Paying to Upgrade My Ancient Desolate Saint Physique, I Beat Up the School Beauty from the Start

It's very enjoyable to write. It would have been a little more bloody and violent. For example, missing arms and legs. The Holy Body of Huanggu, the Immortal King comes to the nine heavens. Chaos seed golden lotus. These different aspects of the Holy Body can be developed a little more. The plot is very exciting and not frustrating. I didn't see any aggrieved look. Invincibly refreshing article. Super nice. The things provided by the system should not be too bad. If possible, you can get an imperial weapon. During the fight, in addition to the black ice dragon flying, the special effects have pictures, and the image of the ancient holy body can be exaggerated, such as an ancient god's dharma body, which represents the heaven and earth. The golden light parted the clouds. The sky becomes filled with strange phenomena. It makes people feel awesome just by looking at it. This is the feeling that these golden scales are not objects in the pool.

It brought out my blood. It is undoubtedly a cool article. It doesn't talk nonsense, it's just a beating. I'm the best at beating school belles. [Shy] I like the main character's temperament, which is similar to mine.

I don't know who the other people are who reviewed it with less than three stars, but what I want to say is that although this novel is not wonderful, it may not have that kind of thought-provoking plot. The writing is more straightforward, the battle is more straightforward, and there is no more deep meaning and passion. But here lies the peculiarity of this novel. Although the writing is relatively straightforward, he doesn't have that disgusting part. No matter you are a beauty or a joke, he will slap you like this. If I have to talk about areas for improvement, at 2 o'clock I will be the first to play some official director or big boss genius. Write smarter and stronger. The second villain is written to be more evil and dangerous, but the protagonist can always be invincible, but you cannot write others as having low IQ, low cultivation, and rubbish talent. There is harm only when there is contrast, and there is wonderfulness only when there is contrast.

A truly refreshing article that is not aggrieved at all, nor does it forcefully suppress its strength.

Good guy, I'm just saying good guy, this is a really ruthless person, the school beauty will be destroyed directly, it's really fun to watch, this special code is a cool article.

After looking at it for so long, I saw one word "crazy"

Very exciting, fast pace [like] immersive [like]

What is cool? This is cool. Pushing everything

Decisive in killing, the main character is a madman, spending money for gifts for the first time

It's very interesting to watch. The main character is decisive and decisive in killing and never pities the beauty.