You Jerk, Who Told You to Teach Your Disciple Like That?

Personally, I think it's 8.5 To 9 points. It beats many Tomato novels. The plot is concise and the content is interesting. Each character is well portrayed, but the little fox's role is really too small, but it is inevitable because it mainly depicts pig's feet and the heroine. , And the pig's trotters are not pretending to be a stingy person who loves money. The setting is very good. The heroine and other female characters are not brainless. And the most important thing is that the author has no clue until now. There is no poisonous point at present. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates. Full marks are given. Come on. It was quite interesting to watch the game. I can say that I started with a high score, but it was too weak later on and the plot did not advance. Even if I skipped through 10 chapters, there was no sense of disobedience. There was no main plot or events, which made me feel a bit disappointed.

I really like the author's writing style. There is not too much sloppiness. This novel is full of laughter. The protagonist Su Yu seems to use the word "magician" to the fullest. The character of the protagonist is also one of the motivations for me to continue reading. The overall world view of the novel is complete and has not been fully developed. The narrative is very smooth. In short, the novel is still very good so far. Now I will update one chapter and I will read one chapter [please update]

It's very well written, I like this style very much. But there are some flaws, such as the rules for accepting disciples that are not followed later. I hope there will be a patch in the future to add the rules for accepting disciples, so that the preface and the follower can be added.

I guess it has been suppressed again. It is obviously very interesting and the twists are also very delicate. If all Tomato books were sorted, this book would be rated at least 1.6, At least it would exceed 1% of the total Tomato books. After reading more than 300 articles, I basically have a rough idea of the heroine, who seems to be Xiaobi Ga and our sect leader.

Overall, it looks good. The beginning is a bit stiff and nonsensical, but the writing becomes smoother and the characters become more three-dimensional. Personally, I feel that the most toxic point is the beginning of the episode where I am trying to please the great disciple.

The protagonist of this book has a magician system, and it can be seen from some details that he is kind in nature, such as throwing an umbrella. Objectively speaking, the protagonist's training of his apprentices is indeed too harsh from a modern perspective. For example, the apprentice will not stop him as long as he is alive, and the exercises that bring side effects to the apprentice have a tendency to abuse the apprentice. However, based on the background of the text and the fate of the character, the elder sister regained her talent after experiencing extreme pain, tempered her tenacity in the painful practice, and developed a strong combat power. This is in sharp contrast to other peerless geniuses. It can be said that the strength of the elder sister was obtained in exchange for pain, and surpassed other people's resources, cultivation, etc. Chen Hu was originally a loser, but he became stronger because of the protagonist. I won't give specific examples. In summary, the apprentices accepted are basically desperate, and the protagonist's painful teaching can actually be said to be the best solution under insufficient resources. Moreover, the protagonist also cares a lot about his apprentice and has devoted a lot. One thing to note is that the protagonist's training skills for his apprentice brother basically have side effects. His apprentice has gone through a lot of hardships and become extraordinary in battle, but the protagonist enjoys life and practices easily. This has been criticized by some people. I can only say that efforts will be rewarded. He is actually seeking benefits for himself in the harvest stage after the initial efforts. The protagonist relies on the apprentice's pain points to obtain system currency, most of which is spent on the apprentice. The world of immortality is a cruel world, so I don't think the protagonist is evil.

If you think about this kind of comedy that exaggerates characters, there will always be "toxic points", because they can easily have obvious shortcomings and strengths, and it is quite fun to accept such "toxic points". The senior sister endures hardships, the junior brother is snobbish but deflated in every aspect, and the younger junior sister is responsible for being cute and rich. I think there are no problems with what I have written so far. The key thing is to look at the subsequent growth of the characters.

Except for Zhang Hu, Universe Invincible is good-looking. The plot has ups and downs, and the foreshadowings are connected. It is a long story, which is much better than the short slap-in-the-face novel. It has two very exciting anchor points, one is the disciple's realization in the Holy Sect, and the other is the Li family (reversal and reversal is really true). It is super good-looking. Now I am very curious about the plot of the protagonist's resurrection. The author will update it soon.

In fact, it is only the senior sister who has a charming personality and the pretentiousness of the four masters and apprentices, but this is worth her suffering. Although the second senior brother wants to break up and be lazy, it is actually okay. After all, he is still a worker. The third junior sister directly finds out that this person is not found, and the master is a team leader.

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking, mainly because of the good ideas, but it's too short. Currently, only the apprentice training system is complete, and the others are relatively weak. In the later stage, as long as there is no ambiguity between master and apprentice, the points will not be changed. The only thing that bothers me about this kind of master-apprentice story is that the apprentice is the heroine.