The Cautious Path to Immortality: From Medicine Garden Errand Boy to Eternal Life

Not bad, the writing is smooth and there are no poisonous points so far. The plot development is a bit flat, but it is better than the lack of word count. You can take a look, it's pretty good. I just don't know if there will be a love line in the future. Personally, I think it might be better if I follow the mortal stream without CP.

Overall, it's good. The protagonist kills decisively and the storyline is attractive. There are still some minor flaws. The most important thing is that Xiaoding's copying function is incredible. It's better to accept the master. The second is that the protagonist is too suppressed. The third is to introduce the spiritual pet Xiao Hei at the beginning, and there will be no follow-up. He can completely let Xiao Hei look for magic cultivators or give warnings. A good script, I hope the author can expand on it more.

The author of this novel is very well written. It sounds good but updates are too slow.

The overall storyline is well arranged, but the pace is slow.

Objectively speaking, it's okay.

The advantages are obvious, but there are also many disadvantages. Overall, if the level remains like this, the final score may be around 7 points.

I have a good attitude and I estimate that I can write 200,000 to 300,000 words.

Well written, IQ is online!