Overlord: The Saint of Desire

It feels okay, and it fits my mentality of hating Bone King, but the author's writing skills are a bit lacking in meaning. I hope to write better in the future (it seems that one star and five stars are not included in the statistical score, and four stars are encouraged)

That's great, I'm not the only one who thinks that Lao Gu (King of Bones) does an amazing job to a beautiful girl like the Holy Queen [face covering]

The subject matter is very good. I was attracted to it by the Holy Queen. I have seen more than a hundred pictures. The plot is not as bad as the reviews said. Of course, there are still some poisonous points. For example, the protagonist is targeted by the nobles at the beginning and says that he wants to upgrade in a low-key manner. Things are so big later. Although it is to connect the plot of going to the Holy Kingdom later, it makes people look a little uncomfortable. Although there are some big and small poisonous points later (can't remember), but overall it is quite good. Also, I can't think of how the protagonist can win at the moment. The protagonist's level ability props and teammates are still too weak. I hope the protagonist can become stronger in the future [Like]

It's a pretty good book about upgrading and fighting monsters. It has some flaws, but they're not big problems. I've only read a dozen chapters, so let's see what happens next🤗 It is worth mentioning that the rhythm of the battle is well written, at least it is better than the average. Compared with the literary drama, the literary drama is not too disappointing. There are no shortcomings in the rounding. Maybe it would be better to add more non-obtrusive jokes to liven up the atmosphere? From the perspective of game flow, there is a feeling that I have been working on the main plot regardless of the branch plots. Although there is a sense of rhythm... It is still too fast and not smooth enough. It is a little bit too much. Only this type has a bit of aesthetic fatigue😞

The writing in the Bone King fanfic is okay, but it always gives me the feeling of being a newbie. The setting and part of the plot don't look smooth, and I can't say I overpower the protagonist. It's just that the author can't handle it well. I'll write down the specific suggestions in a paragraph review. It's a pretty good fanfic that you can read.

3.5 Stars, emmm, the biggest feature of this novel is the inch-stop! There are many times when you think it's time to feel better, or when Cao Pi is in trouble, the author will feed you a lot, and not only once or twice, but it's still good after more than 300 chapters, and it's still being beaten at level 100 [face covering]. And the protagonist just likes to do some tortuous things, wasting a lot of effort, getting half the result with twice the effort, otherwise it's okay, I can watch it.

I think the plot of this novel is very exciting, and every twist and turn is unexpected. The author's writing style is also very good, allowing people to feel the depth and complexity of emotions. I really like this novel and I hope the author can continue writing it and let us keep reading it!

The clues of family, friendship and love in the novel are rich and touching. Through delicate emotional descriptions, the author allows readers to feel the deep emotional bonds and interpersonal relationships, and evokes the warmth and cherishment of human emotions.

The writing is very good. The growth speed is enough now. Don't affect the normal logic too fast. Also, the update is too slow. Or, I will need level 100 helpers later. If the indigenous people are not good, it depends on how the author arranges it. Um😓Updates are so slow! The pace is pretty good so far, I hope it continues.

It's ok, it has a unique flavor. I read a few Bone King fanfics here and here, and gave up the idea of writing one. The one I clicked on is "Welcome". The magic fighting method is so well written that it's hard to surpass. In addition, I have to read the original novel intensively and delve into the setting. I feel too tired. I used to be the same. I play an MMO game called Territory Life, and I am the vice-president of a certain guild. Among the more than 20 of us, we have all kinds of personalities. Some love fighting, some love farming, some are gentle and impulsive. I thought it would be interesting to write the real life stories of our guild into Bone King. Then I thought again, doesn't that coincide with the Six Gods?