Ancient Immortal Venerable Takes on a Disciple in the Modern Era and Sets the Entertainment World Ablaze

It's quite good to read. Apart from some imperfections in small details, it's still very good as a short story. It can fill in some pitfalls, but there is a little bit of interaction in some aspects. But, after all, it is a short story, and you can't ask people to fill it all in dozens of chapters. It is really short, so short, so short, I almost finished it in one day. I've finished reading. I really love the love story between Zhu and Shengsheng. I really like Shengsheng's character. She is really as gentle as jade. Although she doesn't know much about love, she is willing to understand. She also has a high martial arts value. Her gentle, friendly and non-alienated personality makes people feel comfortable physically and mentally. Zhu is also very good. Don't ask me why. I call him so-and-so because I can't remember his name at all. It's okay. I still think he's pretty good. Although he has a cold personality, he is gentle and doting on the inside. From the beginning, people feel that he should be made into a dog until later. He also recognizes his own feelings very quickly, unlike other attacks and so on. Alas, I won't mention it anymore. It's not good to mention it too much. Anyway, it's very interesting, but it's too short. It's really too short. I wasn't persuaded to quit by the score at first, but I was persuaded by the number of chapters. It's really too short, but I persisted and read it in the end. I hope you can get away with it and have a stomachache. Although there are some bad points, it's actually okay overall.

(Except for the extras) The main text is finished. Although the two protagonists have passed away, this article is BE. However, as the saying goes, "two people are in love, and they will never be apart until they grow old", this article is HE. The two young lovers have been sweet for a lifetime. The last two chapters made me cry. I couldn't accept the death of the main character, so I cried. This book is highly recommended [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy]

I don't know why, but I just feel that there are many passages in this book that really touched my heart.

6/10 Wow, this book is so sweet, and it's not long. You can read it in half a day. Although I don't know why this rating is a bit low. In fact, this is a pretty sweet article about the entertainment industry. I think the writing style is okay. There are many explanations of love in it. Shou Bao is a heartthrob (in my personal opinion). (However, I reasonably suspect that the author finished it so quickly because he didn't know how to edit it, hahaha. I feel that the author is still a novice) I really like the character design of the main character, she is a cool and beautiful lady. Seeing his ignorant state of not understanding the world, I felt that he was like a drop of crystal clear dew, pure and integrating the spiritual energy of heaven and earth into one thing. Such a baby is really lovable. The character design of the protagonist is also very good. He is fake, weak, sinister and green. He really treats his wife with integrity, and he is so good at talking about love. Bonus points for a man who can talk about love! Let's talk about what I personally think is a shortcoming. It's a bit too natural for the protagonist Gong to fall in love with the protagonist Shou. Think about it, a person who left you with your irresponsible aunt for a whole year and lived happily with money (although he is not our Chi Bao himself) doesn't have a trace of resentment? He actually fell in love with Chi Bao in just a few days. In an environment like his, Gong Bao's character would probably be more paranoid and dark. Although this article has shortcomings, it is still very good! It can be used as a buffer after reading the abuse. Big cheers for the author! The writing is really great and there is a lot of room for improvement.

I like this article very much and it's heartwarming. It would be better if there were more extra stories about the world of cultivating immortals! The days when the two of them grew old slowly in the human world were very warm, but the scene where they left one after another made me cry! It was really fun for the two to reunite in the world of cultivating immortals. Zhu Jun is the soul of the white lion. In fact, there was foreshadowing in the past. I vaguely felt it, and I didn't confirm it until I saw the plot of the final world! I wish the two of you a long, beautiful and happy old age~

No, this book must get a 9.0 Score! ! ! There are really very few plots that tell the story of two people meeting, getting to know each other, falling in love, and then joining hands for the rest of their lives! ! But it blends in very well! ! The plot doesn't drag on, and the twists are very smooth~ This gag about lifespan really makes me cry whenever I watch it! ! (No ky!! «Broken Jade» was the first book that made me cry about this joke, and this is the second one! 🥹🤧) It's so real! It's really sad to watch them grow old like us… (But I really like long-lasting love stories! Whether it's real or virtual, I really like this feeling of slowly walking through a lifetime with my lover! It's so heartwarming!!) But it was okay in the end! ! They are back in fairyland again! ! It can last longer! ! Moreover, the story of "The Lion and the Fawn" that I wrote before, as well as the coquettishness of attacking and receiving, always gave him an animal feeling, which also matched up with the "White Lion Coquettishness" at the end!! In the end, they were all connected together, which really made me burst into laughter!! Maybe it's because I've been too sad lately, and I cried so much after watching it! All good! ! May they live forever and ever! ! (Although they have been together forever~but I still want to wish them well🥹🥹🥹)

After watching it, I finished watching it. The entertainment industry plus the fairy world, sweet love, the plot is super good, and the characters are also super good. After watching it, I said with emotion: I really want such a love❤️. Beautiful, recommended! ! ! The whole novel is sweet from beginning to end. I wish you a super love. Shengsheng was a little naive at first, (✪ω✪) so cute. Before she even realized that she had fallen in love, she was already using actions to prove that I love you. The two of them just doted on each other🥰. The setting of the first half of the entertainment industry variety show is also very interesting. Although there are secret admirers, we hope that the boss will show his sovereignty and there will be no bloody misunderstandings. When two people spend their lives together and finally die, it's still a little sad, but just a little🤏🏻. The extra chapter returns to the world of cultivating immortals. I really didn't expect that we Zhu Zong was the white lion in the story. When we first saw it, we thought it was just a simple memory. I really didn't expect that there was a clue buried in it.

It's good-looking, really good-looking, and very sweet. The last few modern chapters really made me cry to death. Zhu Jun and Chi Huansheng, I wish you happiness and joy in your world! ! ! I also wish them happiness and freedom! ! Goodbye [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] I will remember you! ! !

Well, it feels pretty good, but he cultivates the path of ruthlessness. I feel that he should know the meaning of love, but he does not understand the meaning of love. Another thing is okay, that is, in this era of cultivating immortals, there is no aura and no way to cultivate immortality, but the force value is still there.

It's very, very good to read, Shou is a heart-throb, and He Gong is also very sweet. It's the first one I've read, maybe because of its length, which is relatively short. It feels very warm and beautiful. After writing about their lives, the extra chapter returns to the world of cultivating immortals. I wish the young couple 99 [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]