One Piece: From the Start, I Crafted the Mythical Zoan's Di Jun Form with My Bare Hands

It's really good, come on, it's not toxic. Although the pace is a bit slow, it's fun. Just don't be a eunuch. It's just starting out. Update it steadily. Don't push the book shortage during the advancement period. It will pick up slowly. However, I hope there will be more female protagonists. After all, Pirates would be boring without many female protagonists. I have finished watching it now. Although the plot has too many original characters, I hope to see more characters from the original world of One Piece. Secondly, there is the issue of ability. I don't know if I missed it. It is a bit problematic for the protagonist to give the fruit to others so easily, especially to people he has known for less than a while, even if he takes him as a partner. Unless your fruit ability can be recycled or something, after all, people's hearts cannot be tested. Even if this is just a novel, it must be reasonable, otherwise it will be poisonous.

The writing is very detailed. If you like to study the setting, you must read the first 12 chapters carefully. If you like a fast pace, you can start reading from Chapter 20. The first 20 chapters can be summarized as follows: the protagonist obtains the ability of Captain America's body of steel in American comics and obtains eternal life, and creates devil fruits such as the Three-legged Golden Crow and Pangu from creatures in ancient novels. Interspersed in the middle are the grievances and grievances of villagers, navy, and pirates, and the protagonist talks about the strength and culture of China, such as the comparison between Chinese surnames in front and the world of pirates, Chinese mythology, China's 5,000-year cultural history, and the shock and yearning of the villagers. Explain to the villagers that the reason why devil fruits can be created is because of the blessing of the protagonist's fictional god Pangu, and that the world of One Piece is just an inferior civilization with weak minds per capita, and the villagers are just an inferior and ignorant race. They will soon naturally believe that they are convinced by the protagonist, and then subdue a group of villagers. (This content has a retro feel. I remember that the otherworld travel stories that were popular more than ten years ago were about the Chinese culture or strength, and then relied on cultural dimensionality reduction to attack the natives with rhetoric) After 20 chapters of foreshadowing, the cruelty of pirates, the hypocrisy of the navy, the simplicity and kindness of the villagers, the superiority of Chinese civilization, and the protagonist's intelligence, kindness, talent, and ideals and ambitions are revealed. It starts to take off after chapter 20 The settings of the previous 20 chapters are very interesting. From the Chinese name, Chinese culture is introduced, Chinese mythology, and Chinese history are introduced to explain to the indigenous people, in order to rationalize the protagonist's ability to use Golden Finger. The only flaw is that after chapter 20, the progress is too fast. In the middle, there should be an encounter and battle with the pirate navy during the voyage. Moreover, the Devil Fruit was created and the combat power was too suppressed. It is not like what a fantasy beast species should be. As a Chinese mythological fruit, the strength must be very high. The weakest one is stronger than Kaido and Sengoku's fantasy beast fruits. After all, the Yamata no Orochi he played in his childhood was Xiangliu who had one of his heads cut off and went to Japan to become the king of the mountain.

Chapter 7: The plug-in is available. Is there too much foreshadowing?

I can only say that it's okay. After the protagonist becomes invincible, it's basically fine. The pirates don't unite and don't collect beauties, they just eat. The protagonist rarely appears later. Maybe it will take five or six chapters to see the pig's feet exposed, and then the number of words will be lowered, and then the enemy will be defeated and then eat again.

Not bad, very exciting, the final chronicle is okay

It can't be just me, it's poisonous, let's all do it together, (ˊ•̥▵•)੭₎₎

Good looking, quick update, hope to design some fruits with strange abilities

It's good-looking. I like this very laid-back style. There are too many moods of being busy after gaining powerful abilities. I like the protagonist who is a bit salty. As for the plot, although it has been repeatedly stabbed in the back by the comics, many of the final reasoning is more reasonable than the original work.

There are some unreasonable things, but the plot is okay. I support it.

Be free and not follow a group. The fruit can be arranged by oneself. Very nice.