Xianxia**

[Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] The author writes the book very well, the story content is clear and attractive, the characters are vivid, the pace is fast, and it is not procrastinating. It is a good book and worth recommending!

Good-looking, wonderfully written, rigorously structured, worth following It's a very interesting story. I was fascinated by it as I read it. It's highly recommended.

A very good book, from the first chapter to the fifth chapter, the general content. Chapter 1: Encountering beauty during time travel and making an oolong mistake. Yunxi, a veteran game fan in the 21st century, complained about the outdated plot and setting loopholes in the Xianxia game. He was hit by the bright light of the computer screen and traveled through time. Waking up in an antique scene, I mistakenly thought it was the filming set of a costume drama. Later, he witnessed the young girl Wan Ruqingyang being surrounded by gangsters. Yunxi wanted to be a hero to save the beauty but accidentally tripped and knocked back the leader of the gangster. Wanru Qingyang took the opportunity to fight off the other gangsters. After the two met for the first time, they were attacked by a flaming fire beast and were forced to flee into a cave. Chapter 2: The mysterious cave hides mysteries. The cave was dark and damp, and the two discovered mysterious runes shining with blue light on the cave wall. Yunxi relied on the game memory to touch the runes in a specific order, triggering the mechanism to open the hidden treasure box, but was sucked in by the treasure box's suction, and woke up on a fairy island. Although the fairy island has beautiful scenery such as colorful auspicious clouds and exotic flowers and plants, there is a hidden danger. The two encounter colorful poisonous bees that block out the sky. Yun Xi uses the pepper she carries to fight off the poisonous bees, and then discovers an ancient temple. Chapter 3: Exploring the ancient temple is dangerous. Entering the ancient temple, the interior is dimly lit, with a huge statue of gods in the center and vague murals of ancient fairy tales painted on the surrounding walls. The two people triggered the mechanism while exploring, and a large number of stone figurines poured out from under the statue. The stone figurines were hard and endless. Yun Xi discovered that the joints of the stone figurines were fragile, so she and Wan Ruqingyang jointly attacked the joints of the stone figurines and reached a stalemate. At the critical moment, Yunxi noticed that the eyes of the statue moved with the movements of the stone figurines, prompting Wanru Qingyang to attack the eyes of the statue, successfully cracked the mechanism, and later discovered the stairs leading to the underground. Chapter 4: The underground mysterious realm appears. Going down the stairs, the environment was damp and cold. The two came to a spacious cave. There was a faint blue pool in the center of the cave, and a strange "ticking" sound came from the pool. When he got close to the pool, he encountered a strong suction force, and then a huge blue toad emerged from the pool, and the toad sprayed corrosive venom. Yunxi recalled the contents of the temple murals about defeating monsters with water-based swords, and found the luminous sword with Wanruqingyang. Wanruqingyang held the sword against the toad. Yunxi took the opportunity to attack the toad's eyes, and finally defeated the toad and obtained a jade pendant engraved with strange symbols. Chapter 5: The secret pattern of the jade pendant leads the way. The two of them studied the symbols on the jade pendant. Yunxi found that the arrangement of the symbols corresponded to the sequence of the strange light and shadow flashing on the fairy island, and speculated that it was a guide line. I groped along the cave wall, and the jade pendant trembled in the dense stalagmites. I removed the stalagmites and found a narrow passage. Encountering three forks in the road, I chose the corresponding fork according to the symbols of the jade pendant. After going deeper, I heard the melodious music of the piano, and finally saw a woman in white playing the guqin. The woman noticed the arrival of the two and asked them about their purpose. Yunxi said that she was following the jade pendant's guidance to find a way to leave the fairy island.

The protagonist steps into the world of martial arts heroes. The plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is cleverly designed, and it is both funny and refreshing. The protagonist shows off his skills in a fantasy setting. The author's writing is smooth, the characters are vivid, and the relaxed and humorous narrative, combined with fantasy elements, is a good choice to pass the time. We look forward to subsequent updates.

Give the author five stars: 1. The writing style of the novel is very fresh, giving me a fairy tale-like feeling, just like the adventure stories I saw when I was a child, but it was changed to the version of the Oriental Fairy Tale, haha. 2. The novel is well written, and the descriptions are very detailed. The characters' language, actions, expressions, and environment are all very detailed. 3. The plot of the novel tends to be traditional, but it just needs to be consistent with a large number of words. 4. In terms of look and feel, there are many long paragraphs, which can be improved. Each paragraph should be limited to three to five lines. I believe it will make readers more comfortable. 5. Creation is not easy, support each other [love]

A very vivid novel about cultivating immortality. The background of the story is solid, the plot is vivid, and the growth process of the male and female protagonists has ups and downs, making it a long-lasting aftertaste. I decisively added a bookshelf to enjoy different life stories at the author's update speed.

A different kind of Xianxia guy, unconventional, interesting, and completely surprising at the beginning, making you want to keep watching! The writing is outstanding, especially the description of the fights, which are full of scene, and the banter between the characters is interesting and funny, and the tense atmosphere can be resolved so humorously! The characters are well created, the protagonist is likable, and the other characters have distinct personalities and are not tool men! It has been shown before that the author has strong writing skills, and it is indeed a work of one million words! In short, this is a novel that is underestimated by Tomato. Com's rating system and is totally worth reading! Must give a five-star rating!

The plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and the writing style is delicate and moving. The plot has ups and downs, and the foreshadowing is exquisite and interlocking. The ending is shocking and full of stamina. It can be said to be a masterpiece full of sincerity!

A very interesting story with a unique background setting. As the story progresses, I can't help but worry about the fate of Yunxi and Wanru. Watching them grow step by step, I am full of expectations. . Worth recommending. .

Taste the true flavor of Xia Xia in the midst of laughter——Comment on "The Legend of Xia Xia Laughing" "The Laughing Legend of Xia Xia" uses light and brisk writing to construct the routines of Xia Xia. The text is as smooth and natural as flowing clouds and water, with no sense of ambiguity and accumulation. It can be read in one go. The book breaks out of the melancholy framework of the traditional fairy tale and blends the adventures of the fairy tale with the fireworks of the city. The characters are vivid and lively, and the jokes are hidden in the game of fairy magic. It not only shows the mystery and weirdness of the fairy tale world, but also contains the warmth and transparency of the fireworks of the human world. The narrative rhythm is relaxed and moderate, spreading the true meaning of spiritual practice amidst laughter and scolding, and using popular and smooth writing to break the heavy feeling of the fairy tale theme, allowing readers to immerse themselves in the various aspects of the fairy road and the interest of the world in a relaxed reading. It can be called a decompressing and enjoyable fairy tale masterpiece.

The writing is superb. I really like the author's fairy tale imagination, and the humor in the writing also shows the brilliance of the plot. Moreover, the 1 million-word Xianxia novel that has persisted to this day, the characters have gradually reflected their humanistic colors in the continuous development. At this moment, the characters in the book have come alive on the page, with unique colors.

While flying with the sword, I'm thinking about the meal in the cafeteria. I'm talking about you and me! The protagonist of this book has no routine of Long Aotian, he is witty and lovable, and his clever mind can always win unexpectedly. What's even better is that every supporting character is vivid, has a story, and interacts with the protagonist in sparks, jointly building a flesh-and-blood and joyful world of cultivation. The rhythm is relaxed and moderate, tense fights and hilarious daily life are cleverly interspersed. Under the humorous shell, there are more subtle thoughts on spiritual practice and life, making people laugh and have a long aftertaste. The author's writing style is exquisite, his psychological portrayal and environmental description are skillful, his world structure is rigorous, and his sincerity can be seen everywhere. This is a masterpiece of fairy tales that can make people relax, laugh, and occasionally think deeply. It is a stress-free and long-lasting read. It is a five-star recommendation. You will not lose money if you invest in it! Great book, great to watch! ! !

This fairy-themed novel is very well written, with a clear structure, delicate characterization, well-described scenes, and very smooth writing. At the same time, the plot is compact and not protracted. The more you read, the more you want to read. It's really great! ! !

A very decent fantasy novel, it can be said that it has all the relevant elements including time travel, fairy mountains, monsters, elves, weapon spirits, formations, infuriating energy, and magic weapons. What surprises me is the author's persistence. The novel has been updated to over 1 million words, and is still being serialized. It really takes a lot of courage and patience to do it. Just like the novel I'm writing now, which has less than 300,000 words and barely 1,000 chapters, I already feel a little discouraged. Every time I press down on it, the thought of giving up will come up again soon after. Creation is not easy, perseverance is even harder! I believe that the author's stubbornness in enduring loneliness and forging ahead will definitely bring him unexpected gains at some point in the future. I also hope that like the author, I can stick to my novel and give it its own ending regardless of whether anyone is reading it or not. Come on, author, and encourage you together!

This is the 21st century game fan Yunxi's time-traveling fairy tale. The opening chapter "Hero saves beauty" is full of laughs. The subsequent adventures in the treacherous forest and the exploration of the blood cave are full of suspense, and the rune mechanisms and mysterious murals are exquisitely polished, adding to the mystery and showing the reality of the world. This long novel combines comedy with high energy, and has a good pace. It is a masterpiece of fairy tales that becomes more and more enjoyable the more you read it. But each paragraph is too long, so I recommend dividing it into smaller paragraphs.

"Xian Xia Xiao Zhuan" is so to my liking! At the beginning, I bumped into a gangster to save a beautiful girl and made an own goal. I used pepper to kill poisonous bees and relied on game experience to break runes. This idea made me laugh until I cried! The interaction between Yun Xi and Wan Ru Qingyang is sweet and funny, and the plot of fighting monsters and finding spiritual beads is also very interesting, and you can't stop at all! The author will update it soon. I really want to know what outrageous and funny things I will encounter later when I look for the remaining spirit beads. When will the blood demon conspiracy be solved? Come on, come on, I am waiting for the update!

The rhythm is tight and the suspense is high! From the moment I turned the first page, I was hooked and read it almost in one sitting. The author's layout ability is outstanding, the foreshadowing is cleverly laid, and the reversal is shocking enough.

When you open it and read it, you can feel the flexibility of the author's writing. There is a classical and elegant charm flowing through the text, and as the plot progresses, there are also cleverly interspersed light-hearted and humorous sections, breaking the possible dullness of the fairy tale theme.

You'll be addicted as soon as you read it! This fairy tale turned the world of cultivation into a "happy comedian" If you are tired of watching the traditional fairy tales of bitter hatred and decisive killing, then congratulations, you have found a treasure! With its unique light comedy style and solid narrative skills, this anti-routine decompression fairy tale successfully breaks through the siege and brings a refreshing reading experience. This is not a traditional fairy, this is the "fireworks on earth" in the world of cultivation. The author cleverly combines the dangers and treacherousness of the fairy road with the lively fireworks of the market, creating a wonderful chemical reaction. The book contains grand scenes of magic showdowns, which are full of visuals and make people's adrenaline soar; there are also hilarious daily moments of disciples fighting each other, with frequent golden sentences that make people laugh. The intense and exciting adventures are always wrapped in a strong atmosphere of fireworks, which makes the aloof world of cultivating immortals instantly feel down to earth and become real and tangible, as if the one flying with the sword while thinking about the meal in the cafeteria is you and me. The characters are vivid and all the members are "interested" The protagonist of this book is by no means the stereotyped Long Aotian. He/she is witty and lovable, has a unique brain circuit, and can always resolve crises in unexpected ways. What's even more rare is that the supporting characters in the book are by no means tools to promote the plot. They each have their own tempers and stories. Their interactions with the protagonist sparkle, and together they build a flesh-and-blood, joyful world of cultivation. The rhythm is relaxed and moderate, and the true taste of spiritual practice is hidden in the humor. The author's control of rhythm is top-notch, with a degree of relaxation. After a tense fight, there may be a ridiculous sect's daily life, which can effectively adjust the reader's emotions. But this book is not just funny. Under its humorous core, there are often unique thoughts on spiritual practice and life. While laughing, people can also taste a taste of growth and the true meaning of spiritual practice. Delicate writing style, rigorous structure, and sincere work It is particularly worth mentioning that the writing style of this book is very delicate, especially in the psychological portrayal and environmental description of the protagonist before and after the time travel, which shows the author's profound narrative skills. From the subtle cases to the logical construction of the overall world, you can feel the author's intention and rigor. This kind of reverence for creation makes the whole book full of high-end quality. All in all, this is a masterpiece of fairy tales that can make you laugh easily and occasionally make you think. If you're looking for a great book that's both stress-free and long-lasting, it's definitely worth your time. Five-star recommendation, you won't lose money if you invest!

A very excellent oriental fairy novel! The story is exciting! Super pretty! The author has rich imagination, profound writing skills, smooth and natural writing style, vivid and interesting plots, lifelike characters and delicate depictions. Good work, worth recommending!

The author's writing skills are really stable: the fighting scenes are written like watching a movie, and the characters are not "tools". The protagonist is lovable, and even the supporting characters are vivid in their own way. Just watching them bicker is interesting.

It can be called a masterpiece of anti-routine fairy tales to relieve stress! The vicious-tongued heroine Luo Qingge's path to immortality is filled with laughter throughout. The setting of enlightening enlightenment with cold jokes and defeating enemies with irony is very imaginative. There is no sad sadistic heart of traditional immortals, only the exhilaration of tearing up the conspiracy and making a comeback against the odds while laughing. The text is brisk and not cluttered, the jokes are hidden in the game of immortality, and the plot of venomously criticizing the hypocrisy of cultivation is thoroughly enjoyable. You can unlock new ways of cultivating immortality in a relaxed reading, which is perfect for reading in your spare time! Recommended for book lovers to read.

A teenager who is a game fan complains about the game and goes straight into the world of Xianxia. The visuals are so strong that it feels like watching a movie. The heroine is beautiful and swishy and draws a sword, which is very interesting. The writing style is down to earth and it is not tiring to read. It is a perfect tool for fishing!

The plot is very exciting. Every time I see this kind of fairy tale, I admire the author's imagination and writing style for being able to write such a complex and interesting story. I especially like the heroine's chivalrous and charming appearance [sending my heart]

It's very beautiful. I can't stop watching it. It's a rare and good work [Like][Like][Like]

The plot of this novel has ups and downs, the characters are deeply portrayed, and every turn is gripping. The author uses delicate writing to outline an intoxicating world, which is endlessly memorable after reading. It can be called a rare masterpiece in recent times.

From the urban gamers complaining about the game to falling into the real world of immortal heroes, the opening chapter uses "screen glare" to complete the fantasy travel, with a tight rhythm. Yunxi's dissatisfaction with the game setting forms an interesting contrast with the real situation. The antique scene description echoes his shocked reaction, which not only buries the suspense of "why he traveled through time", but also makes the setting of "game fans become immortals" full of sense of substitution.

The author's writing is really good. The storyline is really imaginative. The different time travels and different plots are very eye-catching and beautiful. The description of the environment and the plot narration are very delicate. It is worth following up.

Oriental fairy tale novels are actually very difficult to master, but the author's writing style is very good, and many of the fighting scenes are very well described, exciting and graphic! The whole plot of the story is very well controlled, as if you are on the scene. Moreover, the author is also very good at writing. Many of the metaphors in the novel are strange and touching, and many of the detailed descriptions can be imagined through the screen. The pace is fast and exciting, making your palms sweat while reading. Highly recommended! !!

The author's writing style is fluent, relaxed and humorous, which will make you want to keep reading. Moreover, the world of cultivating immortals depicted in this book is also very vivid and interesting. He uses humorous language to describe different paths to immortality. It is worth reading! Moreover, the author's fighting scenes are very captivating and beautiful!