The Age of Severed Spirits: Hiding in the Shadows to Make the False Real

It looks okay. Apart from being unattractive, the main reason is that when writing about a country, it's better to just write about the entire federation. Writing about other countries is not easy. If you kill a lot of people later, you may be criticized by the readers. Anyway, in my eyes, this so-called China is not like China. It is not something the Chinese protagonist can do casually. But as far as I can see, it seems that only the United States is suffering. If I continue to praise this so-called China in the future, I guess not many people will read this book.

The writing is really good, the characters are vividly drawn, Chen Wu is brave and resourceful, Zhang Xuan is neutral in the front and cold in the back. Moreover, the combat power is relatively good. The first three levels of the psychic stage can be threatened by guns and ammunition. In the middle and late stages of the psychic stage, you can also fight opponents from a distance. In the Xuanye stage, you can be immune to most hot weapons. Furthermore, the power development is very even. From immortal cultivators and old demons to monsters and extraordinary beings, it would be more exciting if there is a confrontation, right?

The author is pretty much the same in terms of characterization, but I always feel a bit shy and stiff when creating characters. For example, Yu Xiaoting, although it is okay to be venomous, her venomousness regardless of the situation can only become an unpopular point in the end. Also, when talking about their characters, the author can add a little bit about the reasons why they developed this character, such as introversion due to family problems since childhood. This may make it more understandable. The characters created by the author still have their brains, so I think it's pretty good [laughs][laughs][laughs]. Also, the author, who is a girl, had better write more intelligently. If it is too brainless, it may be a bit *, come on, I look forward to your continued updates. [Shy][shy][shy]

Although the plot and setting are the same, there are also highlights. The extraordinary distribution in various places is well controlled. It's just that the portrayal of certain characters is particularly vicious. The most poisonous thing is Yu Xiaoting's venomous words regardless of the occasion or environment, and what she said is not so much venomous as it is a unilateral belittlement of Zhang Xuan. She has enjoyed the benefits brought by Zhang Xuan's relationship and even Zhang Quan saved her once, but Zhang Xuan has never received any favor from her. If it weren't for Liang Jinxia, ​​she might not even have gone to the Aura River. If she were an ordinary person, then she would 100% offend an extraordinary being with her temper, and she would definitely expect the consequences. The character Henry Zhang is also poisonous, but not that poisonous. There is just something wrong with his character. Then the style of conduct changed too quickly, without any excess. Of course, the overall writing is still very good. I hope the author can work hard! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] To be honest, when I was reading the book, I really couldn't understand Yu Xiaoting's thoughts. Henry Zhang was very worried when he encountered any danger, but whether inside or outside, whenever anyone said something nice about Zhang Xuan, she would start to ridicule and belittle him. And he started to do some mysterious behaviors that I don't know, such as suddenly not talking, suddenly clenching his hands, etc. It's just indescribable. And if nothing else, she kept saying that he wanted to defeat Henry Zhang, but to be honest, could she really not see the gap between herself and Henry Zhang? Although the writing is very good, this poisonous point is really hard to watch.

The behind-the-scenes flow is okay. Compared with the clueless article that only has spiritual energy recovery in China, the fact that spiritual energy recovery is available all over the world is pretty good. It is quite interesting to build Zongmenfang City with some farming elements. It's just that the character Henry Zhang is almost boring. He is indifferent to others, yet caring, and yet emphasizing friendship and shrewd calculations. There is a little bit in every aspect, but it is not distinctive enough.

As expected, that Henry Zhang should be the author himself [laughing]

Generally speaking, it's okay. It's just that the world view is too small. I suggest you expand the world view and add some plots such as alien invasions in the later stage. In terms of characters, it is recommended to treat them equally regardless of their race. Only with competition can you be motivated. In every novel, the human race is far ahead, so there is nothing interesting.

The writing is good, but most of the strong people are created, and the country's power is a bit weak. It feels like the real state machinery has not been learned.

The author will give you more. It's not enough. The author is [crying][crying][crying]. I'm almost worried about my child. Why don't I update three chapters a day? Two chapters are not enough.

The author's writing is really good, there is nothing serious about it I feel that the author's writing is really good. Although there are some stitches, the author's writing is not bad. Overall, there are no major flaws. The characters are well written. The main characters are not brainless.