After the System Turned on Me, the Yandere Heroine Set Her Sights on Me

It's very well written, and I really like the theme. The resistance system is definitely a highlight. As for the female lead, I hope the male lead only loves one woman and there aren't too many ambiguous scenes with other female leads. Normal interactions are of course necessary, but I also hope that not all the female characters have romantic feelings for the male lead. Some pure friendships would be nice. The above are purely personal opinions.

I did a task to create one for myself, though giving myself five stars feels a bit shameless. This is the first novel I've finished. My initial thought was simple: the male protagonist disobeyed the system's orders and spared the female protagonist, thus altering the world's ending. And so I picked up my pen and started writing...

It's really good. I read all 100+ pages in one go. How should I put it? I was hoping for a single female lead, okay? Don't just write about one female lead. I was really startled when you wrote about Fina liking something earlier. Thankfully, it wasn't love, but please don't do that again. It's really clever. Anyway, the novel's concept and various themes are quite good.

The early parts were well-written, and it was clear the author intended to create a level-by-level progression system, pulling the female protagonist from a bad ending back to a good one. However, the ending felt rushed; perhaps the author got bored or the writing faltered a bit. Overall, though, it was still acceptable and quite to my liking.

If it's a harem story, it can go on indefinitely, progressing through the original game's plot, rescuing other heroines—the world-building could be very long. However, if it's a single female lead story, and the male lead saves many, many female supporting characters, but ultimately chooses Navel, it actually pleases neither side.

I promised the author five stars! Oh, baby, holy water, please purify my soul! So author, please write faster, I'm hungry! 🥺🥺🥺 Ugh, I'm going crazy... I'll add a follow-up review later!

It's a good piece of yandere fiction, worth reading. However, the Cthulhu elements are only borrowed from the monster images and some settings, and can only be considered a minor "seasoning".

I wasn't a fan of yandere novels at first, but I clicked on it out of curiosity after seeing the cover image of Navel. Surprisingly, I was quite charmed by the sweetness of the story. The yandere elements were just right, without being annoying.

The pace isn't that fast, but it's very lyrical. It calmly tells a story, a dream, and I listen quietly under the starry sky, listening to the passage of time and the flow of adventure in another world.

Although there are still some minor shortcomings in the writing style, overall... The pacing is decent, and the plot is interesting. The characters' personalities are also very distinct. The premise is also quite interesting, involving a system conspiracy theory. Overall, it's not entirely mindless; there are some subtle elements hidden within.