JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Starting by Saving Jolyne

This is the best JoJo fanfiction I've ever read. The plot is reasonable, the Stand abilities are strong but not sinister, it doesn't break up character pairings, and everyone is equally powerful. It even reasonably brings together all six generations of JoJo. It's truly excellent.

It's super good! Not only are there no unsolvable Stand abilities, but each Stand has a traceable origin, so it doesn't feel overly dramatic. The plot is reasonable, but I felt the Stand Memory part was a bit inappropriate.

This book, even if it's not the pinnacle of JoJo, definitely ranks in the top ten. The author has clearly put a lot of effort into JoJo, which makes this book different from other JoJo fanfics on Tomato. He grasped the core message JoJo wanted to convey and expressed it in the same way. Although some people might not find it enjoyable, many parts of the story gave me a real JoJo feeling. Anyway, keep it up! I'm really looking forward to it, hehe.

Overall it's good, but the Stand battles are a bit too rushed. The protagonist encounters Stands several times in one day, giving the impression that these Stands could easily team up but instead choose to fight solo.

It's definitely the best JoJo story right now. I've read up to the latest chapter. The only downside is the infrequent updates... The plot is fantastic, and Marco's character development is excellent. If I had to point out a flaw... The fact that we haven't seen Marco's own abilities yet is barely one (after all, the protagonist always relying on others isn't ideal). Of course, we're only at Act 2 so far, so I trust the author.

This book is really good! The protagonist's Stand, the Wanderer's, abilities are also very interesting. The plot is fast-paced, and the villains' powerlessness is very strong. Will the protagonist learn the Cavalry Spin later on? Could the Wanderer ride a terrifying beast and the protagonist use the Wanderer to perform the Cavalry Spin? School starts soon, has everyone finished their homework? 🤔🤔

I really like it, and I'd love to read the sixth book, but there are almost none that are well-written. Yours is excellent, so I'm giving it five stars. Honestly, it's a pity. It's very well written, but I can't stand the pairings that don't match the original work. JoJo is more about strategic battles; there's basically no situation where a team is dating, and it's not allowed.

The novel is alright; I really like the theme, especially since it's a rare JoJo's Bizarre Adventure fanfic. Saving Jolyne was a plus, but there's no female lead, so I'll just give it a good review and run. 😂

Time deletion removes approximately 10 seconds of time from the real world, for example, jumping directly from the 1st second to the 11th second. Time stop freezes time in the first second, and real-world time does not flow. It does not mean that from the first second to the third second, everyone else is unable to move except him.

The plot has a slightly faster pace than JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, with plenty of action and occasional comedic moments and recreations of famous scenes. The fight scenes are vividly depicted, and the intellectual battles are just right, not overly complex. It's quite good. However, I personally feel it lacks some of the quirky metaphors typical of JoJo. Overall, it's a very good JoJo fanfic.