[Mid-level martial arts] [Single heroine] [Adopted daughter] [The heroine is a little wicked] [Yandere] [The heroine pursues the male lead] [Forbidden master-disciple romance] [No System] [Traditional] [Mostly everyday life] [A touch of cosmic horror]
To repay a debt of gratitude, Zhou Xuanmo takes the baby girl from the dying empress and fights his way through the encirclement with her in his arms. Thus begins his long journey of raising a child.
But the little girl's intentions may not be entirely innocent...
A new emperor, the power struggles between nations and sects, and all manner of jianghu forces are locked in a contest of their own, while conspiracies take shape.
In this perilous world, Zhou Xuanmo's past is still catching up with him...
Simply write a book review.
Let's talk about the conclusion first. I think I get full marks for being a hidden yandere.
The heroine is quite jealous, which is delicious. There are also many small theaters in my mind, which I also like. Let's talk about the male protagonist. He seems to be very strong, but he doesn't seem to be a grand master? (The female protagonist doesn't know when she can reverse it, and the male protagonist feels that her talent is a bit too abnormal, and there seems to be a little bit of resistance).
Let's talk about development, now we talk about their travels, and then the heroine's growing desire for the hero is also a highlight, but it seems that she is still far away from explosion. I hope there will be opportunities to eat more tofu secretly in the future (the hero is so strong that I find it difficult to drug him).
Finally, there is actually a single female protagonist. There are so many female pairs and the male protagonist admires but none of them are in love. It's good, lest everyone watch the single female protagonist and can't let the female partner quarrel.
After reading it, as a rare hidden yandere, this book is really a pity. I feel that there is still too little writing about the heroine. This book gives me the feeling that it has a good skeleton but not a good body. It would be much better to add the daily life of the heroine and the hero as an adjustment. All the male protagonist's teammates appeared one by one to recall when it was too cheap. I couldn't stand it and stopped for a while. I didn't expect that it would be over when I came back. It was too rushed later on, but fortunately the heroine ate it. Although the eating appearance was not very good, it was far from the scene I imagined. (Do you know how weird it is for a yandere novel to spend most of the time reading the male protagonist's memories [laughs awkwardly]. To be honest, I really didn't care much about the male protagonist's past. In the end, so many people took up so much space, and the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was lost later)
I am not shy about saying that the storyline is very good and novel. The writing needs to be polished and the characters three-dimensional.
I looked at the rating and found it was 6.3. Not many people who gave negative reviews actually read it. It was quite annoying. This had nothing to do with the book. It was just that I didn't like the structure of the article and just quit. I had to give it a bad review.
If the author can see it, I hope that the later abuse will end in a good way
The author insists not to stop updating, otherwise there will be no traffic at all. This is a good book, don't be buried.
The painting style is quite novel, and you can see the youthfulness, but also the growth.
I'm not very good at judging, but I personally think it's pretty good.
She's not a yandere at first, but a yandere she gradually becomes.
There is a sense of gradual progress, should it be said or not, is it worthy of cultivation?
But when I was reading book reviews, one person pointed out
So this book review ends here. Come on, author, I'm quite optimistic. If there is enough traffic, there should be a score of more than 8 o'clock.
It was okay in the front, but why did you let yourself go in the back?
This book... The plot is very new, but the plot is a bit vague in some places, you can read it,,, it's worth reading, it's not a loss if you get into it.
It's normal for a good-looking love line to heat up slowly, not the kind of thing that happens as soon as it starts.
The setting is good, but the plot about the growth of master and apprentice is still not enough, and the ending feels a bit rushed, but overall it is a book worth reading, and there is too little content about them being together later, which is not enough.
Um, is it a good ending or a bad ending? I'm afraid it'll be so cruel and bad that my liver will hurt.
I feel that I have a general understanding of the plot. I feel that it is still in the early stages and not many people are watching it. I am afraid that the ending will be discontinued [Start]
It's good to watch and worth recommending. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot.
Simply write a book review. Let's talk about the conclusion first. I think I get full marks for being a hidden yandere. The heroine is quite jealous, which is delicious. There are also many small theaters in my mind, which I also like. Let's talk about the male protagonist. He seems to be very strong, but he doesn't seem to be a grand master? (The female protagonist doesn't know when she can reverse it, and the male protagonist feels that her talent is a bit too abnormal, and there seems to be a little bit of resistance). Let's talk about development, now we talk about their travels, and then the heroine's growing desire for the hero is also a highlight, but it seems that she is still far away from explosion. I hope there will be opportunities to eat more tofu secretly in the future (the hero is so strong that I find it difficult to drug him). Finally, there is actually a single female protagonist. There are so many female pairs and the male protagonist admires but none of them are in love. It's good, lest everyone watch the single female protagonist and can't let the female partner quarrel. After reading it, as a rare hidden yandere, this book is really a pity. I feel that there is still too little writing about the heroine. This book gives me the feeling that it has a good skeleton but not a good body. It would be much better to add the daily life of the heroine and the hero as an adjustment. All the male protagonist's teammates appeared one by one to recall when it was too cheap. I couldn't stand it and stopped for a while. I didn't expect that it would be over when I came back. It was too rushed later on, but fortunately the heroine ate it. Although the eating appearance was not very good, it was far from the scene I imagined. (Do you know how weird it is for a yandere novel to spend most of the time reading the male protagonist's memories [laughs awkwardly]. To be honest, I really didn't care much about the male protagonist's past. In the end, so many people took up so much space, and the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was lost later)
I am not shy about saying that the storyline is very good and novel. The writing needs to be polished and the characters three-dimensional. I looked at the rating and found it was 6.3. Not many people who gave negative reviews actually read it. It was quite annoying. This had nothing to do with the book. It was just that I didn't like the structure of the article and just quit. I had to give it a bad review. If the author can see it, I hope that the later abuse will end in a good way The author insists not to stop updating, otherwise there will be no traffic at all. This is a good book, don't be buried.
The painting style is quite novel, and you can see the youthfulness, but also the growth. I'm not very good at judging, but I personally think it's pretty good. She's not a yandere at first, but a yandere she gradually becomes. There is a sense of gradual progress, should it be said or not, is it worthy of cultivation? But when I was reading book reviews, one person pointed out So this book review ends here. Come on, author, I'm quite optimistic. If there is enough traffic, there should be a score of more than 8 o'clock.
It was okay in the front, but why did you let yourself go in the back?
This book... The plot is very new, but the plot is a bit vague in some places, you can read it,,, it's worth reading, it's not a loss if you get into it.
It's normal for a good-looking love line to heat up slowly, not the kind of thing that happens as soon as it starts.
The setting is good, but the plot about the growth of master and apprentice is still not enough, and the ending feels a bit rushed, but overall it is a book worth reading, and there is too little content about them being together later, which is not enough.
Um, is it a good ending or a bad ending? I'm afraid it'll be so cruel and bad that my liver will hurt.
I feel that I have a general understanding of the plot. I feel that it is still in the early stages and not many people are watching it. I am afraid that the ending will be discontinued [Start]
It's good to watch and worth recommending. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot.