Making Gods Behind the Scenes: I Invented the Ten Hall Guardians

The pace is very fast. It seems that as long as a character appears, something will happen. It could be written in more detail. It feels a bit too deliberate. However, I still like this type of writing. I hope the author can write better in the future.

It's okay. It's really fast in the early stage, but it's still exciting. I feel that the author can organize the outline before writing. For example, the division of levels and characters in the Ten Palaces, and the division of characters in the Ten Palaces can be more detailed, so as not to think about supplementary points. In the early stage, you have the strength to do tasks. When your strength improves in the later stage, you can also have some leisure time. Don't do tasks just for the sake of doing tasks. Otherwise, it will be like a nesting doll. People will always have visual fatigue when they are [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

This novel brought me quite a surprise. The author has shown rare patience and skill in building a world view. He did not rush to pile up settings, but through plot advancement and detailed description, let this grand world unfold and enrich in front of readers bit by bit. This step-by-step approach avoids information overload while maintaining a constant sense of freshness. The plot is quite solid, each chapter has its own meaning, and there is no obvious watering-down or procrastination. The language style is concise and smooth, making it effortless to read. It can accurately convey information without being cumbersome due to excessive modification. The overall degree of completion is very high, and the author's intentions are shown from the text to the structure. What is even more commendable is that the author is open to reader feedback and is able to make adjustments and optimizations based on reasonable suggestions. This humble and professional creative attitude gives the work room for continuous improvement. In the current fast-food Internet writing environment, such a carefully polished and continuously improved work is indeed particularly precious.

This book gets better and better as I read further. At first, I watched the AI ​​drama with dozens of chapters in it on Douyin, and then I followed up the original manga with the manga on Tomato. The further you read, the more you can feel the improvement of the author's writing style. Many of the stories in the back are layer by layer, constantly burying holes and filling them in. The reasoning and logic are also very good. At first, it may be more inclined to be more refreshing, like a cool story about a male protagonist. Later on, the story has a sense of group iconography, and it becomes more connotative from a purely cool story. For example, the love-hate entanglement hidden under the reasoning, the original family, school violence, domestic violence, perseverance and letting go after experiencing love and hatred, etc. In fact, I can feel that this book is consciously conveying some positive values. I really feel mature in writing. I wish this book will get better and better, and more and more people will read it. I hope everyone will be more patient, and readers who read later can feel the deeper connotation from the author's increasingly mature writing! !

The writing was indeed lacking a bit in the early stages, but it slowly became fuller from the twenty-thirty chapters on. The characters in the book all have distinct personalities, and each one has their own characteristics. Five stars is not too much to give for this alone. After reading it in one sitting, I can feel that the author is getting better and better as he writes.

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful (♥∀♥), as long as you sit back and keep updating it, it won't be unfinished

It's quite good-looking, and the behind-the-scenes scenes of the group portraits are very nixy and interesting.

I like it (*^ω^*). The summoned character has his own thoughts and personality. Although he is still loyal to the protagonist, he is no longer a rigid character. I was quite surprised that Poison Fairy teased Long Fei. I just want to know if Poison Fairy and Long Fei can be together in the future [shy][shy]

It's okay, but I feel like the protagonist is too kind? I hope it's not a nanny behind me. This doesn't seem to be the protagonist's original world, right? Just rush to kill the monsters, and later contact the officials and send them exercises.

This book is very interesting, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. In addition, I like Zhuge Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting.