The Rise of an Immortal Sect: Starting with a Dilapidated Taoist Temple!

Yes, but it would be better if more realistic Taoism and related content are integrated, such as transmission, ordination, and talismans, to form the own characteristics of this world. I would like to give you a suggestion. When you visit the Li family, you can say that you are a branch of a large sect. You have to go to the sect every few years to report on your work. If you don't go, you will find out the reason. In this way, you can arouse the fear of the Li family.

It is different from other Gouyouliu or other immortal cultivation novels of Long Aotian style. It is also a cultivation novel, but it is different from other themes. The storyline is coherent and the characterization is not bad. Let's start with this.

The plot is pretty good, the character setting is okay, but the details need to be improved. For example, the protagonist gets opportunities too easily, especially when killing the Liu family monks; in addition, the characters' emotions are too intense, giving people the feeling of using too much force; the protagonist is constantly being targeted, and the way he spends his time is very stiff and too deliberate. But overall, the novel is quite readable. I hope these issues can be taken into consideration and improved in the future [Like][Like][Like]

It looks good so far, the characters have distinct personalities, and there are shadows of traditional fantasy novels. The sect is developing, and everyone is contributing. It is still the little Karami in the Qi refining period, but there are too few. More updates.

A great book that cannot be buried. But I also want to give a little bit of my own opinions: 1. In addition to the necessary plot advancement to reduce the internal fighting among the human race, we can develop outward. After all, there is still a vast world waiting for the protagonist to explore. 2. Concisely describe the emotional aspects of the protagonist (it seems that this book is mainly about career, there are too many descriptions, it is a bit out of the ordinary, you can become a Taoist companion) 3. The development of Dharma lineage can be regarded as the main development after returning from the coast and becoming the golden elixir (gathering food widely and slowly becoming king). I am very happy to see the development of many Taoist temples in the subjective world. 4. Reduce the description of the protagonist as a dog. In fact, I know that I believe that more people know it, but the description can be simplified. In the early stage, it was indeed a bit frustrating. Best, I hope the author has good results with this book, and I will add more and more The weather is turbulent, but my sun is prosperous I wish all my Taoist friends peace and success, and everything goes well

The writing style of this book is very fluent. It does not rely on settings and imagination, but it is really comfortable and smooth to read. I suspect that the author has a vest, so I will give it five stars for the time being (I think this book is no less than Tomato's other fairy tale, Xuan Jing Gao Hang)

Liangcao is well written. The only problem is the plot. The protagonist is constantly being targeted, which is a bit deliberate. The protagonist is tired, the reader is tired from reading, and there is little leisure time.

The author's writing style is really good, and the writing is flesh-and-blood!

Update quickly to see those upgrades are too fast and too many, and then suddenly turn around and look at this kind of fighting life and death because of a small level, it is quite good

It's really good-looking, I recommend it to everyone, but the quantity is small. Still have to fatten up. People passing by came to cheer. Don't ask for such a good work, it's too bad.