Transmigrating Into the World of Renters, the System Helps Me Make Up for Regrets

I used to think that Zhaoyang fell into chaos in his private life after breaking up with Jian Wei, but the comments I saw on Douyin today were that he had been hanging out in nightclubs when he was in college, and Jian Wei followed him to stop him from messing around. The comment was that Zhaoyang abducted someone else's daughter who was in college, and took her daughter to nightclubs. He didn't have a serious job, and he was still holding on to his so-called music dream. I looked at the tenant fics and there are a lot of people who have Soyang as the main character, and the ones with a single female protagonist can only attract people who like that one female protagonist.

When you first read it, you will find that the writing of this novel is very immature, but it is a new author, and it is also a fan novel that everyone expects. The author also works hard to show the story in his heart, so I personally think it is quite good overall, so I encourage it with a 5-star review. There is a lot of room for improvement, author, cheers. The writing style is getting better and better now, and the character descriptions have a sense of delicacy of girls. The author has really made great progress, and it also satisfies the fan imagination of tank novels. The shortcoming may be that the protagonist is too perfect except for being the "first straight man in the universe" [laugh][laugh][laugh]

Brother, you have brought life to these characters written by Tank. I have only read Chapter 8 for the time being. Whether it is Xiao Ai's characterization, CC description, or description of other situations, I think you have written very well. Keep up the good work. This book will be fine as long as it continues to be semi-literary.

Is it a harem? If so, can the beards of the heroines be cut off in advance? [Smile]

A good book. I have added this book to my bookshelf since it has more than 40 chapters, but when I came back to read it yesterday, I only updated it to more than 100 chapters, which is quite slow. But it's worth mentioning that this book is arguably the best one I've seen in a tenant harem. Other fans either have pure love and only redeem one person, or they are brothers with the fake person Zhaoyang, which is not to my taste. (I felt physically uncomfortable when I saw Chaoyang and Jian Wei become a couple. The female tank was well portrayed, but the male protagonist, especially Chaoyang, was like a fake). A book similar to this one is The Taste of the World is Qing Huan, but in that book the male protagonist still had psychological problems even in the later stages, and it felt like something was stuck in his throat. And this book is great. The interaction between the heroine and the hero is sweet. Chaoyang only appears in one chapter and does not appear again (which is good). The protagonist has a sense of loneliness in a different world but it is not emphasized on a large scale... Author, keep writing, I also hope there is someone who can save them. You can slowly polish the plot, I will wait, whether it takes one year or two years, I will be fine.

The author is amazing. Great👍 Keep up the good work. I feel that the emotions are okay. I don't know much about the characters, but I will change them a lot in the second creation. I look pretty good, but maybe I haven't seen these before. I only know a little bit about it, so it's a bit inconsistent. There are too many, but everyone is actually quite distinct. There won't be that kind of facial makeup. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that the heroines are in different novels. It may be better to balance the plots of each heroine 👍

It's very interesting. When will the main character start acting? I want to watch a sweet love story. Is there still Yan Yan to accept? I haven't watched the 26-year-old female tenant, but I have a good impression of this character, and I hope she can have a good outcome with the protagonist.

Tomato's favorite protagonist in novels. He has a system, money, and still a kind heart. I don't dislike novels with multiple female protagonists, because it is too difficult to write a single female protagonist, but at least the protagonist must have feelings, not just multiple female protagonists. I like the protagonist of this book very much, and he looks very comfortable. Because I am also this kind of person, even if one day I have the system, strength and money, I will still keep my heart. In my opinion, those protagonists who have the system or money and suddenly become eating, drinking, whoring, gambling and bulldozing a bunch of women are no longer the original ones, they have been taken over by their inner demons and removed from their shells! I have read thousands of novels and still prefer positive protagonists, because I feel that there are very few good people in the world, and I really don't want to read novels with protagonists with a lot of negative emotions. The protagonists I like are those who decisively kill the bad guys and eradicate them, and help ordinary people or good people when they meet someone who has the ability. Of course, it is not the kind of helping the elderly. And for the kind of truly kind people, positive energy is really important. If a person is full of negative energy in his heart, it will distort his outlook on life.

The writing is a bit immature, but the setting of redemption for all the characters is too gentle. The author carefully captures the brokenness and regret of each heroine, allowing them to break away from the haze of the past and move towards perfection. The writing is extremely empathetic, and each healing message is delicate and sincere. After reading it, I feel wrapped in warmth. It is a very rare and heart-warming article. I've touched on them all so far. The latter part is a bit difficult. I hope I can write it down.

Full of dusk, 5 stars [Sending my heart] I wanted to comment before I even read the latest chapter. The writing was a bit shaky at first, but then it got better. This kind of writing is great for new authors. After reading a lot of tenant fanfics, persistence is actually the most valuable thing. Xiao Ai's character design is the best, followed by CC. In fact, some business aspects can be added. After all, there is a system and time travel, and you can use the heroine's background to enter the game in advance. I personally belong to Jian Wei. For her, you don't have to take into account other people's opinions. She can help the male protagonist with everything. This process is also the city in the sky that she has been pursuing all her life. Author, you are describing the city in the sky, that ideal and beautiful world. Keep at it, come on @a lucky person. In this city of desire, you are the last belief.