and no bugs were found. The current rating is 6., Maybe because the first 200 chapters are not good, but after 200 chapters it starts to be good, and after 500 chapters the level is obviously improved. A low score means that the front is not good-looking. If the score is too low, the front will not be able to stand, and there will be fewer people who can catch up to the back. Come on, author [Like]

Liu Yi Xiu Xian Ji, although he is still a donkey, with a whip and a hook, although he is still the same as before. But the rare fairy grass! Feel free to eat it, it is recommended to update 100,000 words a day ~ Hahahaha

Didn't this protagonist travel through time? Everyone knows about Han Paopao, but they don't know Qi Yunxiao. Hearing the Five Elements Reversal Formation, he couldn't think of Xin Ruyin, and even rushed into Yanjiabao.