I Raised a Koi, and You All Think It's the Embodiment of National Destiny?

Sure, the plot is great, I finished it in one go. Aside from the part where the protagonist is sold as a dog and no one recognizes him – that was a bit of a letdown – the whole thing is awesome. I hope you keep writing!

Very impressive. I've seen some really good ones, but the others are all kept secretly, which is a bit unrealistic. How could they possibly hide them? Even satellites can't evade detection! This one makes perfect sense. The only downside is the lack of illustrations. The koi fish illustrations didn't have any pictures, only one of a dragon.

Nice!!! However, it seems there's not much further development in the plot [currently rushing to finish draft].

The buildup was excellent, and the rest was incredibly satisfying 😏😏 The only downside is that there weren't enough; two pictures simply weren't enough 😢

It's really quite good, and feels rather novel, but there's just too little of it.

It's alright. Although some parts of the content are a bit toxic, it's generally fine and enjoyable to read. Some parts still show normal human thinking. I'm just curious how the author plans to write the rest. Will it become a fantasy? Or will it be a god-raising story? Or maybe some kind of giant beast battle? I'm really curious. It didn't work later.

Next, the true dragon should shed some blood, dilute it, and allow it to be absorbed by humans. This will enable evolution, pushing the limits of the human body. The spirit fish can then enhance the human body, continuously optimizing human genes and creating gene warriors who constantly break through limits. This will prepare for conquering other worlds, as we are now invincible.

Get up and keep charging at us readers with your drafts!!! Authors, hurry up!! Grab your drafts and charge at us!!! (Cane Alien's voice) 🙂

Keep up the good work, author!

Wow, this is really popular! The author is awesome!