One Piece: I, Moria, Become a Dragon

Keep it up, don't abandon it! I've read many One Piece novels where the authors say they'd abandon the story if the power levels got inconsistent. Unless the protagonist can defeat an admiral with a single punch, the power levels won't be inconsistent.

Good, worth a look. Moria has many strong recruits at his age. Currently, he has: King the Wildfire, Bullet the Devil's Descendant, Marco the Phoenix, Higuma the Mountain Bandit King, Yasopp the Top Sniper, and Crockerman the Black Cat. As the first mate of the Red-Haired Sea Group, recruiting him is essential. This way, the protagonist can earn the title of "First Mate Reaper."

I've read a few dozen chapters so far, and it's pretty good. The plot is excellent, and the writing is decent. There are a few minor flaws, but they're insignificant. Overall, it's above average for fanfiction, and very good for Tomato (a popular Chinese author). I hope the author continues to improve and doesn't cut it short like with his previous work.

He's a protagonist with Moria's name and bloodline, but his deeds are different from Moria's. However, the book is alright; there are very few flaws.

The writing is alright, but that ship is too small, only 8 meters tall. How tall is Moria?

It looks pretty good; hopefully, it won't get too involved with the revolutionary army.

The rating shouldn't be so low, right? The four mythical beasts had a pretty good start. I wonder if they'll add any romance elements; it would be a shame if they didn't.

Fruits should have a compatibility factor, right? Fruits seem to have originated from human dreams, and they do find suitable people, except in special circumstances. They're generally unsuitable for vampires 🧛, though fire-type fruits are more likely to be suitable.

So far, this novel is very well written, not dragging, and the plot is clear.

The Rocks Pirates are driven by self-interest! The Moria Pirates are driven by a bond that will last longer.