Even the Underdog Can Have a Perfect Youth

To balance the score a little, this work reminds me of the way I used to watch Diary of the Laughing Cat and the naughty boy Ma Xiaotiao. The protagonist is not a very perfect person, has an attitude of not caring about the world, works hard, etc., And is very postmodern. The world of the novel exaggerates the originally abstract content, but this is the world in the book, including many other characters, and the space given makes it feel like Aunt Yang Hongying. You can see a lot of influence from Japanese works in it. It's pretty good. There are no big problems. It seems to be very smooth. However, sister, there are other contents for young children that are very abstract, similar to nudity plots. If the author's level can be improved, there is still great potential, but it doesn't matter. It's just that the way of writing makes me miss the time when I read Yang Hongying's books before, and then the abstract plot will draw people back to Internet literature and the reality of post-modern consciousness.

It doesn't push the plot for the sake of the relationship between men and women like other novels, which is rare among domestic novels. However, the speaking part is a bit awkward and it doesn't feel very natural. Overall, it's pretty good.

A unique youth story of an idiot, a non-traditional youth novel written by Long Aotian. There is no system, and the plot development is unparalleled. Unlike the vast majority of Tomato movies, where the male protagonist has a high profile and high emotional intelligence, and the plot development routine of starting a harem and pulling strings, the female protagonists are almost inhumane. The male protagonist of this book is really vivid, the psychological descriptions of the female protagonists, and the exciting plot of the male partner are really frustrating compared to the male protagonist's apocalyptic beginning. The male protagonist is deficient but optimistic, has a crazy mind, and can be deceived into an unknown clan. The plot is wild but has the fantasy flavor of Riqing. Of course, the front part is a bit frustrating, and in today's Internet environment, it's difficult for anyone to read it patiently. But when Lin Mo confessed his love and was rejected, the heroines started to catch up and started to feel happy. This kind of plot unfolds like a youth version of regret flow. Later, when the senior president graduates, it really feels like the student council has its own opinion. High school is over and graduation is over, but the story will continue. The male protagonist takes over as the president and starts his own harem student union (. Personally, I often read Riqing. The plot style of this novel is similar to Nakashata. But it's easier and happier than the middle. There are basically no poisonous points in the book, but the plot of Chu Yujiao has not yet unfolded, so I look forward to the author's great writing power.

It still feels good, maybe because Tomato has read too many smooth sailing novels, and feels that this kind of aggrieved novel is somewhat interesting. But what attracted me most in the whole book was the male protagonist's personal charm and the gentleness that he revealed inadvertently. It seems that as a group portrait, we do not lie to the harem. Everyone has their own favorite people and their struggles for their own feelings. However, the heroines have all become losers, and Chen Feng is like the wind. Those who can catch this gust of wind will be saved like Auntie and Su, and those who cannot catch it will continue to wander in their feelings. The hero's rescue is his family (sister). Perhaps this is youth. Everyone has what they desire, but the regret of not getting it is the best memory of youth.

Seeing that more than 100 chapters have come, let me make an objective review. First of all, the style of the work is undoubtedly a harem multi-heroine novel. The writing style is very young. The author is very good at creating the portrayal of multiple characters and multiple settings. The plot is not compact, but each character can be roughly portrayed. This is what I think is the most worth mentioning point of this book. Although there are many characters, you can still figure out the characters without reading carefully. The character and plot of the story, but I think the author has gone too far. Too many characters can lay a lot of foreshadowing and write a long article. This is actually a test of an author's ability to write long online articles. At present, some characters are actually very redundant. Multiple branch lines and multiple character creations sometimes cover up the true and complete main plot of the article, which can be a bit confusing. However, the title of the work introduces the protagonist. The setting is indeed what I like to read. The protagonist does not have a complete family, outstanding appearance, and gentle personality. However, he relies on his rough nerves and a naive personality to make readers enjoy reading. This indeed shows that the author is very accomplished in character portrayal. However, I think it is too straightforward and has many jokes that make the novel rough. Although it feels immersive when reading, I still feel that this is too much. The nonsensical style is not suitable for wrapping up the endings of a few important characters in the later period. As far as I can tell, the plot is indeed interesting, including the old routines. It is estimated that it will take more than 1.5 Million words to complete with constant updates (because I feel that there are a lot of characters, and it would take up a lot of space to describe each harem). Finally, I hope the author will continue to write, I like this novel very much!

This novel is really interesting. I feel like the author writes whatever he dreams about. It's a breath of fresh air in Tomato [laughs] I don't care if the male protagonist is frustrated, but anyone who likes the male protagonist has to get a substitute, right? I'll give you a low score too [OK]

This book is already very good (personal opinion). The protagonist portrayed by the author at the beginning is vivid and vivid. He does not pay attention to external opinions and focuses on doing his own thing. Sometimes it is quite funny. I like to see the perspective of passers-by. Maybe I have read too many refreshing articles and want to change my taste. This book by the author is very good. It is not an ordinary refreshing article. The protagonist is a bit miserable, but the optimistic attitude of the protagonist is very encouraging to others. , I read this book as a diary. The author's story is fragmented and somewhat logical, but each event is a new character, a new beginning, not based on other events. In short, it is well written. I also hope that the protagonist can live a life of repayment as soon as possible and not let the people around him down. Come on, author, my youth needs this book! ! !

I have recommended it many times. I thought it was SI again. Unexpectedly, I couldn't put it down and kept reading. Here are some suggestions. Although other people's transformation process is less written, it is still explained. However, the transformation of the yandere is not explained very clearly. You can write it down and then write about all the perspectives of the harem and the perspectives of individual supporting characters. After that, it is best to write a spin-off and write about the main characters in one day. The content is to compare the memories with the present day before meeting the male protagonist and the mood after meeting the male protagonist. I look forward to the process of change of the girl's pregnancy. Open another poll and write some non-harem memories to compare with now. The biggest shortcoming of the pilot light novel is that the detailed description is too short or even too small. The overall situation is very good. If you pay more attention to the details and the emotional expression of the characters, I think it will not be a weak spring thing @ Youth Bastard

It's very interesting. I feel like the title of the book could be changed to "Chen Feng's Wonderful Love Story". There are many elements in the book, and almost all of them are collected. Yandere, sister-controller, tsundere, naturally stupid, senior sister, friend, younger sister, first love, quiet girl who is good at studying. Oh, and there is also a wife [laughing evilly]. The stories in the book can be viewed as events one by one, and there is no need to pursue coherence. Coherence may seem uninteresting.

Faced with the helplessness of life, the male protagonist still maintains the courage to fight against it and the mentality of never being defeated. I think this is worthy of appreciation. Some people may find it poisonous, but I personally think it is okay. If anyone sees this book review, I still think you can click in to read the content of the book so as not to miss out on a good book. Generally speaking, it is a micro-group portrait. The author has a good control over the group portrait, and will not waste too much time on the supporting characters. It also retains a certain amount of drama, which is more abstract and funny for daily life. Occasionally, the male protagonist will become serious again when facing life. I really like the creation of this character. There may be some aspects that are not handled very well and lead to a little bit of poison, but overall it does not affect it, so I give it four stars. I hope the author can deal with it later.