Super God: Developing Warhammer 40K Technology

Many readers have expressed great concern about the character issues and some trivial plots in this book. The world view is too complicated in places. The pacing is too slow, the characters are inconsistent and lack depth. There are too many technical terms that make it incomprehensible to the average reader. In terms of character design, the character creation is unstable: he was very calm at first, and then became more radical. In fact, I created this character from the perspective of an ordinary person. He came to a strange world alone, and Goldfinger even ran away. In the later period, he relied on himself little by little. His personality and emotions may be a bit paranoid, but isn't it normal for normal people to be happy and angry? I will make improvements in the following aspects in the future. This is my first time writing a book, so please bear with me. Make your opening more engaging: Set up some emergencies to get readers invested in the story. Create characters through plot: Don't say how smart the protagonist is, but show it through his actions. Control the amount of information and intersperse action plots: We will not always use explanation techniques, but let everyone understand these techniques in action. Showing the inner world: By writing the protagonist's emotions, thoughts, and struggles, he will make him more real. It's almost time to enter the plot

It's very hardcore. In terms of science fiction, I can only say that it's very hardcore. It can be seen that a lot of homework has been done and the writing is very hard. It is different from those pure yy that just slap the head! But the first few chapters are okay. Although they are all trivial matters, at least there are things happening. Since the beginning, I have basically fallen into a one-man show with the protagonist. At most, it is a two-person show with the artificial intelligence Chang'e. It is too boring... I want to skip it. There are many important settings in this process. If you don't want to skip it, check the table of contents. There will be no plot interaction until at least 150 chapters in 300 chapters. This is too difficult... No one reads the story for the sake of the characters... The one-man show is too boring! 4 Stars because the author has done a good job, worked very hard to innovate, and has a good imagination... Forgive me for not being able to stand it.

What do you say? I have been chasing it for more than a week, and there are more or less problems, but it basically makes sense logically. I have read a lot of books on supernatural themes. I guess this is the author's first time writing. There are relatively few similar scientific articles. Come on, author!

Come on, I like reading this type of science and technology articles. The protagonist follows his own path, and the most he can do is learn from and use other genes. This is great👍🏻

The writing is very good. I like this kind of novel that has a cheat but learns and develops new technologies to become stronger. It is not the kind of novel that relies solely on the system to provide technical product drawings for industrial parks, but the kind that relies entirely on the system itself to do nothing. I feel like there is a shortcoming. After returning to Earth, the number of words is a bit low [make a face][make a face] I hope to speed up the pace. After the mid-term technology conquers the known universe, create star gates to travel to other universes [make a face][make a face][make a face][make a face][make a face][make a face]

Very good. Tomato has rarely seen such a good book written by such a rigorous, meticulous and serious author. I read it from the beginning without missing a word. This science fiction is beautiful.

Well, the front is a bit frustrating, but the back is quite interesting. It tells the story of slowly moving up, normal behavior, but more thoroughly because the legacy of the system can lead to rapid rise. A more correct statement is that a person's transformation. At the beginning, the protagonist understands him as a middle-aged and stupid person. Just change the three ways of ordinary people, a mixture, and finally become a technological madman and a mental patient, and finally become a leader, highlighting a change and evolution, the later will be more beautiful, as long as you don't lick your mouth properly and develop on your own, it will be very beautiful... I wonder if the author is playing with stars! How come the more I look at it, the more I look like the stars! I feel that the author is comparing the world of super gods to the corner of the universe, and then adding the possibility of stars, warhammers, or other author-created features, etc., Which means that the world view is enlarged. According to the original super god, he said that the known universe is constantly expanding, but in fact, according to this, the unknown universe and the known universe together form an infinite single universe. But even zooming in shows that the unknown universe is also infinite. Therefore, it can be concluded that the universe plus the known universe equals the single universe, that is, the infinite universe.

It's so satisfying. Except for the protagonist's character who is quite paranoid and extreme, the other plots are all very interesting. Damn it, I finished it in one day. The author will update soon [crying]

Although I can't understand the technical stuff, it's undeniable that the protagonist's independent growth on his way to becoming a god is written very delicately.

The content of Dimensionality Reduction Strike is well written and really worth reading. It's the final ending, which is a bit be. The early development history is too detailed and there are too many theories. It is recommended not to read it in detail because you can't understand it. Just extract part of the information from the title and see the familiar Super God plot.