I Transform and Redeem Myself with a Smile, Only to Be Chased by the Heroine in Tears

Wow, this book is really the only novel I like on Tomato. Although there are still fewer novels at the moment, the protagonist and several heroines are well-characterized. There are no flaws in the plot, and the plot is not watery. The protagonist's relationship is not like other novels. He fell in love with the heroine as soon as he was reincarnated, and the heroines also fell in love with the protagonist step by step. I hope the author will keep it up, and I will definitely follow it until the end

Yun tide is still not courageous enough. Now that she has a wife, wouldn't the problem be solved if the husband takes her away together and makes a monogamous couple? (Bushi)

Chapter 53, the end of the first world How should I put it? Strictly speaking, this does not seem to be a fast-traveling novel (the fast-traveling novel in my impression is one in which you obtain various system props in one world and then continue to become stronger hh), but this one seems to be for the completion of the plot in the end? (That is, the protagonist survives and gets killed, etc.) The characters in the book are very interesting. The main supporting character fell in love but did not force it. Instead, he decisively let go after proving that he really had no chance. In other words, there is no blood pressure plot that stretches for dozens of chapters (only for now) I'm not good at expressing myself, that's all hahh

The protagonist's emotional intelligence is a bit low and his emotions are a bit complicated, but the author's direct attitude towards education and training makes up for this. Education and training is everything, everything is for education and training😋

I love reading it. This is a small book that I haven't read for a long time, but I have read it including the large one. The overall plot is very good. The image of the perfect wife in the first volume has won my heart. It's a pity that the title of the book determines that the protagonist will only fall in love with the heroine. The female supporting characters in each volume are actually regret Yun Xi and Ye Nan are really good. I hope the author can fill in the extra if lines one by one at the end. To be honest, I think the meal replacement literature in the second volume affects the perception very much. The author wants to write the affectionate image of Ye to enhance the sense of regret. After all, meal replacements look for similar people. In fact, this is not the case. In fact, the more you love that person, the less likely you are to find a substitute when you can't get it. When you arrange a substitute for Ye, it gives people the impression that Ye actually likes the face of the protagonist, so finding a similar one gives people a superficial feeling, because truly loving someone is definitely not because of a face, but a kind of temperament, a special feeling that a person brings to people, so I think the meal replacement literature in the second volume is not good.

It's good to read. The author wrote the first world very well, but after reading it, I felt that the ending was a bit sloppy. The business situation of the restaurant in the later period, whether the old emperor was a time traveler, and whether the protagonist discovered the strangeness of the modern dishes made by the old emperor, or was it mentioned in the article? The wedding of the protagonist and the heroine, as well as the relationship between the two after they declared their relationship, I hope the author can write an extra chapter [grievance] or change the transitional chapter. The protagonist's emotions are blocked. After I finished reading, there was no system to block it for me. I will inevitably lose my energy in the second world. It's all my fault that the author wrote the first world so well [angry] In fact, it's true that by slightly changing the transitional chapter, the heroines of several worlds are connected, implying that they are essentially the same person, so that the readers' emotions about the heroine of the previous world are transferred to the heroine of the next world, and it also solves the contradiction of the single heroine in the first world having pure love, but falling in love with another heroine in the next world OOC. The main thing is that it can make people ignore the cramped ending of the first world. After the chapter, let's continue the relationship in the next world.

Look at other authors, and then look at yourself. There is still time to play with shovel @

Haokanhaokan, the author controls the plot and the psychology of the characters very accurately, the subject matter is not cliché, and the writing is excellent. However, it seems that the world view set by the author is not small at present, and subsequent extensions are worth savoring.

To be honest, the plot is very cliche. But I don't know why I just can't help but watch it. Especially beautiful. It just feels like the volume is too short. But I can only read one volume, and I'm afraid I'll lose my mind if I read it again. Although I haven't read it, I would like to give it a good review and support it.

The emotions are very delicate and very beautiful. In my opinion, it is much better than the Orange book. Come on, author, this book is written according to the standards of the first world, without castration, and more and more people will definitely read it [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] After starting over, it can be seen that the book has been carefully thought out. Although it is still the same narrative mode as the old Lily novel, the writing method cleverly avoids the important and focuses on the people, allowing readers to see a variety of real and rich emotions from the protagonist, supporting characters and even the minor characters. In this way, although everything is monotonous and the story can be predictable, the emotional curves of the characters in the book make the story fuller. After reading a lot of Lily articles, I found that many Lily articles are based on fantasy frameworks. It may be that reality cannot breed and nourish this kind of pure love, so why not ignore the so-called universal love logic. Does Meng Xin retain memories after experiencing each world? Does the person Meng Xin falls in love with in the new world have to be the same protagonist from the previous world? I think this is not important, and there is no need to add a so-called main god space to explain affectionately (the Baiwen mode I looked at before) because fantasy itself cannot show love. The interaction and pull between Meng Xin and the protagonist are just a medium for showing love, while the readers focus on love itself. So I think it's good to reduce the system's role like the first world, unlike the traditional system of Baihewen that turns favorability into numerical values ​​and love tasks. It made me feel like I was tasting a real story, with a long aftertaste. Finally, cheers to the author! The story is wonderful! Looking forward to 5 updates every day! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]