I Made the Holy Grail War, and the Whole World Went Crazy for It

To be honest, it's better than I expected. The originally serious Holy Grail War was made into a game with a few entertainment anchors, which actually caused a wonderful chemical reaction. In addition, the author also has his own understanding. The heroic spirits are not limited to Dongmu's fixed characters, but FGO's All the servants are included, and the Holy Grail War is both funny and serious at the same time. My evaluation is that the future is promising. My suggestion is that the barrage comments can be streamlined, there can be more barrage at the climax of the story, and there can be less barrage during normal plots, etc.

The writing is great... But please give Jason a highlight! ! ! ! Obviously the setting of the Noble Phantasm is very NB, but it has not been used in FGO. Once it was the enemy position, maybe even the Noble Phantasm was not designed, and once it was the friendly position, but the Noble Phantasm was targeted and could not be used [laughing]

Very good, except that the protagonist is a bit redundant [face covering] There could be less chapters with the protagonist Generally speaking, the main focus of this book is the battle. Since the book is set for a game, it can bring together characters in the game who cannot fight in the animation, and the author's writing style can describe the scene without making the characters OOC. The occasional barrage can also adjust the atmosphere. I think it is worth reading [smile]

It's a very good Fate fanfic that makes me give it a five-star rating. The plot of different authors meeting and colliding through the game of chicken is not bad. Although it is obvious that other Holy Grail War venues will be opened later in the book, I don't know how the author made a difference from the current model. In short, the author continues to write Different servants will be on the stage with the players, and the barrage will be enough to make crazy comments. By the way, it is a pity that the narration of the melee archer comment instead of the barrage response will be given. The rest is that I hope the author will continue to write about the servants in detail. It is a pity that Achilles' dueling gun did not work. To avoid misunderstanding, let me say it again. The detailed description of servants refers to the same as the host's first round of the game. It not only reflects the combat power of the servants, but also has explanations about the noble phantoms, and also reflects the character design, and the fact that everyone has to lick their wives together. I hope that the author of the current round of games can write about Nero and Bartoli, the two wife servants. There are too many female servants waiting.

Xinadia is my belief, Xinadia is my answer! 😫 No! ... Xinadia is different... Only Xinadia is different——! 😡 Xinadia... Is different from anyone else. 😌 Because Xinadia's name... Is very nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it. 🤗 Xinadia is the true god of Luoxing. He chose this star, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the barren planet had a dancing heart. 🥰 He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and truly rejoices in all that He protects. 🥵 He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. 😄 Xinadia is the true god of Luoxing. He inscribes truth and humility into the soul, and the ignorant life emerges from confusion.

I feel like it's not that I can't accept the reality line at all. The main reason is that it's love at the beginning. The battle in our game is in full swing. As soon as the perspective changes, it goes back to the love that you pull me away from. There is no intense battle phase in reality, which means that the tension is broken. Moreover, the previous content may not have fully grasped the audience's idea of ​​reading. Everyone's expectations for this novel are not that slow-burning. I can't accept the slow rhythm of the emotional line, and if you have two lines, the slow update speed will make the rhythm look bad. The Zhenhun Street animation was originally a two-line animation. Although both lines are very exciting, and the foreshadowing of the two sides is eliminated together, it is really uncomfortable to watch in the middle. Ah, I want to watch this and that, and I feel like watching two animations that are updated every two weeks. It is really annoying. I regret it. I won't watch it now. The anime about password and Fsf hasn't come out yet. It spoiled me a lot. I'll watch it after I finish watching the anime.

Watching the real-life plot, I always feel that the protagonist wants to be the real-life cave king [face covering]

I have to say that in the template article of copying games, movies and animations for various competitions, the writing is very good. Or even if it is expanded to a game article, it is still well written. Especially in the online mode, there is no hard copying, but my own adaptation. I read it again. The shortcoming is that the writing was a bit green at the beginning, when Lao Ma first meets Du Mao Wang, and the situation is slightly ambiguous. I feel that the author has never been in love. The advantage is that most of the subsequent characters, the interactions between players and heroic spirits are written very well. Speaking of which, this is the first time I have seen such an interesting author write the second part. There are many good books that do not violate the world background. However, in modern cities where everyone is playing games, the second part of this book is not awkward but interesting. I have not seen that often. I feel that if I have the opportunity to run a group with the author or play a board game as a teammate, it will be very immersive.

I have already reviewed @Charybutis. I won't say much more. I just suggest that the author writes more stories about knowing how to participate in the war. The plot is memorized and the settings are clear. There are more inner dramas that appear to understand the world view. I feel that the viewing experience will be good. Tomato has seen such a novel that has the temperament of the Holy Grail Group [Like]

Very nice to look at. But I was wondering if I could add one. And a heroic spirit. There is a great understanding or a very amazing moment. Or the kind with heavy emotions. When calling him again. It will add a momentary memory. But it shouldn't be possible [exploration]