The Moon on the Page Where Love Begins

At 5 o'clock in the morning, I finished reading it in one sitting. I really like the heroine's character. She loves herself, knows how to be consistent, is not coy, dares to love and hate, is mature and intelligent, and has become the life I long for. The love between the male and female protagonists is also very exciting. The process of falling in love and further falling in love is just right. The whole plot is very smooth. The way of life revealed in the text gave me a lot of inspiration. I can see that the author is a person with his own thoughts and opinions. It is worth reading. I will recommend this book to others in the future. I give it a five-star rating! I will continue to read the author's other works in the future. The writing is particularly good [love] [love] [love]

Everyone, come on! Bring it on! Believe me, it's worth 9.5 Points Totally a potential stock. I like Teruyue × Ying Er. I like it very much. The author is really good at writing. The heroine has a generous personality, can joke, and has a really high emotional intelligence. In the article, there is a woman who seems to be washing her hands before eating. She thought she was drinking. However, the man took the initiative and pointed at her arm. The heroine understood that there were several people at the time. Then the heroine joked: I'm sorry, I just entered the city yesterday and I haven't understood the rules in your city yet. Including several times later, she is really good at it. The male protagonist is also great. The author has set it up to be unclean, but there are very few descriptions of the male protagonist's impurity in the article, only two or three times when we first met. Since the male protagonist started to be interested in the female protagonist, he drank but stopped playing. Okay! Hey guys, I'm a clumsy reader, so when I come across this book, I might as well open it and read two or three chapters first! ! !

Help! Although I have only read a few chapters! But I think this book is absolutely beautiful! The storyline is in line with my taste, and the character of the heroine is also very good. She is not nosy, but also very smart and generous. I like this character very much! The male protagonist is the kind of rich second-generation prodigal son that I like, and I hope the author will update it more! I hope they are both sweet! Live a happy life! (Can you arrange marriage and childbirth? Woohoo! I want to see a perfect one! Love the author!)

Nice. The male and female protagonists have a strong sense of humanity, and there are no perfect people in the world. I think the story and characters are very close to reality. Although the male protagonist is unclean when he turns back as a prodigal son, it is indeed as the author said that you cannot judge the male protagonist based on whether he is clean or not, but you must look at the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. The heroine is also a sober character. Although she sinks soberly, she is very sober once she encounters a problem and understands what she wants. I like this character very much. Although the author himself said that the fast pace of this article is not enjoyable when there are conflicts. But even when the male and female protagonists are having conflicts, the female protagonist leaves the plot without hesitation, which makes me happy! After the male and female protagonists got together, the prodigal male protagonist came back and doted on our female protagonist to death. It's worth reading [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] and the article is not long (PS the total number of contradictions is only ten chapters, so it's not abusive)

The emotional line between the two of them is not that they suddenly fall in love with each other, it is very natural and delicate, and the heroine's psychological activities are also well written, and it feels like she is alive. The incident of picking someone up at night at the end was a bit inconsistent with the attitude of the male protagonist before. It might be better to change the incident that caused the conflict. However, I really like the reaction of the female protagonist after the conflict. I am afraid that my expectations will be disappointed. Once I don't feel the preference, I will resolutely push the other person away and choose to give up ruthlessly. The heroine's inner background is always pessimistic. Being loved is a fluke, not being loved is the normal state of life, and giving up is her initiative. But in fact, what she longs for is just to be firmly chosen. Very good at writing! !

Worth seeing! ! ! There are some small flaws in this book in the early stage that I personally feel, but it went so smoothly in the middle and later stages, so I am willing to give full marks. In the early stage, I felt that the author's heroine setting at the beginning was a bit separated from the heroine setting at the end, so some people thought it was OOC. It really felt like it was not handled well here. I personally think it's okay, but! ! When the heroine returns to her own city and is separated from the hero, it starts to look good. It's very smooth, and the characters of the male and female protagonists are also very clear. It's just a sweet and ambiguous little pull. However, the estimation of time and background in the first half of the book is quite similar to that of ancient Chinese literature. In the later period, it would be better if the author did not emphasize time so much. The author also mentioned it here

I think the writing is very good, let alone whether the male protagonist is a scumbag or not. In that environment, you may not be able to control it if you pretend to be yourself. Hahaha, everyone has a past, but the present and future are very good. There is no reason to be together just because they are male and female protagonists. I really like the character of the female protagonist, and the female protagonist is The character analysis during the breakup was also very good. Generally speaking, the whole article is very logical. The author uses his strengths and avoids his weaknesses. He can write more and more carefully. Unfamiliar areas do not affect the plot. Last night, I saw my husband caught me at 3.40. Hahahaha. Come on, author, and continue to write new books [laughing][laughing]

The writing is very good, the content is very interesting, and there are no logical flaws except for the time when the male and female protagonists quarreled and broke up. The author wanted to implement the heroine's generous and lovable character, so when he set up the plot of "the hero got up from the heroine's bed in the middle of the night to pick up his "friend" who had returned home to have a child, and lied to the heroine - the heroine was angry because she was deceived." In order to make the heroine appear not unreasonable, the friend was defined as a girl who pestered the hero and forced herself into the circle. However, this cannot explain why the hero insisted on picking up the child in person, and could only talk about the difficulty of keeping a child in the comment area. This matter is actually easy to solve. The male protagonist calls for a driver or his driver to pick him up. According to the female protagonist's design, there will be no stress at all, but this will not lead to the subsequent plot. So for the sake of this book being very good, let's let the author go [laughing] Don't worry and keep reading.

The author writes well, especially the character creation and psychological activities. It is also worthy of recognition that some parts about the original family are written very life-like, and you can feel that the author is also a very transparent person.

The overall story is more realistic. Neither the male nor female protagonist is perfect, and there is no "slap in the face" story. It's just two young people trying to fall in love. The female protagonist is a little bit concerned about whether it's c or not, but the male protagonist's outlook is quite upright, and his appearance is no problem. He is charming. It's not surprising that the female protagonist will like him. Moreover, this is just a little pretentiousness of a little girl. Everyone hopes that the partner is the first time [eating melon], which does not affect the charm of the male protagonist. The female protagonist is a growth type, and her vision is limited to a small place, so in the early stage, the male protagonist is a guiding lover. He provides advice and help at work and other things. Both of them have their own ideas, and it depends on who is the better one. They pull each other off. The male protagonist is not perfect in the game, and the female protagonist is not perfect because she lacks security. This is the highlight. I don't know what to complain about. Overall, I think it is quite satisfactory. It is not amazing, but it is not bad. It can be entered into the book wasteland.