A Lord's Rise Begins with Mercenary Work and Trade

It's quite interesting. To be honest, I have never seen this type of mercenary career. But to be honest, I feel that the name Yanhuang Mercenary Group is not good and a bit awkward. It is suggested that the author change the name to something more characteristic of Western fantasy. [Like][Like]

The story of a true commoner genius who became a lord. Without Deep Blue's bonus points, without the support of the elders in the family, relying on one's own strength and one's own wisdom, no matter how difficult it is in the early stage of making friends with heroes. There was no choice to give up, and no choice to sell hooks. Relying on his own courage, he has his own life and a bright future in the mercenary group. It's rare to see such a human-like protagonist in Tomato, and the writing is quite good. The main character is so human. Without a little abstract fun, when can the general's kindness be spread to the world?

Evaluation after reading fifty chapters Top grade grain and grass Tomato is a rare low-level magic western fantasy, which is a bit like horseback riding and slashing. The world view structure is good. Various settings seem to be mature at present. There are no obvious poisonous points at present. The character creation is passable but relatively formulaic. From the plot layout, it can still be seen that the author is well prepared to write this book, but the rhythm control needs to be improved. Then Focus more on character creation to create a few outstanding characters. After all, Western fantasy is generally not short. Having an outstanding character in a relatively boring stage (including encounters with him, growth, confrontation, etc.) Will hold up the novel as a whole. It is a good source of potential for family members who like Western fantasy. Give it a try (after-sales service is available, I will read it) When the toxicity becomes too great, I will come back to remind everyone to retreat in time [crazy]) Personal subjective rating of three and a half stars Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

A book in which the protagonist travels to something similar to the Middle Ages. Although there are swords and magic here, they are very weak. Although there is no large-scale siege of the city, there is a story of the beginning of the Bai family that feels warm and passionate. Generally speaking, the author may not be a good author, but the concept is indeed quite good.

Running business + mercenary group + territory construction, as well as extraordinary training, four different world novel elements, there are still some surprises, but the plot does not advance very quickly. It is recommended to add some plots such as suspense and extraordinary training battles. It seems a bit dull now, and don't cheat at every turn. It is best to be logical and practical.

Very good, much better than those who only brag.

A very good story, but one point was deducted because the war was too sloppy and the one-sided battle was not interesting. What I mean is that the enemy has no wisdom at all. The strategy planned by the author for the protagonist must be successful, and it has nothing to do with the strategy itself. In fact, the author's sense of presence in a good novel is very weak. You keep teasing the protagonist here without explaining it clearly, and you are already going further and further on the road of self-pleasure. You can conquer the gnolls, but you can't conquer them easily. You brought the gnolls into the city in a few days and let them stay near their stronghold. This is beyond the character's ability. It can only work because of the author's pressure.

It's pretty good to watch, but the heroine in the front has a bit of a naughty point. Later, the heroine's design was changed, and the rest is pretty good. Xihuanliangcao, right?

This book is very well written, the overall writing is very smooth, and the plot arrangement is relatively compact. Among the novels that are not systematic nowadays, it is already a masterpiece. The slightest flaw is the heroine. When I first met the heroine, the arrangement was a bit useless, and I almost gave up the book. After a few chapters, it was over. There is basically no emotional drama with the heroine in this article. It is obvious that the author is not good at writing emotional drama. Overall it's pretty good. Praise!

After reading more than 10,000 hours on Tomato, I found that only high-quality works can be found in works with low ratings. The works with high ratings are often mindless and cool articles, with various boring systems, various appalling cheats, or suffocating good luck, etc... This book scored 9.5 Points