In One Piece, I Prepaid My Way to Kingship

Darkness, Shadow, Gluttony—three Devil Fruits! If you feed any object the Mythical Zoan-type Vampire Fruit, and then use the Gluttony Fruit to eat that object, then congratulations, you've become a four-Devil Fruit user!! 😏

For the last Devil Fruit ability, choose one that the author excels at, one that allows for imaginative development of the fruit's power, and one that can be depicted in fight scenes. Don't let the readers decide. Of course, the only important thing is to write about rare and unusual Devil Fruits.

Actually, I have an idea. If we gave Devil Fruits a soul, could we personify them?

The last fruit is from Momonosuke. It has stamina, recovery ability, attack power, and lightning can also increase attack power.

It's alright. The protagonist has a physique similar to Blackbeard's, currently consuming the Dark-Dark Fruit and the Rumble-Rumble Fruit, seemingly preparing for a third Devil Fruit. His overpowered ability is precognition, which he can continue to use by completing missions.

This is good. If it continues like this, it won't be abandoned. It'll definitely be around 8.5 points...

Not bad, four stars. A few flaws, but not too bad.

It's very well written. Just follow your outline and keep it up!

Indeed, a fine piece of writing.

It's pretty good, you can check it out.