A City Between Dimensions? No, It's a Center for Mending Regrets!

To be honest, the best world for Rimuru to collect souls and become the Awakened Demon King would be Pitch Black Bullets [Learned] Collect more points and use them for his subordinates [Like]

See it's okay now. The quality is quite good. Although there are some bad aspects, it is still good compared to other anime. The plot is a bit flawed and the writing is a bit poor. But depending on the author's attitude, I'll give it 4 stars.

Well, it's a very warm and everyday Xiaobai Zhu Tianwen. You can take a look. Like ordinary short stories, the characteristic is that the plot is not layered enough, the important plot is mixed, and the secondary plot is a bit detailed. The protagonist doesn't have any obvious personality traits, he is just the classic Asashi. It's a very decent article, without any poisonous points, so it's already of high quality. If you have any suggestions, I would recommend Fulian's World, and Suqing, Dungeon. Maybe you can get involved with some girl bands, or Marvel (if you want to increase your fighting power), Naruto, etc. Harry can do that too. In short, you can add what you like, and the cost of trial and error is not high. After all, the tone is upgrade and gentle daily life, the main world is Rimuru. It's so poisonous that unless the author wants to kill off a few popular characters, it's impossible to die violently. After all, the audience has been determined. For me, it's okay to upgrade slowly. It's best to travel through several worlds. Upgrading is secondary, gentleness and character interaction, character creation is the main priority. Only if a character can be OOC well can it retain people, such as those fan works that use character templates.

It's a lighthearted and funny story that doesn't overwhelm the combat power, and the plot is also fun. Slime fan fiction is already very good. What kind of operation is it to kill and resurrect these nightmares? It's like child's play if you ask me to do what I say.

[Laughs] The writing is quite good. I just read Chapter 25, but I skipped some chapters in the process. This novel is very rich in content. All the Demon Slayers from the Demon Slayer World and the world of Rimuru are intertwined together. It has colorful daily life, interesting dialogues, vivid images, the super strength of the protagonist, etc. This novel has many advantages. But maybe it's just me who thinks that there are some inappropriate things [crying]. The first is the use of special expressions in dialogue. If it only appears between the protagonist and the heroine, it is a bonus, making the heroine's image more three-dimensional and lively. But obviously, the use of this special expression can be used by anyone, that is, except for the male protagonist. In this way, the "speciality" of this special expression is suddenly lost [crying] Then there is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine. The description of these relationships is not obvious. After the Demon Slayer members of Demon Slayer World were transferred to the Rimuru world, the protagonist and the heroine did not see obvious emotional development (Demon Slayer World accepted one). This made me not understand whether to accept the heroine or not, or even understand which ones were the heroines. Secondly, when fusing the elf in Shizuka (forgot her name), the elf is male, and the protagonist means that if the male elf cooperates well, he will be given a female elf in the future (the life of a slime in a shop opened by a beautiful female elf has been described before, and the protagonist was still in Demon Slayer World at that time ), I don't know if he intends to give these, if he intends to give him a girl from the protagonist. If possible, why is the elf in Shizuka's body not set to be female from the beginning? In other words, does the protagonist still need to discuss it with him? Shouldn't it be easy to control him at the peak of Nascent Soul? [Crying] Then there is the description of the protagonist's behavior. For example, when the Ghost Slayers came to their own world, when dealing with problems, the protagonist seemed like a child who suddenly had power, and his state of mind did not keep up. It may be related to the author's theme. The protagonist did not reflect the feeling of having transcendent strength. Finally, in terms of plot, the daily writing is good, but it is about supporting roles. There are many plots and descriptions of supporting roles. There is nothing wrong with this. This can enrich the content of the article and make the characters more concrete. If it is handled properly, this novel is quite excellent. However, as for the protagonist, I always feel that the protagonist does not look like the protagonist. This is a feeling like reading a novel, that is, the protagonist is placed among the supporting characters, and you can immediately recognize him as the protagonist. But this protagonist didn't give me such a feeling. I felt that the protagonist could be him or not. Such a protagonist suddenly lost his indispensability and irreplaceability, and it felt a bit boring. But overall, the quality of the novel is still very good, with rich content, novel themes, and a rare novel that shines brightly. Of course, all comments are just personal opinions and may not be universal, just take a look [cry] [cry] [cry] [salute] [salute] [salute]

It looks good. I really like the character of the protagonist. They are people who have nothing to do with each other. The protagonist just knows them after watching the anime. It does not mean that the protagonist is kind to them and they can make trouble unreasonably.

Tomato is a gold-mining place in history. It's pretty good. But the writing skills need to be improved and are there too many emojis? There are basically no other major problems, so go for it!

Keep writing, if it were you, you would write better. (Shisui secret picture) [smile]

Can I go to Spider's World? I've been craving for the white-haired and red-eyed spiders there for a long time.

Recruiting girls is incomplete [eating melons]. Give advice to the author A main world, and then positioning and traveling through the world. Every time you go to a world, you must conquer it, and then pack up all the girls, including those who are capable, and bring them back to the main world. The sub-world becomes a continuous mine. Slowly developed into a cosmic empire. You be the king! And so on. If you don't have any skills, bring back Big Big Wolf, Pleasant Goat, Tom Jerry and Bald Qiang first. Continuous development of the Galaxy Universe [eating melon]