Lu Mingfei Returns from the Foundation

It is a very good book. I really want to give it five stars, but some avoidable mistakes have not been changed. For example, Ye Ji. If you use Ye Sheng or Ya Ji, you can understand the typo, but it does not affect the reading. The word Ye Ji is very affecting because he is not a character in the book. The second point is that when using AI assistance, a very fatal mistake is that AI will conflict some words, such as the black shoes worn during the interview suddenly change into other shoes. This is a fatal mistake. After using AI assistance, you should make sure again and again that there are no outrageous mistakes. But the concept of the book is very good, and the reactions after coming back from some experiences are also very interesting, rather than the bad ones in the past, even decisive and clear-cut

It's really cool. I've only read one-fifth of the original work, and the fans have read a lot of it, and I've almost completed the plot. I dare to say that this book is at least the top three works of fan fiction I have read [Send Heart] [Send Heart] [Send Heart] The writing is clear and it feels like the original work. It is simply awesome. The character of Ming Fei is also well-shaped [lick screen] [lick screen]

It's good to read. Lu Mingfei's mental state in this book is quite beautiful, with a unique sense of madness, and at the same time it doesn't lose the originality. The current writing method is very interesting, and the unexpected plot development is very attractive, making people want to read on. The only drawback is that the current update is unstable. I hope the author can stabilize after the summer vacation and write well.

It's nice to watch, and the character design of Lao Lu is very good. I like this kind of human supremacy, all heretics, hate yourself, love yourself, reason, sensibility, gentleman. Emotionally, Lao Lu is most likely to have no CP, because he is too tired. For an immortal person, love is too insignificant. Lao Lu cannot truly fall in love with someone. He understands, but cannot respond. Zero, as a character with a single arrow to Lao Lu, handles the relationship very well. He trusts Lao Lu unconditionally and will always accompany him silently, even if he cannot receive a response.

Update soon! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a great Lu Mingfei Returns series. I can no longer watch Lu Aotian from qd. Sure enough, when feelings become routines, articles become assembly lines... I am very happy to meet an author here who is really willing to love the dragon clan. So, author, can you update it quickly?

It's the most relevant fanfic I've seen so far. It's like Lu Mingfei has really returned from SCP, and the original attribute of talking nonsense is still there. This book is so good [laughter]

A very interesting Dragon Ball fan novel. Jiangnan and that Herzog should get married where they are. I agree with both hands and feet [smile][smile][smile]

The author really wrote it very well. I like O5 Lu's character. He is rational and strong, but he has not lost Lu Mingfei's essentially love-talking character. He is still the same person. And the most anticipated thing is that the O5 road has resurrected Old Tang. I hope they can treat Eri Yi better.

After reading Dragon Clan for so many years, Lu Mingfei in this book is the most normal one. The character creation is not OOC at all, and the writing style is very similar to Jiangnan. As a Lu Tui, I am really happy to see such an awesome fan.

The writing of the first half was a bit slow, and I kept describing the scenes, but the second half was really, really shocking. It is not something that ordinary people can write, and the plot is not sluggish at all. The characters are perfectly created, and I feel that everyone has a faint sense of madness [Adoration] [Adoration]. I hope the author can persevere. The writing is really, very, very good [shy][shy][shy]