Reborn as a Film Queen, I Top the Showbiz Charts

The play within the play is quite good, and it is tear-jerking, but there are too few off-screen plots, and there are too few descriptions of the effects caused by the show. There should be a few chapters anyway. As a reader, it is also fun to read. The protagonist's current fan base is also less described, and the protagonist's influence is also less described. It is necessary to compare the fan flow of the protagonist and the niche, the overwhelming victory of the fans, the reaction of passers-by, and the reactions of various fans, and it will be clear and refreshing.

I've seen Chapter 40. Very nice looking, almost no flaws. The heroine's character is very good, and the first few chapters fully explain the heroine's transformation. The pace of the plot is just right, neither too fast nor too slow. The plot is also completely satisfactory, really well written and logical. Especially the play-within-a-play is so beautifully written. The description is extremely detailed, impressive and touching. Totally a highlight. I just hope to see more of the heroine's life outside the show, and have some little hobbies to create a sense of contrast. Rather than a one-sided, pure image of someone who works hard for his career and loves acting. You can also see more of the daily life of the heroine who has fans. For example, the heroine writes letters to respond to fans, talks about her acting feelings like friends, celebrates birthdays with fans... I hope to see the soul resonance between actors and fans.

In terms of the story itself, this book is relaxed and relaxed, the narrative rhythm is very well grasped, and the writing style is relatively mature. From the perspective of the protagonist, the heroine is the absolute protagonist. There is no other person who can take away the glory of the heroine. The image of the heroine is also very three-dimensional and very vital. This book is definitely a career-oriented entertainment article. The heroine's career line is always the main line. The writing of the scenes in the play is also very brilliant and very immersive. Unknowingly, I have become a career fan of the heroine. I am looking forward to her next drama and her going further and longer. The only shortcoming of this book so far is that the number of words is still a bit small. If the number of words is increased, it will probably climb higher in the recommendation position. Good jade is never afraid of time to bury it, but it takes more time to settle [send heart][send heart][send heart]

I've caught up with the latest chapter, it's very interesting, and the author added chicken legs to keep up with it. The scenes within the scenes are very well written, and they are all of a quality that can be drawn out independently to write about a quick time travel, especially the movie Countdown to the Cancer Girl, which was so sad to watch [facepalm] Suggestions: The characters are not fleshed out enough, especially the heroine. I feel like a tool maker, just practicing and studying for filming. Even if there is no CP, you can still add some ambiguity or get rid of the kidneys. You can also add some career difficulties, such as a competitor's illegal illegitimate child or something. After all, after winning so many awards and developing so fast, it was too smooth and too ordinary. Life is rich and colorful, but nine times out of ten, life is unsatisfactory. Without these, just volume work would be too dull, and you will inevitably get tired of it in the middle and later stages.

The play-within-a-play is good, but it's a little put the cart before the horse. The plot of the novel serves to shape the characters, but unfortunately there is too little portrayal of the heroine. How the heroine obtains resources inside and outside the play, whether there are competitors, how to get along with people, whether there are specific goals, how difficult the scenes are, how the heroine completes the dual psychological and physical challenges, and how she achieves growth and transformation... These are the most fundamental threads of a novel.

It looks good. The reason why I gave it four stars is because I am afraid of being too proud. I personally like to read novels about the entertainment industry. One of the things that makes me very satisfied with this book is that the heroine does not indulge in the past, but focuses on herself. She is very decisive in drawing a line with the enemies in her previous life. When she reaches a certain height, the enemies can finish it by themselves. The writing is really good. I really like what Ming Zhao said at the award ceremony. Of course, it's not just here. If you still have money and no interviews, the entertainment industry should be full of flowers. I got goosebumps when I read it. I also like the description of the play within the play. It is concise and does not take up a lot of space, but it also allows people to see the content and themes expressed in the play without making people feel that the word count is too high. It's just too little. I hope you can improve it more. It's not enough.

Seeing 35, it is indeed a bit too tight. The dramas come one after another, but the impact of daily dramas on fans' reactions is quite small. The description of the drama is very interesting, but if it were just this, it would be a bit too dry to swallow, so I wouldn't be able to concentrate on watching it.

I really like that the heroine is pursuing a career and has a good personality. There aren't any bad spots so far and it looks fine. But I don't know why it always gives me the feeling of a paper character. Maybe it's because the heroine is a little human-like, or maybe it's because the characters other than the heroine are not well portrayed, and there is always a sense of dissociation. Overall I quite like it, keep it up! [Sending Hearts]

It's really good to read. The writing style is so good that it's not like writing for the first time. There is no copycat in it. The script is also original. I will feel uneasy as the plot of the script turns. Among them, the two scripts about animals and life made me cry many times. The emotions are described very delicately. The dialogues and dialogues of the heroine are also very philosophical. Come on, don't stop updating. Please, update more, the article will definitely be popular [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Nice! In particular, the film and television plots in the article are very well written, and they are not just a cookie-cutter variety show. They are really working hard for their careers. They don't even mention the price of buying a house. The settings of the official, collaborators, and passers-by are also very good, and there are no pretentious or ridiculous scenes! Everything is explained eloquently and it is very comfortable to watch! I'm tired of aesthetics, and I don't feel like watching foreign dramas! Going for the awards... Isn't for me anymore! Mark it for withdrawal