Everyone Plays Delta Force, So Why Am I the Only One in Asala?

The content is very good, very innovative, and the various strategies are also very good, but there are too many supporting actresses. If the author hadn't repeatedly said that the supporting actresses are only needed for the plot, I might not be able to read it. Also, the appearance of the girls should be less described. Just give a general feeling. I can't stand it anymore. I guess I'll write another harem novel. Bai Feng's writing is too cheap. You can read the one about Asara's restricted area. As long as the woman appears, the poison will be over and she will slip away.

The subject matter is novel, and the theme of the game is still revealed. The protagonist has a good grasp of the balance between being the leader of Asara and the GTI operator. The writing is quite touching, and some of the game content has been rationalized. The text content is obviously outstanding compared to similar books, and the author of the Riddler is a professional one. I personally don't like the author's way of writing about female characters on this subject. It makes people feel that the world is full of lust, and they have such descriptions when they are in trouble. It's very uncomfortable to watch. One star deducted for personal reasons

Love to watch It's just that we hope there can be less of that kind of obscene plot. Watching too much of it can be a bit uncomfortable. Although it may be more realistic, I still hope there can be less w. Also, I hope there won't be a female protagonist who is with the protagonist. I'm totally fine with the appearance of other female characters with descriptions (although the Bai Feng makes me a little scared) What I want to see more is Asala and Lao Sai getting better and dipping their beans. After all, freedom belongs to Asara Just to mention it, there are too many wavy lines. However, there has been some improvement recently, so I'll just mention it www I hope the author can write better and better The other thing is Not enough Come on I believe that dear author you can update 10 times a day

First of all, the plot is really coherent, with very few poisonous points and logical fallacies. Secondly, the writing style is humorous and there was nothing that I wanted to skip. In the end, the author was really obedient and polite. He also carefully reviewed the image of the protagonist and attached a topographic map. His writing attitude was very good. Maybe the only thing that makes me feel uncomfortable is the portrayal of Luo and Bai, but after all, Chapter 100 is just the beginning, there is nothing much to say. Qi Hong's portrayal is not about love, and the supporting actresses are not stereotyped. To be honest, it is much better than other cool novels. At least the author has his own ideas and does not directly apply the conventional cool novel template. Oops, why did the author go astray? Your career line is really good. It is more creative than other books of the same type. Why did you write it as Huang Wen later? And I was very embarrassed after reading those chapters😓 I basically won't touch it in the future. I'll come back and take a look when I have time. You better change it seriously and don't let new readers suffer from this, and the book's grades will not be bad. But your writing attitude is really good, so I won't lower your star, you bastard🐀Tail juice [I'm about to cry]

It is a very good Delta fan novel. It has a rich world view and strong logic. The supporting characters are basically flesh and blood. It is also interesting that the protagonist leads Asara to become bigger and stronger. It is just that several original female characters are compared with other supporting characters (even original male characters of the same level). Color) gives people a much different look and feel, but the overall development of the main plot is still very good, and the career line is also very clear. If you want to read this book, remember to skip the emotional scenes in the chapters, and it will be more comfortable to read. I have not found a novel of the same type to replace it. Come on, come on The plot of the heroine is extremely sinister, check out the first half, and the heroine is online in the second half. Don't watch it if the emotional drama is strong. In addition to adding to the protagonist's harem, the author is committed to giving other characters a CP. The article also draws a red line for Wu Ming. Some other original characters also have emotional lines. If you can't handle it, it's better to run away.

[Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Smile][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] IQ is online. I personally feel that it is very exciting among the delta. The change of identity and the sneak attack of Lao Liu are very interesting.

It's a very good book. I like the obscene Assara very much. The brotherhood between Said and the protagonist is well described. The double identity of the protagonist is okay. The only problem I think is that the protagonist is a bit lustful. It is human to be lustful. However, the book focuses too much on the protagonist's lustful aspect, which may make some people's reading experience uncomfortable (including me). I hope the author can reduce the ink on the lustful aspect and improve the description of Asara and Said [Thoughts]

I made a derivative based on the delta. The logic settings are very good. The combination of materials in the delta is quite interesting. From Asara's perspective, I guess there may be a knife later [thinking] The biggest problem now is that it is too short [eating melon]

Overall, the writing is quite good, and the character descriptions are also quite good. However, the emotional line is a bit toxic. I didn't hold back after seeing the explosion of White Bee's M attribute. It's considered a good book. (Personal opinion)

Okay, this is still a common problem among Delta fans. The world view has been as perfect as possible, but there is a problem because of joining the entire world. There is only one Lao Sai. Even if he does it without sleeping, it will only take tens of billions to encounter one situation. It can be said that in this world view, there are tens of thousands of games opening at the same time every second. How does he manage to be matched with a wave of people every time? There are too many pitfalls, but overall it's pretty good to watch and the plot is interesting. I recommend watching it. Just as I imagined, I gave an explanation later. After all, it is such an obvious pitfall, and it is relatively easy to fill.