After He Transmigrated, He Was Blessed with More Children and More Blessings

The subject matter is relatively new and the background is very interesting, but the plot is a bit narrow in the setting of cultivating immortals. What makes me uncomfortable the most is that the feudal system in it is too obvious. For example, when I was pregnant for the first time, I thought it would be a boy. Can't we be more relaxed? We insist on male inheritance, so why don't we have brothers in the setting? So it feels like we are writing romance under the skin of two male protagonists. You have to know that the theme of dual male protagonists is unique in that I love you regardless of whether there are descendants. Although I am also interested in the setting of having children, I must make good use of this setting and not let this setting become a feminization stain in the novel. Finally, I hope that the author will continue to work hard and that his writing will get better and better [blowing kiss]

Invincible, how can you become an immortal through a fetus and fight for favor in the dynasty's harem to have children? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The character portrayal is very clear, but there are too many secondary identities of each character, which is a bit confusing. Appropriate foreshadowing and hidden identities can make the content less bland, but too many and difficult to grasp, it is a bit inconsistent and affects the perception. However, the overall main line of the story is still well written and can attract people to read. However, the author sometimes uses inappropriate words. This is not the way to leave suspense. It is mainly to give the author room for imagination rather than vague concepts. All in all, the author's imagination is still very rich. It can be seen that the author hopes that this work will focus on all the elements he wants in his mind, but too many elements are piled up and it is a bit cumbersome. When the writing is not up to a certain level, try to stay in one line. Come on, author!

How to say it? [Thinking] It's nice to say it looks good, and it doesn't look good to say it doesn't look good. I usually watch Shuang Jie, mainly because of her devotion. Although I know that Gong has no love for those concubines, he only loves Shou. But attacking is unclean, so I just wanted to do it this time, which made me look a little bit awkward. I skipped and watched, and I felt like I didn't miss anything. The writings inside are all normal palace fighting writings, and everyone knows the methods. What's the problem? [Exploration] I know that in harem literature like this, it is common to attack uncleanness. But we are all modern children, so our concept of partners is not the same as in ancient times. Since ancient times, emperors have been ruthless, and true feelings are rarely spoken. From every angle, the relationship between me and the concubines was due to interests. It's also mentioned in this article. Gong is a person who values ​​the country more. Let me give a few examples first, of course it is just my personal opinion. For example, [note] ① the status of the concubines. Considering that it is for profit, Gong may be decided in advance through his family background, and the second is the number of times he sleeps with him. After all, Gong had no love for the concubines before he met Shou. Therefore, in order to reflect the importance of the concubines, they promoted their status by sleeping with them. Which concubine has a larger family background and is helpful to attack, the higher her status and the more times she sleeps with her. (Except for Shou, because Gong loves him, there is no need to consider the background) [Read carefully] [Note] ② Regarding the issue of heirs. He attacked the harem with three thousand beauties, but he had no heirs until he met Shou. I personally think it's also because of interests. There were so many concubines, all of whom had slept with him, so it was impossible to say that he had no heirs. Then this might be a way to attack yourself. After all, the emperor can decide who he wants to have and who he wants not to have. Heirs will involve many things. For example, if someone makes a mistake and wants to get rid of someone, if he has an heir, he will lighten the punishment for the sake of the heir. Then interests are involved and cannot be completely eliminated. (I love feeling, so I don't think about it) [Taste it carefully] [Note] ③ Attack versus receive. Because some things cannot be given to others, Gong has already given him everything he can give (please refer to ④) [Learned]. This is not a choice. Besides, when it comes to love, no one can control what you and I want. We can at best be spectators, and what we think is our business. [Note] ④Then why does Gong love Shou so much but not promote him to a lower position so quickly? Wouldn't it be more revealing of Shou's love? [What] There was already a queen before Shou. If you want the queen to abdicate, you have to depose her, or both parties agree to make peace. But the queen is very aggressive, so she will not agree to divorce. Then it can only be abolished, but it cannot be abolished for no reason. In addition, being a queen requires co-managing the Sixth House, which also requires work. Therefore, it is hard work to follow Gong. Even if Gong has the idea of ​​abolishing the queen, he cannot do so casually. But if you do something wrong, you can use this to get rid of your queen. Then again, it really doesn't make sense to punish a person if he has done nothing wrong. [Rolls eyes]

It's nice to watch, the two male protagonists have a fairy background and have a child system. It's the element I love, but there are too few updates and it's not enough to watch [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Super pretty! This is my favorite childbirth article [blowing kiss]! ! !

Cultivation, entering the palace, and having children. I like the type very much [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] It's good to read the author's big words in one go, and the protagonist is also sweet [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Looking forward to the author's book Da Da Zhouzhou I hope the author will tell Xiao Taohua not to like Chu Huaijin anymore I look forward to the author's great extras and the subsequent lives of Little Peach Blossom, Little Begonia, Little Orange, Little Orange, and Little Youyou.

It looks good, but it's too slow [angry] [angry] [angry] Update soon, it must be updated to the end [crying] [crying]

It's good-looking, super good-looking, Bai Bai is really cute [love] [love] [love], I want to watch the later part of Cultivation to Immortality, the author will update it quickly, it's not enough [love] [love] [love]

The author has written a lot of articles, and the setting of this book is very interesting. [Adoration][Adoration] I would like to give you some advice: You can add more description of the environment and less verbal dialogue when creating, so that your words will be much better. [Send heart] [Send heart] (Actually, I don't understand it very well, but I hope that your article will be better, so I mentioned it weakly, and I hope you can consider it. If you feel bad, you can ignore my comment (人㉨)♡)