When the Game Invades, My Loyal Instructor Spoils Me Rotten

It's really a life-saver. It's the first time I've seen a book that's so friendly to Wan Chai. It reminds me of the days when I was chasing food at Ya Bar. This kind of silly straight man design really feels like a real person. I already feel like I've talked to a hundred straight men. [Love]

It's good-looking. It's essentially a sweet article, with a gay feeling. It's not a traditional female-male couple, but it's also very good-looking. The talent of the protagonist has the potential to be crushed numerically. However, the description of the article is more realistic, and it doesn't have the numerical satisfaction of a cool online game article. It's definitely worth reading as a love story between two men, and it's so cool to watch this unrequited love dog! Especially since this is a two-way secret love, it's delicious!

It's super interesting, really beautiful, and the setting is very novel. Is it because it's a new book? I saw the rating was only 6.9. It's particularly funny. Although the protagonist has a background, it doesn't give people the impression of Long Aotian. Instead, it makes people feel like he is a cute little pervert. The protagonist Gong is an honest person, and he will do whatever he is asked to do. It's super delicious, super beautiful, and the author is great. If you're tired, just write a few articles and take a break. It's totally not enough!

First of all, the setting is novel. Recently, the game invasion theme has actually gradually developed, but the world view created by this author is still quite special. The Immortal Dynasty and the Small Thousand Worlds, the Weaver Girl Weaves the Bleeding Moon and the arrival of the Blood Moon are similar to the ancient Agricultural Officers who control the plants in each small world, control the food and combat power, and transport them to the Immortal Dynasty occupying the top of the pyramid for support. In this world, a profession that is inconspicuous in other worldviews controls the lifeblood of the small world. Secondly, this is a refreshing article in the orthodox sense. The protagonist has a big interest, and the male mother he wants is quickly obtained. To be honest, the male mother's mind-reading charade is probably just to accept the protagonist's stream of consciousness harassment... ("▔□▔) (By the way, this is a double-male novel. If you can't accept it, please read the novel for simplicity before appreciating it) Finally, the author is active and actively updates. Moreover, since it is a new article, it feels like this guy has never been online before and is replying to comments here and there. In addition, although the writing style is a bit immature, but ignoring these, it can be regarded as a good pastime in Yang Persimmon as a transitional novel or a novel waiting for serial updates.

The characters are pretty good and the world view is interesting. It's rare to see such an obvious crooked novel, so I had unlimited tolerance for him before reading it. . Unfortunately, there are too many logical loopholes. In the early stage, the relationship between the protagonist and Lu developed abruptly. The previously interesting mind-reading ability was basically abandoned by the author after 100 chapters. After that, the author gave the protagonist a golden finger after raising the Pothos Fairy. It felt like the plot progressed quickly, which led to I just crossed out a lot of interesting settings because it was unnecessary. The author wrote too many abilities for the protagonist (including the monster strain), and the readers simply couldn't remember them. Moreover, these abilities were basically not reflected in the plot. You only need to know that the protagonist is very good. . . In the middle period, the author began to add some world view settings. It is actually quite interesting. If written in detail, the effect will definitely be very good, but the author's writing is a bit messy, and the world view also conflicts with the instructor character you originally created in the land. From the point of Hancheng, there is basically no scene in the military camp. Later, Lu Zhen only had a set of military uniform characters [face covering] Then we get to Chapter 200. So far I have accepted it well, but what is the significance of arranging the plot of Hu Meng Shen Sang? That is, the protagonist transforms into the appearance of Hu Meng Shen Sang and then becomes stuffed with Lu Jiang Jiang, and then Lu does not know that he is the protagonist. . . To be honest, I can't stand it here. . I really can't understand it, and don't tell me that Lu's body or subconscious realizes that he is the protagonist. . . Lu didn't realize it until twenty or thirty chapters later. . . Then the author hastily wraps up the story. In fact, the author's worldview can be written very widely, and the details can be written well with the author's writing style (I personally think that the author would be better able to write this book if he was born in a flower market or p station👀). However, due to life or the author's personal reasons, the length of the book is very short, and many places are described in a hurry. I can only say that I am looking forward to the author's next article.

It's the first time I've read 1m0s's novel after reading Tomato's novels for so long. It's so nice and interesting [shy][shy]. I really like this setting where Xiao Xiao has a lot of mental activity but is very serious on the surface😍😍. It's also very easy to substitute, because I am a person like this in real life [smile][smile], so I felt very happy when I read the whole article. I felt like I saw the handsome guy in my real life [shy][shy][shy]. I originally thought that the rating was so low and I was going to cross it out. After reading it, I found that the whole article was very well written and there was nothing poisonous about it. At first, I thought it was a rural type of real farming novel. The setting of cultivating spiritual plants is quite novel and the emotional plot is very well written. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] Look forward to the author's new works with two male protagonists [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's super, super good to read. I was almost put off by the introduction. At that time, I read several books and gave them up. Then I tried reading this one. It was shocking and delicious. The author's writing is also very good and not too jerky. However, the ending was a bit rushed and left many holes unfilled. It's not enough. Please continue. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] To me, the whole book has no surprises. The sweet love and the attack and defense settings are so delicious.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks really, really, really good. Let me dream back to the time when I watched the long upgrade stream. And the writing is also good. The storyline is very new and the world view is also very novel. Really nice to look at. Very innovative. What I like most is innovation in novels. It's really beautifully written.

Dahuang Wanzi, who is particularly interested in Lu Ying's inner drama, and Lu Ying, who has changed from a straight man to seducing him and making him miss him, hehe... Hehe... Hehe... [Adoration] [Admiration] [Admiration] It's so good! ! ! [Adoration][Admiration] Love watching! ! ! [Adoration][Admiration] The author writes more and writes more! ! ! ! [Shy][shy]

I have read Chapter 20, and I feel that the setting is quite good, but the reading is so dry that I can't continue reading. (I read the book line by line, and read carefully.) It would be better to skip and read.