[Fourth-Dimensional Disaster + Ensemble Cast + Farming + Exploration and Reclamation]
After Logan faints from heatstroke, he opens his eyes to find himself the sole heir to an interstellar empire.
But the utopian city where he arrives has already become a wasteland, and all he has from the start is a "psionic projector" that can summon Earth players.
And so...
As countless players charge into the insect swarm's lair, Logan watches an iron fortress rise from the ruins and sneers into his communicator:
"I hear your insect race breeds fast. Too bad my players... respawn without limit!"
[The first few chapters are slower-paced as they introduce the setting and abilities. Things pick up from Chapter Nine. The early story covers farming in the wasteland and unifying the planet; later on, it heads into space and launches interstellar colonization. The story will be absolutely exciting, so rest assured, dear readers!]
The setting is novel, the subject matter is rare, the writing skills are acceptable, and the rhythm is good. However, the adjectives for the characters are too rich, and there is a suspicion of the word "water". As for the author's suggestions, it is not recommended to describe too richly in the early stage. For supporting characters with many roles, the more frequently they appear, the more concise they are. Don't give the audience all the appearance and character at once.
The rich imagination and refined pronunciation give readers a completely new feeling and are refreshing. Looking forward to the follow-up. The update is very fast, the writing is good, and it is fascinating. The more I read, the more I want to read it👍👍The story has twists and turns, ups and downs, and it becomes more and more interesting.
It looks okay so far
It's pretty cool, but why doesn't anyone comment? Am I the first to see it?
Pretty good settings
The writing is really precise😳
It's pretty good. I have a strong desire to watch it, but it's a bit unsatisfying. The setting is reasonable. It's considered a good grass for me. I'll have to see the follow-up development of the grass jelly.
So far, there are no major logical errors in the entire article, and the writing is smooth. If there is a good opportunity, this book should get a good rating and more readers.
Come on. From my perspective, I think this book is okay. I hope you will continue to work hard.
This book has great potential, please support the author👍