System! What Did You Do Behind My Back!

It's so well written that it's so intertwined that I don't have to urinate at all. If this book is not popular, everyone here is responsible! There was so much foreshadowing, and so many innocent people were involved just for the protagonist to fall in love across generations. I'm convinced. I'm sorry that I've been chasing this book for so long. No matter what lofty terms the author uses, this is essentially a love story.

It's a divine book. The name is ridiculous, but the content is super awesome. The author's previous book has already become a god in my heart. It integrates high-energy physics and traditional cultivation systems so well. It's the only time in my life that I can have such an awesome understanding of these two aspects of knowledge! Highly recommended

Damn, it looks really good. A ghost floating above everyone controlled everything. He was about to see hope, but was suddenly knocked back into the abyss. Can't see the opponent, can't find the reason. There is an atmosphere of depressive despair. It's so fun to watch . . . . Don't watch romantic dramas

Now I understand clearly, this started as a story about an unemployed young man and a retired old man, until interference came to the system, guided by cultivating immortals, and then gradually revealed the power of higher civilizations to lay out the earth [Thinking] I said why I couldn't sleep, but it turned out that my brain was on hold and started to spin [awkward laughter] and he secretly stabbed me! , Holy shit, Old Man Li is so dumb [laughing awkwardly] The protagonist who was so cruel and inhumane was really kept in the dark. All other advancements depended on the state and the police. The protagonist's subjective consciousness really didn't think of any problems [grievance]. Then he started to get frustrated. Why did he start to directly change his skin, teleport to a random place, and perform world peace missions? Isn't this cultivating immortality? ! What I saw from behind was very confusing. I walked away.

A masterpiece. The degree of completion is ridiculously high, and it possesses an artistry that is almost impossible to exist in the structure of web texts. It is a successful deconstruction of contemporary online literature from traditional literature, a tragicomedy that explores "love" and "desire", and is a masterpiece that ranks among the first echelons of all modern and contemporary literary and artistic works. It's nice to see someone trying to write in-depth articles. It is a pity that there is almost no survival soil for this kind of literature in China. If it can be adapted into film, TV series and animation, it may have a chance of survival. I'll try to parse it. (Note: "Love" means "an attempt to enter a greater unity", that is, "the illusion of devotion in the face of inevitable death." The two have the same meaning and originate from the reproductive instinct of living things. "Desire" means "the pursuit of things that are beneficial to survival as judged by the symbol system", that is, "the lack of contrast between the current situation and a perfect situation that does not exist in the past or future." It originates from the survival instinct of living beings. This is my personal understanding of theories such as "One-Dimensional Man" and "Paradise Theory".) Characters are the soul of the novel. This is the consensus of traditional literature, but this is not the logic in online literature. The protagonist in the online article is a tool to promote the plot and satisfy the readers' desires, while the supporting characters are the embodiment of the readers' desires. It is an exaggeration to say that online articles can no longer be called novels. Internet articles and traditional novels should not be classified into the same genre. Internet writing is a deconstructive style of writing that arouses and satisfies readers' desires. The essence is the same as pornographic movies, popcorn movies and other highly "commercialized" forms of entertainment. To induce, satisfy and release "love" in the form of "desire". But this book is not. In the Internet era, it can be said to be very "old school". [Facepalm] The protagonist and the heroine are designed symmetrically. The protagonist is instinctive, narrow-minded, and lustful, while the heroine is transcendent, grand, and loving. But both have their own shortcomings. The male protagonist's shortcoming is that he is "oppressed" by "love", which is reflected in his choice to deliver batteries after being appointed by the "free man". At this time, he is carrying the entrustment of the deceased, and he himself is forced to become a part of the "grander unity" (or the illusion of dedication) from the perspective of the deceased. In layman's terms, delivering the battery is the purpose of the deceased's sacrifice. If not delivered, the deceased himself (should) think that his death was in vain. The shortcoming of the female protagonist is that she is "complicated" by "desire". As written in the book, she knows that the love between men and women is only the result of dopamine secretion, but she is still addicted to male lust, and even entrusts the fate of mankind to the male protagonist. The character's character determines the character's destiny. The male protagonist attempts to achieve a perfect situation that does not exist, so he goes back to the past again and again to try to achieve an ending in which the female protagonist survives. And the heroine sacrifices every time in order to dedicate herself to the illusion.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a high-quality online article on Tomato. I read it all night long. The shortcoming is that it's too short. I'm not sure how much space I can write in the rest of it. The author has never been able to write many chapters in his previous works, so he's very nervous. There are still too few roles for the protagonist, and it feels like writing a prequel. The protagonist of the story is not like the protagonist, but more like the plot development of the protagonist's confrontation with unknown latitude enemies, guided by the Li family as the main protagonist system.

The subject matter is interesting. The title of "Xiu Xian" is actually about technology becoming a god. It also has shadows of previous works. The writing and description give people a sense of professionalism. The plot of the protagonist's first life in the first half is very fascinating. I can give it a 9 points. Although it feels like a group portrait, the characters are all flesh and blood. Lao Li who is under surveillance is a bit like Shi Qiang's police officer Zhao, Taoist Zhang Tao, Wang Mingming who took two kilograms of bullets, and Lao Yan who persists alone. The plot is compact and full of suspense. When the protagonist travels back in time, it feels a bit boring. The plot suddenly changes from saving the world to a story about filial piety. The protagonist unexpectedly comes together with Sister Li, giving people a sense of helplessness that it has come to an abrupt end. In the second life, the protagonist is taken off the system, and the plot advancement depends entirely on the heroine's scientific research. However, there are a lot of bloody plots between the three protagonists, and it feels very boring later. I hope the third life will be more exciting.

Tomato is one of the few good books, highly recommended. It is no exaggeration to say that from the perspective of plot and creativity, it can be compared with The Three-Body Problem. It is much more interesting than the Tiancai Club next door. However, I feel that the plot is a bit slow to advance. Some of the plots are too wordy. It would be better if the scenes were more grand. As a result of such an incident, a domestic investigation team was established and it was disbanded all of a sudden. It is a bit petty.

The front part is okay, an invisible monster floating in the world, the suspense atmosphere is very good It was after I changed the map in the mid-term that I started to get confused. It felt that it had little to do with the main plot of the early stage. First, it was about technological immortality in the black hole, and then it became ordinary fantasy after it came out. Besides, this love is too difficult to endure, so I might as well not write about it.

Holy shit, it's so pretty. At first I thought it was some kind of crazy joke. The plot feels very exciting after watching it. I'm also looking forward to seeing if there will really be content about cultivating immortals in the future.

I finally understand why the rating is so low. The author is very imaginative and the story is exciting. However, this book is not suitable for writing as a full-length novel, or the author's writing style cannot support the completion of a million words. Therefore, the plot in the middle transition period is too heavy and long, which makes readers feel a very strong sense of fragmentation when they read the beginning. That's why so many people criticize this book in the comment area. In fact, if this book is One or two hundred transitional chapters have been deleted, and the main plot of the main character has been modified to make it more coherent. This book is definitely a sci-fi literary book, and the plot is much more exciting than the God-killing and God-killing dramas. Although I am a little dissatisfied with the plot and the ending, I still give it full marks, because this imaginative plot is not the best in Tomato, but it can also be said to be unique and has created a new scientific system of cultivating immortality of its own.

The first part is very well written and very suspenseful, just like when Chen Dong came out of the ancient tomb, he didn't know anything, everything was just a little bit of exploration, science and immortality coexisted, I was fascinated by it. It became a little hard to understand at the end. Mr. Yan and his daughter wrote too many chapters. The main plot was not told at all. I don't know where the protagonist is. The span of 10 years is too big. I hope the author can come back to his senses.

Finally, the author fills the gap. Some parts of the previous scenes are awkward, weird and inexplicable, but they are all for a reason, and they are always foreshadowing. The author writes very well, combining metaphysics and science. And the story line is also very exciting, related to time travel. The first time I see the system is my future self, and my future will also travel back to the past and become the system of my past self. Both myself and the past system are trying to change everything You saw a lot of weirdness in the front, there are reasons, such as the system, and why Li Xia likes the protagonist so much, especially the part that is like being in heat. That is because of the influence of future Li Xia on the current Li Xia. So why does the future Li Xia like the protagonist? It is because of the influence of the future protagonist on the protagonist (relative to the future Li Xia timeline). Then why,,,, and then it just became a closed loop.

It's so good to watch. The tone of the first few pictures is humorous. Although the plot progression is a bit dull, more and more twists and turns are more fascinating. After the sudden death of the professor, the plot begins to become tense, and it really gets better and better after that. I was supposed to study in the morning, but ended up reading it all in one sitting. Damn it, author, come on, ten updates a day should be fine, right?

This book is very well written, highly recommended and worth reading. It's hard to believe that there is such a high-end novel on Tomato. It discusses the possibility of the universe from several dimensions. The plot may be slightly flawed, but overall, especially on a macro level, it is amazing and highly recommended. It currently only has a 7.6 Rating, which is completely unreasonable. Maybe the plot is not the kind of mindless novel, and I really don't recommend reading it without thinking. It's a bit like The Three Body Problem, and it requires a relatively long chapter to unfold. I can guarantee that if Three-Body Problem doesn't win the Hugo Award, not many people in China will watch it. Thanks to the author, it's amazing.

I read a similar book to this book a long time ago. It's very similar, but I forgot about it. I don't remember the content at all. It's just that it gave me a very familiar feeling when I read it. The part about giving away batteries is great, but the later part is not so good, especially the part with my niece.

I looked at the first dozen or so pictures. The author's storytelling techniques may need to be strengthened, but the obvious main thread of this story is there. It has been presented in the author's mind, and the angle is quite novel. This story slowly unfolded in front of me with the progress of each scene, without saying anything. A sudden blockage or something, but I haven't seen the back yet, but if it makes you angry that you like big ideas, then science and revision metaphysics. It can be seen. The author is not in a state of depression about the protagonist's strength. It is a story with a very clever layout.

It's very well written. The beginning is pretty good. I'll check it out later. The rest is just average and boring.

It's a great work, the quality is beyond this platform, and there's no problem putting it next door. Although this book talks about cultivating immortals, it is definitely not a traditional book about cultivating immortals. It is a work that is relatively science fiction and provides various theoretical supports, whether it is right or wrong. Compared with many works, the science fiction flavor is very strong. The first paragraph was great until the end of Song Ning's cultivation of immortality. The second paragraph of Dual Personality Sending Ning was a little confusing. You can probably understand what the author wanted to express, but in fact it was mainly to expand the origin of the system Song Ning. Relatively speaking, I think it is a bit too long. I am also looking forward to the future. I don't know how I want to end this story. I hope it will be a surprise.

It's okay, the protagonist's character is just a normal person who is a little nervous and a little reserved. The story is told well, and the highlight is that the protagonist system is very reasonable, and the framework draws on the Three-Body Problem, without the drawbacks of background logic. The small highlight of this book is that the protagonist and the people the reader cares about will disappear, so be prepared to be knifed [cover your face]. This book is not like the routines of Internet novels. It is a mixture of many different elements, including comedy and light-heartedness, conspiracy and calculation, love elements, and the protagonist's crazy description [face covering]. Of course, these can be generally said to be about the growth of teenagers, so be prepared to be traumatized just by looking at it. The overall imagination and writing skills are acceptable.

The writing is really good, but don't read this book as an urban fairy tale. At this stage, it can be read as a science fiction article. As a sci-fi fan, this book has already achieved what is considered a hard science fiction setting for me (except for the unverified part about cultivating immortals, who knows if the protagonist's brain is a micro-robot lathe, using radiation as kinetic energy to create micro-intramuscular robots as an auxiliary)

Can Tomato produce such high-end works? As long as you don't jump around and become a god later, those who like science fiction can come and watch it.

This book is a bit real at 8 o'clock. This book should be published. With such solid writing style, narrative rhythm, and characterization, even the deliveryman who appears for a few words is vivid, and he also has solid scientific skills. It is not inconsistent at all. The first time he saved a fusion reactor and used deuterium instead of tritium for ignition is a real detail. It is harder than what Ma Boyong wrote, but the sense of humor is not bad at all. 5 Star review

Although it was funny at first, once you get into the plot, science fiction, suspense, horror, and even horror elements are integrated very comprehensively. If you write it well, I think your novel has great potential for film and television adaptation. Maybe one day a company will take a fancy to it and it will skyrocket.

People who really take it into consideration probably don't have time to come to the comment area to talk at length. This book is different from those cool novels that closely revolve around the protagonist. The setting has not collapsed. The stages of this book can be divided into no one recognizing "it", guessing the existence of "it", verifying "it", and fighting "it". I just saw more than a hundred chapters and haven't had time to read the rest. This is the systematic content of some popular novels in Science and Technology Literature+. It's just that most people who like to read the system want to read cool articles, and they belong to the wrong reading group. Because the system represents "no need to endure hardship" or super get twice the result with half the effort. Others rely on hard work and I rely on system rewards. Therefore, this article is a bit "funny" for those who just love to read science fiction, but it is too deep for those who love to read cool articles. It's like having unlimited firepower in a hard bar and having a fight with people who are ranked kings.

Very fresh content and a bit funny, please continue to create

No, where has this immortal cultivator gone? What does opening a company have to do with the protagonist? Why write in such detail? And that Li Xia

I originally thought that Tomato would be like other novels, with pretentiousness and slaps in the face at the end, but you didn't tell me that it was so good. It takes a different path from all the novels on Tomato (at least the ones I've read). The content is very funny in funny parts, and the suspenseful parts are also very suspenseful. The only drawback is that the author does not correct typos.

Seeing that the logic is self-consistent, the expression is fluent, and the ideas are surprising, especially chapter 105, I feel that this book has just begun. The previous chapters are all prologues. If it can be maintained, it can only be said to be the first of this kind of online articles in China. This book should be at least 9.8 Or above. Of course, the premise is that the person reading this online article has at least 30 years of online reading experience.

The only sci-fi show on Tomato has a real sci-fi flavour, not a super-man fight disguised as sci-fi. The framework is very simple. In fact, it is about climbing technology and fighting aliens, but the author's writing is very profound, and the humor has rigorous foreshadowing. It looks a bit like the Three-Body Problem. You think it is systematic writing, but it is actually science. You think it is cultivation of immortality, but it is actually science. Regardless of whether the author's theory is correct or not, at least he can justify it without seeing any obvious contradictions. Because the emotional line was abandoned, I can only say that it is a pity. The heroine of this book is more important than Zhuang Yan is to Luo Ji, and Yun Tianming is to Cheng Xin. The number of words is not enough. As long as it doesn't end badly, I think it's really a masterpiece. The only shortcomings are that the title is too abstract and there are too many typos and omissions.