You Were Supposed to Stream Ghost Hunting, So Why Are You Dating Her?

I hope the author will continue to cooperate with Erdanzi to complete this novel. Although the competition among sand sculpture animations is fierce, good works are more worthy of attention. I hope this novel and this sand sculpture animation will be completed. It's better presented, the plot is good, and the animations made by the blogger are also good.

It's good to watch. I think this rating is a bit low. It looks like it's a single female protagonist. I hope it will be a single female protagonist in the future. The female protagonist Bai Tan is quite unique and quite funny. However, the fighting part is a bit monotonous. I hope it can be improved. Opening a harem is speechless

This book is a harem novel, so don't read if you mind. I think it's well written. It's not that kind of witty writing, it's very brainless. Just kill, kill, cheat, kill, kill. The protagonist has never been deflated. Very immersive 🤤

The author has shown good thinking in conception and grasp of the theme, and can develop a narrative around the central idea, which is worthy of recognition. However, during the reading process, I found that there are some areas in the article that can be further optimized, especially in terms of the refinement of language expression. Specifically, the sentences in some paragraphs are lengthy and the content is repetitive, causing the overall rhythm to be slightly sluggish. For example, [specifically quote one or two lengthy sentences or paragraphs]. Although these descriptions are detailed, if they can be slightly deleted and the core information is extracted, the article will be more compact and powerful. Remember, good writing is about being "succinct and concise," using the fewest words to convey the most meaning. In addition, trying to add some specific details or vivid metaphors can help make the article more attractive and persuasive, while also effectively avoiding generalities. For example, when describing a scene, you can enhance the reader's sense of involvement by describing sensory elements such as color and sound. I encourage you to pay more attention to the simplicity of language and accuracy of expression in your future writing. Every time before you write, you might as well think about it: "Does this sentence have to be said? Can it be expressed in a more concise way?" Developing this habit will make your writing smoother and your work more attractive. Keep up the good work, I believe that through continuous practice and improvement, you will make greater progress on the road of writing!

I have read Chapter 25 so far. The first copy is well written and the characters are well created. Single women are the best. I hope there won't be a harem in the future! ! It's so good to write in the front, but I'm going to have a harem in the back, don't care, let's eat together

I'll give it four points. This male protagonist is so strong that I see him every second. There aren't that many love scenes in the later stages. Hey, I always feel that there are some shortcomings. But the general content of the book is still very distinctive. Recommended

The eldest heroine has a full plot. I hope there will be more similar plots for other heroines in the future without weakening the eldest heroine's presence. Then this book can be rated 9 or above for the plot [laughter]

It's pretty cool. For people who play your Mijia games, you can jump in as you like. After all, you should already be familiar with things like first effect and later cause, and whether a knife is not a knife. If you want to put it bluntly, it may be that the protagonist's early performance is a bit super.

Yes, I can read it. So far, it's a single girl. Although it's official, it's headed by the protagonist. I guess some people ran away before finishing the whole thing. As long as the author plays his role normally, the book won't be crooked. The ones that are poisonous at the beginning are those bastard stories written by AI and outlined by AI. If you read too many of them, people will get stressed [eating melon]

It's so good. I've been surfing the Internet since I saw the author. I love reading it. There are too many memes, and Bai Tan is cute. You might as well make me the male protagonist, so that I can live happily with Bai Tan. Hehehehe...👍🎄◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞🎄