Ling Cage: My Brother and I Are Seriously Strong

This is very well written! I hope the author continues writing; I'm curious to see how these two big shots will affect the plans of the young emperor, Bai Yuekui. I feel like this Smurf's personality might be more suited to the Space Husky, but the Space Wolf and Gray Knight are too sensitive 🤦

It's alright. It reminds me of a novel where the protagonist, a member of the Imperial Guard, hands over his armor to a complete stranger he's only known for a short time after he goes up to the lighthouse!

After reading everyone's suggestions, I want to say that you are welcome to share any questions or suggestions you may have about the setting while reading. I will also reread my work on this account after I finish writing, including paragraph comments, book reviews, and comments. I read all your suggestions and will revise accordingly. Thank you.

I actually think that if Power Sword and Alayes were to collide, Power Sword would be cut in two instantly. Power Sword can cut through other warships, unless it's a Primarch. Furthermore, the White Moon Sunflower can create sonic booms, so you can imagine how fast it is.

Absolutely fantastic. It perfectly captures the fighting prowess of Astartes.

Yes, but the details still need polishing; we can add some settings.

Good-looking, I love watching, keep it up!

The author's family hasn't read a time-travel novel like this in a long time. Brother, it's great that people travel through time together. Keep up the good work, author! And these two brothers, their loyalty was unbreakable, unlike the brothers in other novels who are like enemies.

So, who is the male lead in the end? Are they both male leads? And who will be the female lead?

It's pretty good overall. The author is a newcomer and is very receptive to advice.