Haji Cat Helps Me Become Haji High

This is a novel with great potential, and I'd like to offer my suggestions. The protagonist's background and life aren't sufficiently explored, leading to a lack of reader understanding, immersion, and identification (this could also be due to the limited amount of information).

Your writing is like magic; every plot point is captivating, drawing the reader in completely. Even after finishing it in one go, you still feel wanting more. The story structure is exquisite, the characters vividly portrayed, and your profound writing skills are evident in every line. Reading your novel is truly a literary feast.

When you update once, minor flaws are magnified, and the immaturity of your writing is criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot's progress is given more attention. When you update three times, small praises begin to emerge, and the number of unread readers starts to decrease.

I'll give the first five stars, hehe 😘

The most important core point of the first major plot event is that the protagonist can easily defeat first and second-tier fish, but can't reach higher levels. Some readers have mentioned that the ending was a bit of a letdown, which feels somewhat similar to a chapter in Mystery Stories where the protagonist can do something in a major event but can't actually influence anything, so the ending…

The cat is used as a pendant, the cat is harassed by a wealthy person while the cat is sleeping, the person is bad.

It's good, but it's already chapter 48 and the cat's story hasn't unfolded yet, so the cat's role is just to provide a system?

I really love the pacing and narrative of this book.

The pacing is neither too fast nor too slow, making the plot development relatively relaxed, although the climaxes can also feel suspenseful. The world-building is quite good, but more details will have to wait and see what happens next. Overall, it's a good new book, and I hope it won't be abandoned or have a bad ending. (◦˙▽˙◦)

It's really good, keep it up! 💪 Both the plot and the characters are right up my alley. 🥰🥰🥰