The Younger Rich Woman's Passionate Seduction: She Can't Resist

The heroine of "Little Pets" turned around and fell into despair is great. It has a different and new perspective. It is also great to have a normal relationship without being a yandere. The possessiveness is still the same as before. Nice! ! !

This book is generally good, but there are a few mistakes. If the book is revised, the rating will be higher. 1. This book uses a lot of narrated memories. The plot jumps too fast and makes it difficult to distinguish the timeline. For example, in Chapter 87, Song Hejiang entered the entrance hall and said a few words before entering the memories. As a result, the story has no transition and has a clear sense of division. I feel If you can, you can write the main story first and insert the memories into the main story as a chapter (the title must include a past timeline) or ✍🏻directly ✍🏻complete the story after finishing the main story. This way, new readers will not be confused about the timeline and feel too complicated and run away. 2. In the image of the villain, I think she is too weak because she can be pinched to death. She is suddenly at a disadvantage in trying to win Song's emotions. A villain cannot play the emotional lubricant role between the protagonist and the heroine. The villain can be strengthened and written with more brains. 3. This book is generally good. Mainly because it uses too many narratives and memories, which are too messy. The creativity is good and you can write narratives and memories, but it lacks a sense of transition and division. 4. The above words are all my personal opinions. Don't let Qingdao rise to the plot of the book. @ @

I just read the first twenty chapters. They are very good. There is no thrilling plot. As for the plot, there is still some. It cannot be said to be too bland. I can only say that it is more bland. The two of them are going in both directions. So far, I have a very good impression [laugh][laugh]

Just finished reading it, it's a really good article! ! I had a pretty strong withdrawal reaction after watching it. . Now all I can think about is wishing the young lovers 99 and 88 [laughing] It's really beautiful. The ending came unexpectedly. The last chapter made me shudder a little bit... I really recommend it! !

I have been saving articles and then worked on more than 20 chapters to the end. Now I am waiting for the extra chapter. I want to eat [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] It's really good to read. I didn't think it was good when I first read it. The rating was low. It seems that a few chapters are not interesting. There is really nothing to read later. Click deep into my heart [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker] I especially like the jealous aspect and then beg for [admiration][admiration][adoration][admiration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I went and read it for a long time before I found out it was the author of Xia Xia's book. It's really good. I like both books. I've finished reading this book. There really aren't any flaws in this book. It's very sweet. And it doesn't have any poison or knife. It's just a bit lacking. I really like Lily written by the author.

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So cool! So beautiful! ! ! I stayed up all night or two just to watch it! ! ! [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's nice to watch, the emotions are more delicate, and the plot is pretty good [laughing][laughing]

The emotional description is very delicate, the plot is also very reasonable and smooth. Zhijin and Xiaolian are well portrayed. There are also intertwined memories to supplement it. I feel that the author's writing style is getting better and better.