Harry Potter: Platinum and Roses

Worth a look The writing is very delicate and smooth, and I finished reading it without even realizing it (even with severe pain in my head). The twists in some places were well handled. I haven't seen a writer with vivid writing in Tomato for a long time. The heroine and the family relationship are very touchingly written. Every time I watch it, I feel like he is indeed a reliable adult. What attracted me to him for the first time was "Knowledge needs to wait." Although I have read many books, this may not mean anything, but it retained me. The heroine has a state of mind that matches her age (in my opinion), but what is surprising is that in this impetuous society, I don't feel any discomfort in an environment where the heroine will be criticized as long as she is not independent, because the emotional transition is just right, which makes me understand that she is not a time traveler in many HP fanfiction (actually, I only have this standard when I read cool novels, forgive me for using this as an example) The small anchor point is that the heroine is a bit mysophobic. I think her mischievous behavior is very cute and memorable. But I think the next plot will inevitably make her embarrassed. I wonder if you have considered "knife" from this perspective? What made me feel that it was handled delicately may be that Pansy stared at Malfoy, and then he moved a little bit. My understanding was that there was a conflict of interests. At that time, the heroine was not familiar with any of their aristocratic families. Even if she considered wooing her, she had to pay attention to the thoughts of the elders hh. Of course, it's possible that I'm overthinking I really have a headache. I originally wanted to write a lot, but I kind of gave up. Maybe I will come back and comment after the headache is gone. All in all, I think it is the best among the HP articles in Tomato (if you like to read cool articles with childish writing and embarrassing plots, then I can't help it)

It's really good-looking. I completely understand why the wife wants to lay out such a long family line. Some aspects of the heroine's character are really cultivated in that harmonious family atmosphere. Just like what is written in the book, she grew up surrounded by love and was well-taught by her family. She is smart and capable, and her personality is not one-sided. She is not a big devil or a lion-hearted person. There is no problem at all for Draco to have a crush on the heroine. The heroine's personal charm is too great. I'll update it more. It's a bit unsatisfactory [Send my heart][Send my heart]

Regardless of the low score, the writing is of very high quality, and the family relationship is very touching and delicate. The interaction with cousin Ernie is very cute and interesting. The heroine has been growing up in love. She is innocent and cute, but she still has the characteristics of Slytherin. The relationship is not love at first sight or very young, just this and that. The relationship is slow and natural. The characterization is not perfect. No one is perfect. I have read several books and the scores are less than 7 points. But often these writings are very good. This book is simply my dream love letter. I hope you won't stop updating it. Come on! ! ! Finally updated, but I have to save up. It's so beautiful. I just saw today that the rating has increased to over seven points. Congratulations.

It's super pretty. I especially like the heroine's character. Our heroine loves sweets and is a baby who is very happy when her relatives praise her. The image of the heroine described by the author is particularly vivid. She is not a flawless novel character, but more like a flesh-and-blood person. She will blame others after playing pranks. She will work harder because she doesn't want to be overshadowed. She will be soft-hearted because of the weakness of her relatives. She will cover up her efforts behind the scenes because of pride and only show her good side. She will show her good side because of her cleanliness. She doesn't like making potions, she will lose her mind due to fear, and she will scream because of the loss of her image (ps: being thrown mud). Not only the heroine's image description, but also the description of other characters is very delicate, such as Pansy's verbal and physical integrity and contradictions (ps: every time the heroine interacts with Shafiq and the others, Pansy's reaction is very interesting) I particularly like the competition with Hermione's talents, the conflict of views with her cousin, the relationship crisis, the prank revenge after being thrown mud by the twins, the chemical reaction with Draco (I laugh so twisted every time I watch them interact), and the heart-to-heart talk with his grandfather after Harry's crisis (my favorite is the interaction with the family, it warms the heart and is particularly nourishing to the stomach) Finally, because this book is particularly interesting to me, the review will be exaggerated. Although it is worth reading, especially when the book is in short supply. I praise the author for his delicate writing style and smooth handling of emotional transitions. It feels like the transition is natural and not abrupt. The pranks written by the heroine are not offensive, but make people feel cute, and the point is just right. (PS: Moreover, mysophobia is very rare, because the tool-seeker handling the potion materials was unexpectedly cute, and I was made cute. I originally thought that following the routine would overcome mysophobia, but it turned out to be a tool-seeker) The aspect of writing about family relationships is the best among the HP novels I have read. Every time I read it, I sigh with emotion: "This is the responsibility of an adult. It's so reliable." The conflict with my cousin Ernie is also handled very well. The friendship with Shafiq is not a pure friendship, but mixed with interests, which is in line with Slytherin's style. Currently I am curious about how the author writes the development of the heroine, Pansy and Draco. The main thing I am curious about is Pansy's ending. Also, will the heroine get all O's in the future? Can I get O's in flying lessons? Hahahahahahaha, it seems unlikely.

I sigh again, this book is so beautiful! I have always wanted to see the heroine have her own story line, allowing readers to experience the life of Hogwarts with the heroine, and I really want those novels that are overly blended into the story lines of the three protagonists. If it is all about this kind of plot, then why should I read fanfics? Why don't I read the original work? However, this kind of novels can easily be written like a running account by some authors, making people fall asleep after reading it. But! ! This book has none of the above shortcomings. The heroine is a lovely, charming, quick-witted, a little cunning and sinister little lady. Her life is plain and interesting, allowing readers to empathize with her. The plot of the novel is interesting, I can't wait to read the rest of it! I hope the author will update more and more soon, hehe! 🥰 The author, please keep up the good work! ! ! I've been stocking up! Looks good! Hope more

The writing is so good that I finished reading the current chapter without even realizing it. I think Da Da's description of emotions is very delicate, and his character creation is also very successful. Just like the heroine. The great shaping made the heroine no longer a paper person for me. When I read, she was more like a little girl with flesh and blood who appeared in my mind and appeared in front of me. In her, I saw the complexity and multi-facetedness of people in real life. She is a little girl who particularly likes to eat sweets, a little girl who is dependent on her parents, and a little girl who will take her cousin to do bad things and then break up the relationship after being caught. The little girl (in fact, I feel that the heroine is a bit like Lucius who retreated and protected herself wisely). She is a little girl who secretly works hard for her own pride and is secretly introverted. She is a little girl with mysophobia and cares about her external image. She is a little girl who plays pranks and revenge after being ruined by the twins. She is a little girl who writes letters to her grandfather because of her uneasy conscience after pushing down Potter (by the way, I like it very much). This paragraph! The inner activities and entanglements of the heroine are written very delicately and vividly. The heroine wants to write a letter to her grandfather, but she is afraid that her grandfather will be disappointed with her. It really makes me feel that the heroine is a little girl, a very strong little girl. She can't bear to look for her own support after doing something wrong, but she is afraid of relying on herself. This paragraph also makes me feel that the heroine's image is more three-dimensional and vivid. The paragraph where the heroine writes to her grandfather is really special. Warmth), and the family love Xiangzhen is written very well and very touchingly. All in all, our little heroine grew up in a family full of love. The author is not only very successful in shaping the image of the heroine, but also in the image of other characters. For example, Pansy gave me the feeling that he cares about the relationship between the heroine and Draco and is obviously hostile to the heroine, but later wants to play with the heroine and them. And because he wants to save face, he is arrogant and can't lose face. For example, Draco has a vicious tongue and a arrogant character. In fact, what I think is particularly interesting is that when he was sitting with the heroine, Pansy called out and then distanced himself a little from the heroine. I really think this was particularly well written. At this time, Draco and the heroine did not have any relationship foundation. Between Pan Xi and the heroine, he chose to shoot Pansy because the family relationship between the two of them is relatively good and their families are family friends. From this, we can see Lucius's education of Draco, and also Draco's attitude. I personally think that he doesn't like Pansy very much. He can distance himself from the heroine just because of Pansy's words. I personally think that under the guidance of Lucius, he paid great attention to the interactions between families. When the relationship between the two comes out later, I am very much looking forward to Draco's transformation. Let's stop here. I think this book is very beautiful and worth reading. Whether it's writing, characterization, plot or emotional lines, it's all very well written. I finally found a good book in Tomato.

The author's writing is very good. It is one of the few HP novels that I can patiently read. Every detail and character is richly written. However, I still recommend not to read Pericles' extra chapters alone. The general setting of the romance novel is 1v1 and the name is Platinum Rose, which means that the male and female protagonists, then their love should be unique. No, the setting of the male lead in white and black is indeed very touching, but if the author gives the male lead a perfect ending because of the readers' voice or his own love for the male lead, is this still a 1v1 romance novel? It can be written as a heart-throb novel. Then the male protagonist here is not the male protagonist. I hope the author can think about it again. But! The writing is really good and the writing style is good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's a very good book. This book tells about family, friendship and subsequent love (after all, the proud Malfoy was already blushing and snickering after the interaction between the two in the first grade). The character of the heroine is very well created. She looks like an elegant princess on the surface, but she is not perfect but is attractive enough. Malfoy is also very similar to the original book, but he is still hard-spoken and soft-hearted towards his friends. What attracts me most is the dialogue between the heroine and her family. Warm and energetic enough, it feels like home is your own haven. Although it is a serialized article, it is worth reading. I look forward to the follow-up story of the heroine and Malfoy written by the author! Come on

It's good to watch. The relationship between the heroine and Draco is gradual and not abrupt at all. The heroine is elegant and cunning, and Draco is stinky. The two of them are so perfect for each other, but I also gave the heroine and Seid a slight thumbs up. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

I really like the author's description of the heroine's family environment. It is indeed very warm. I also really like the character Pericles! ! ! I hope the author can create a side story about him =ᗜωᗜ=, and is he the only admirer of the heroine? Except Xiaolong. Because I haven't tied it yet. In fact, Cedric is also very popular in fan fiction. Will there be a relationship between him and the heroine? Because I like him too. However, the author's fanfic is really different from many fanfics, because I have read a lot of them, and most of the female protagonists will be involved in some things involving Harry and his trio. How can I put it, writing it like this is actually a bit boring, because I have watched the movie. But the heroine feels like a separate branch, as if we are the heroine entering the world of Harry Potter! And among the four schools, Slytherin is my favorite! I haven't tested it, but I really like the green Oᴗoಣ. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon. I'm almost tied.