Lord: All My Children Are Admirals

Four stars is encouragement. In fact, seeing the protagonist eating frozen fruits makes me feel useless. If you eat flashes and thunders, you can at least get high maneuverability and flight capabilities. But in the Western Fantasy world, no dog can eat frozen fruits. Which of the great magicians in Western Fantasy is not proficient in elemental abilities? There are plenty of ways to deal with you. Might as well eat a top-notch superman [vomit]

It's a novel idea, but the plot is quite ordinary. It's not as good as starting with the orphan who is free and has no worries about imposing enemies on a bond. The frozen fruit he eats is even more ordinary based on the comments. Since he wants the strongest dark fruit, surgery fruit, rubber fruit, Sun God Nika form, vampire fruit, thunder fruit, fish fruit, blue dragon form, or create a fruit that feels powerful, it all feels more powerful.

It's very interesting to read, and the ideas are very good. However, the author pushed too fast in establishing the territory. In just a few dozen chapters, he already has two territories. The constant fighting is not conducive to the subsequent development, and the combat power is easy to collapse. In fact, you can write about some interesting territorial life and daily farming life, as well as the daily training of the children. With so many children and various personalities, you can't just write about one person. You can read a popular novel to imitate it, like Building a Family in Pirates. Overall, it's worth watching. Please update it quickly and give it five stars.

Overall it's pretty good, but I'm a little disappointed that the protagonist's Devil Fruit is a frozen fruit! If it's a Shining Fruit, a Thunder Fruit, or a Blue Dragon Fruit, one of these 3 would be even better.

It's very good-looking. It has a plot similar to that of Moe King and The Fruit of One Piece, but there are still big differences. The author may have borrowed from Moe King's camp and also added a lot of his own elements. If you haven't seen Moe King, you can read this book.

It is a very good pirate novel. In today's cities, there are many pirate fan fiction novels about different worlds that are well written, but there are very few. This one is quite good. Come on, more people will definitely see it after writing it. Author, could you please stop being stuck on the word count? More than 2,000 words are a bit insufficient. Some plots can be written in more detail, otherwise it will feel too naive.

Not bad, but can we find a way to get the protagonist to eat a few more Devil Fruits?

The subject matter is very good, but I hope it can be patched so that you can eat multiple Devil Fruits.

The fantasy beast species hasn't come out yet?

It is a very good pirate system that I have read. After all, the overall combat power system of pirates is very messy, with powerful domineering techniques, physical strength, and various devil fruit abilities. To be honest, it is difficult to control. After all, combat power is determined by looking at many aspects. I hope to see this book finished and then the author will publish a self-written book about the pirate combat power system [smile]