In a Women's Prison, the System Wants Me to Cultivate Immortality?

It's pretty good. The only drawback is that the plot is rather slow and the protagonist is being tortured all the time. If you like reading semi-abuse stories, I can recommend it. Another reminder, this kind of book with plot and characters is more suitable for the female channel, and it can survive in the male channel.

It is a work with potential, but there are many problems. The biggest problem is that there is too little positive feedback, the protagonist is too weak, and there is no gain at all from working hard. Also, the numerical values ​​are just numerical values. If the numerical values ​​are upgraded, the combat power will not feel upgraded. After learning the skills, except for the doctor's skills, there is no other use for them.

The current novels are good with novel themes. The male protagonist can learn everything, unlike women who can only choose one direction. The ability description is also different from the general ability system. And there are no poisonous points so far. The writing and logic are also very good, the story design is also good, and the character description is also good. Maybe it's because the title of the book is relatively niche and not many people read it, but gold will always shine. And if I can hope that the author can keep the faded body at the end of Ye Qianxia's story, it feels like a cute, pitiful and clingy kitten that people love. If it disappears for some reason, I feel better.

Although some plots are slightly flawed, it is good enough in Tomato. Renaissance, but not quite the Renaissance [Thoughts] Why do I feel that Miss Xiao is a little relieved during this period? I don't know how to deal with it, but I'm having a hard time

Good looking Let me first state that this book is not an invincible style, nor is it a slap-in-the-face upgrade style. It is a story about being in a strange world, constantly exploring the unknown, and gradually becoming stronger with the help of the system. After reading the bad reviews in the reviews, I can roughly divide it into two points. One is that the protagonist is weak, and the other is that the protagonist is weak and yet reckless. My opinion on this is that I think the protagonist is weak, so this book is not suitable. If you feel that the protagonist is reckless, you must understand that the protagonist is in a world that he does not understand at all, so there will inevitably be dangers in the process of acquiring world knowledge. If you let the protagonist slowly survive and become invincible, the crisis will not wait for anyone. And the story originally needs to be driven by the plot, rather than just retreating and clocking in for hundreds of years to become invincible after coming out. There are many invincible novels, but this one is not.

I really think this work is very good and creative, but it only reaches Chapter 10... To be honest, if I hadn't read it on Tomato, I would have thought I had traveled through time and read a Japanese light novel! For example: men enter women's colleges, people without magic enter magic schools, ordinary people enter devil schools, and commoners enter aristocratic schools! Then have various interactions with the granddaughter of the chairman of the school, the president of the student council, the proud noble devil, etc., And various asuras, and then save them! Another example: The Elf Sword Dancer... Looking at this work, the first 10 chapters feel like I was too late, but after that I feel like it's useless! In fact, the idea is really good, but in the end it fell a little short. It would be great if this book traveled back 20 years! ! ! This work is still very new, and I don't know the future. It has more than 100,000 readers now, and maybe it will reach 500,000, or even one million readers in the future... But this book will be over with me!

It's a good read. It's a rare imaginative novel written by Tomato, and it still has a little bit of reasoning. I just don't know if the plot can continue to develop in the future. This kind of writing falls apart easily if it's not well written. Ps: Looking for articles of the same type, it feels so cool to be in different time and space [Love]

I can't tell you any more detailed advantages of this book. My opinion is that it's good to read, but it's too little. After all, it's a new book, so it's understandable. It's better to read than other mindless and cool books. Those who are mindless can only read the first 20 chapters and don't need to read the rest. It's just that I met a stronger person and I gained a more impressive reputation. That's it. Even if I insist on reading, I still skip it. I won't read it all. I'm tired of reading cool stories. Instead, the protagonist slowly improves, which makes me feel like I was watching Doupo. This book occasionally gives the protagonist a little hook, but I feel it's great. Some cool stories give brainless skills, and they can reach the sky in one step, which makes people lose the desire to read.

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It's a slow burner. The plot connection and foreshadowing are very good. The subject matter and plot are very new and very interesting. Author, don't pay attention to those who criticize you. Many of them deliberately want you to give up, and then they use your subject matter to write that kind of studio drama. They are all hired.