Haji Cat Helps Me Become Haji High

It is a novel with great potential, let me share my suggestions. The background and life of the protagonist are not shown enough, and the readers lack understanding, involvement, and identification with the protagonist (it may also be a problem of too little); There are many novels of this kind of mysterious arrival. If the novel wants to stand out, it must have distinctive features. The character's characteristics and personality must be sufficiently three-dimensional; At present, the number of words in the novel is very small, and not many people will read it if it is recommended. The situation will be much better when it is more than 100,000 words, so the author, come on!

Your words are like magic, and every plot is so gripping that people can't help but be immersed in it. After reading it in one breath, you still feel that you are still not finished. The story structure is exquisite, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and your profound writing skills are revealed between the lines. Reading your novel is simply an ultimate literary feast. The plot has ups and downs, the foreshadowing is clever, and every turn is unexpected but reasonable. People can't help but admire your idea. The delicate emotional description touches people's hearts. I feel like I am witnessing the joys and sorrows in the story with my own eyes, and I am completely transported into another world by your words. From the fascinating beginning to the endless aftertaste at the end, every detail is handled just right. It is indeed a rare masterpiece that people can't help but savor again and again. (My writing is no worse than that of the navy ꒰ *•ɷ•* ꒱)

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Let me give you the first five stars, hehe [blowing kiss]

The most important core point of the first major plot event is that the protagonist himself can fry fish at the first and second levels, but he can't touch it at any higher level. I also read that some book friends said that they ended up having an older child. In fact, it feels a bit like a mysterious chapter The protagonist can actually do something in the big event, but he can't actually affect anything, so in the end it doesn't actually change the ending. The writing effect is pretty good Several problems currently appear to be ——The arrangement of the female characters is a bit abstract. Sister Liu is basically forced into one chapter. It may be to consider that the protagonist, as a second-level novice, has no capital to seriously recruit a fourth-level teammate. This adds a little bit of rationality, but the look and feel is a bit cliché. ——The villain's hook seems to be a bit too wide, right? . ? The specifications are all placed on Adam and Eve. There is a high probability that there is not only one skill slot for the absorption effect. It is also a weakened version of the skill with an upper limit. However, the protagonist's cat's line has not yet been expanded. The so-called curtain may also be related to the fourth-order "domain". There are also third and fourth skill slots. It feels like a small problem. ——In the end, the protagonist felt that something was wrong and went to find someone because the task was not completed. However, it can also be explained that the instigator affected the subconscious. Although there was a vague feeling, it could not be confirmed. Finally, it was confirmed by Maomao's third-person anchor. ——The male protagonist's combat power is flying a little too fast, isn't it? Although the difference between the first and second levels in the setting is the breathing method, the curtain and mastery can still allow the male protagonist to play for a while longer at the first level. It feels a bit limited to the platform, and it is difficult to write long stories like mystery hahh Anyway, I finished it in the middle of the night. Come on, author!

Cats fuck people, cats are awesome People harass cats and break their sleep, people are bad

It's good, but it's already chapter 48, and the plot of Mao Mao has not yet unfolded, so the role of Mao Mao is to give a system?

I really like the rhythm and narrative of this book

The pace is neither fast nor slow, and the rendering of the plot is relatively relaxed, but it will also make people feel urgent at the climax. The world view is better, but more specific details need to be seen in the follow-up. Overall, it is a good new book, and I hope it will not be discontinued or unfinished. (◦˙▽˙◦)

It looks great, come on💪! Regardless of the plot, the characters are all to my liking [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]