The Smiling, Proud Wanderer: Lin Pingzhi Defies Fate

First let me talk about my current feelings after reading it. It is definitely a good book, but the current rating is too low. The author breaks the convention of taking the Five Mountains, Shaolin and Wudang as the core perspective when traveling through Swordsman. He no longer sticks to the well-known figures from various factions in the original work. Instead, he focuses on Lin Ping's personal growth. Although he draws on the clichéd method of obtaining the Double Ninth Festival inscriptions in ancient tombs from other books, It has a clichéd martial arts scene with Yang Guo and Dugu Qiufei, but overall it still gives people a feeling of being parallel to the world of Swordsman. It reasonably imagines and supplements the deliberately vague court and other Jianghu backgrounds in the original work. I don't know what other readers will think of this, but it does surprise me. I am looking forward to the development of the next story. I don't want Lin Pingzhi to be involved in the world of Swordsman soon, and I also want to see if he has an updated story. However, as an important character in the original book, based on age and timeline, and the Lin family's evil-proofing swordsmanship as an important story clue in the original work, Lin Pingzhi will sooner or later come into contact with various characters in the original work. I don't know how the author intends to portray them, and whether there will be a different interpretation. Looking forward to…

The writing is good, and the training and fighting are particularly exciting, but his character is too soft, and he always shows mercy to the bandits who want to torture and kill him. Then, there are more and more enemies of first- and second-rate masters, and they are so powerful that they are almost unable to defeat him. If he is exposed, he is Lin Pingzhi, and the escorts of Fuwei Escort Agency will not survive.

The structure is clear and the content is substantial. It starts with the smiling character, but it takes a completely different path. It not only eliminates the need to supplement the background of the protagonist, but is also very different from other fan fictions that are the same. It is in line with my reading preferences and is a good book.

It is a very simple writing style and has a good outlook on life. It has not been affected by some of the current black posts, engaging in extreme "killing and decisiveness", crazy dissing of Linghu and other original characters... It's just too slow to pick up. I looked at the table of contents and saw that it's more of a derivative than a fanfic. It's almost a million words into the fifth volume before we get to the main text!

The writing is indeed good, and the story is chivalrous. I feel that the biggest shortcoming of "Swordsman" is that there is no knight in the world. In other works, no matter other "Zhao Sao" or "Killing", I feel that something is missing. It is well written like this. I hope there will be a different ending.

Among the time-travel martial arts novels, it is more brilliantly written and more enjoyable to read. Without Lin Pingzhi's description of family affection, he is not a stone monkey, he has a father and a mother. If you control the tempo and slow down, I think it will be great.

Advantages: It is indeed martial arts, pure martial arts flavor, with a little new-school martial arts rhythm, and there are some shadows of Swords Out of Hengshan. According to the evaluation of the starting point, it is recommended! According to the evaluation of Tomato, around 7.9 Points are reasonable, because above 8.5 Points, pure white text flow hay, old bookworms are uncomfortable, and below 8.5 Points is the comfort zone of old bookworms, and gold is mined in this range. Disadvantages: The martial arts flavor is too strong. Although I know that the rhythm is in line with the usual rhythm of online novels, I always think of the traditional Jingu martial arts flavor of providential coincidence, which still makes me feel a little uncomfortable. This is a common problem in martial arts. In other fantasy novels, if the main character is upright, the readers will most often criticize the "Mother of God". In the case of martial arts, if the protagonist is upright and indecisive, some readers will criticize the literary youth. In the case of martial arts, the ancestral graves are criticized. Comprehensive evaluation: Worth a look, Tomato Sands, Starting Point Grain and Grass.

The growth path is well written. It didn't give me the feeling that it suddenly became strong. There is basically no emotion between men and women. I just saw a picture and suddenly thought of the heroine. This part didn't feel very good. When I was four or five hundred pictures, I suddenly felt that the rhythm was a little wrong, but I didn't know what was wrong. The fighting felt quite satisfactory. After all, this thing is difficult to write. As for the plot, you don't make the protagonist too busy. You have nothing to teach the disciples. You don't have to write poems to drink and chat with a group of talented people. , You don't have to show off, just share your theories with each other, and keep going.

The author's writing style is very good. It has a sense of chivalry and the relationship between people. The background of each character is very reasonable and not delayed. Naturally, the plot progress is too slow, but by now, the protagonist can be said to be able to stand alone. He has the initial ability to protect himself, and his mind is clear, and the goal is certain. All that is left is to find tricks and overcome all difficulties. The next plot, I hope it will still be exciting.

The writing style is like a traditional martial arts novel. Very comfortable to read. The rhythm is also good, and you don't become a top player all of a sudden. What's a little bit poisonous is that at first he was not very good at martial arts and was hunted by a bunch of people. He insisted on using the same fake name and appearance, and then he was hunted endlessly for more than 200 chapters.