City of the Uncanny

I'll give it five stars as encouragement first.

So far is going well, keep it up!

It's alright, though some dialogue is a bit redundant and the writing style is a bit immature, but overall it's not bad.

This is not bad considering it's written on a tomato, hopefully it will be maintained.

Are you going to spend the rest of your life searching for the female lead? 🤦

I've finally found something I can read on instinct. This author's writing style and structure are both quite good.

It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it!

Well written, keep it up!