A Civilization Game? Representing Humanity in Battle? Me?

(Superior) Orange LV7, 36.25 Points/50 points First impression 150%: sense of substitution 4, attraction 3 Basic settings 75%: plug-in 4, setting 3 Content 125%: Writing 4, Creativity 4 Structure 75%: Rhythm 3, Main Line 3 Details 75%: Personality 5, Logic 3 Balance Penalty: None Highlights: official setting, protagonist's behavior Poison point: none Feelings: The description of the characters makes people feel comfortable, and the use of plug-ins is very good. It doesn't look like a new author. Calculation process: 1.5×7+1.25×8+0.75×21=36.25 Points

Although I don't know why the rating is low, it is particularly good in one aspect. The disadvantage is the contradiction of returning to the country. Normally speaking, when something like this happens in a big country, 300,000 people are dragged in. There is no point in concealing it. The second is the setting of combat power. The author should be a little hasty in writing, and only wrote three people in detail The protagonist, the male protagonist has a tyrannosaurus rex physique, and the female quantum physique is also known as Shenwei. Now there is a new cute guy with unlimited firepower. Part of it is a language problem. There is no interoperability system, but the protagonist can do everything. Anyway, the details may not be polished well, but the subject matter is OK and unlimited flow.

Overall, it's not bad. The protagonist's character is very likable, but he should be more sensible. Why do I feel like the author is getting more and more effeminate in his descriptions?

Is the warmth meant to preserve the protagonist's humanity? But one thing to say, I personally felt good about the first dungeon experience, but the subsequent character interactions in real life would feel a little awkward. I hope this kind of slap-in-the-face plot will never happen again. During the entire "Civilization Game", the time span is very large, and there are many dazzling and impressive ups and downs. The fewer such small storms, the higher the expectations for the tsunami. Therefore, I personally think that since it is a "civilization game", the focus should be on the dungeon, as well as the overall plot advancement and character growth after the dungeon. It would be better if there is less ink in this kind of reality.

Author, have you updated today? When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. Author, have you updated today?

How can I put it, it's actually quite okay, but the second copy was too long and I was a bit tired. I initially thought of waiting for a while and then come back and continue reading after the second copy was finished. But it turned out that I waited for more than a month, and there were still dozens of chapters to go before I got to the third copy. I really lost interest in it (because there were too many jumps, and some things would not be connected). This book is rated this way mainly because of the second copy. Many people said this at the beginning, but the author said that it has a complete world view, and there are foreshadowings and so on, but... I just don't know how to describe it. After reading the three pictures of this copy, I feel a little tired, but there are still so many [face covering] After reading it... I'm so disappointed. I thought the protagonist would grow up after the second copy and shed his childishness and innocence... But just like a child, he never grows up. If the sword is the courage to move forward, and wisdom is the composure of strategizing, then the shield should be a steady and solid responsibility, but the protagonist... How should I put it... At least in terms of personality, it is not as consistent as expected. (Compared with the other two, it is also the least authoritative), and then there are... There are some loopholes, but they are innocuous, and the author has his own outline after all, so he will not point out. It is just a disappointment for the protagonist's character. It is a pity. If the protagonist's character is as thick and calm as the imagined "shield", you can kick me when it becomes the final backbone of someone, thank you.

It looks good. It looks good. The setting of the savior is quite good. I don't know why I felt powerless at the beginning of the whole story, but the later part is really good! This book is still worth reading [laughter]

Starting from the third game, I slowly began to add metaphorical sentences from primary school students, which were identified as AI expansion. It was quite good when there was none before. The main reason is that I am quite isolated when listening to books. I can skip it when reading, but it is not easy to jump when listening to books.

I can be considered one of the author's first readers. The only novel I reward is very good. Come on, author, and try to update ten times a day, otherwise don't blame me for canceling the five-star novel. It's rat tail juice!

It's very good-looking, very good-looking. It may not suit the appetite of some people, but it is a very good work for the public. I highly recommend it. I hope everyone will support it. I have finished reading this book and spent several hours reading it on another device!