Surviving Underground: From the Start with Just a Pickaxe

It's very beautiful. The characters of the heroine and the supporting characters are very good and flesh-and-blood. I finally found one that didn't write about various appearances. I can still understand what kind of character they are. I really love it. In the early stage, it felt a little too detailed and unnecessary. But later on, the rhythm will be better. Just don't describe it like dripping with sweat. It would be nice if it comes with pictures. I'm looking forward to it.

Survival in the center of the earth is a relatively rare game, and the world view is also innovative. The plot advances smoothly. The heroine is not invincible at the beginning, but has a sense of progress as she gradually upgrades. It is rare for female videos to have detailed descriptions of battle scenes. There are many female characters. The fairness of the transaction is relatively well controlled, and the heroine will not feel that she is suffering a big loss, nor will she be too fussy about it. I feel like my writing gets better as I get to the end. A few minor issues. 1 All the emotional descriptions are very strange. For example, the heroine "dislikes" everything for no apparent reason. The excitement of the heroine going out to fight at night is described in an awkward manner. When doing business, I always hesitate and do what I have to do. For another example, it can be seen that the character of Orange is portrayed by the author as a good person, but the author's description of her words and deeds always made me think at first sight: She is so hypocritical and won't betray the heroine in the future, right? It is recommended to reduce the description of emotion and describe more action. For example, Bai Zhixia and Lin Zhao have said many times that they have a good relationship, but I didn't feel anything at all. Lin Zhao was so anxious that his bullets bounced back in the Whack-a-Mole copy and he wanted to rush back, but I got it all at once. The author describes action better than emotion. 2. There are quite a lot of plots that involve shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target, such as shoes. This problem is always described. The heroine is in such a nervous situation but does not want any way to solve it. She immediately guesses that it will be arranged later. The sense of substitution in plot advancement is a bit weaker. 3. Some small details are not handled well, such as the first two points, which leads to the feelings/actions made by many heroines. When watching it, I always feel a little unable to empathize. It would be better if the battle rhythm could be smoother. For example, biting the tip of the tongue is usually a move to force oneself to wake up and survive before falling into confusion. At this point, it basically means that the protagonist has to use all his trump cards to fight. Generally, it can be used once in a battle. It is best not to appear more than 5 times in the whole text. However, you can count how many times you have written the part about fighting the queen bee, and suddenly the thrill is gone. At present, the follow-up update of the world view seems to be very interesting. I hope the author will write better and better!

So far, it looks pretty good. The setting is quite novel. There are a lot of flaws and nitpicks at the beginning, but the author writes more and more smoothly later on. Whether it's the level of gripping people, the smoothness of the plot, or the level of attraction, it's getting better and better. Relatively speaking, the description of battle scenes is the author's strength, and the battles are a plus. The lyrics and related descriptions of women are shameless, and the named characters who appear are basically women, which is a bonus. Follow for more updates😌😌

Mark it, it looks good Strong woman + no cp + single rabbit + interesting setting + multiple copies The setting is quite novel. It is not a cookie-cutter endless survival on the raft road. The monsters and landscape equipment settings are very much the author's own. The players she encounters are basically female characters. The heroine gradually becomes stronger, her force value gradually increases, she is very cruel to herself, and the battle scenes are described very well! ! ! The author knows how to write! All kinds of little monsters have unique cuteness! ~Finally, I haven't seen any public scolding or positive reviews in survival-related articles! Multiple dungeon settings can expand the world view. I like the designs of some dungeons that are quite weird.

It's beautiful, but the number of words is a bit short. Generally speaking, the protagonists in this kind of survival shelter novel develop themselves on their own, and most of them are in a lone wolf state without seeing anyone, which makes people feel a bit lonely when playing stand-alone games. The author also has a good grasp of the degree and makes up for this through copies. However, the description of human nature or communication is not particularly good. The protagonist meets all good people, and those who expect the writing style to be darker and more realistic will be disappointed. The settings and cool points are well described. It's not mindless and cool, and the protagonist is not the best in the server or the invincible type. I recommend [give my heart]

It's pretty good so far, but I hope the author can stop letting the heroine's IQ fall off the line all the time.

The inner earth world always welcomes the strong! The straight line between the two points is the closest. I am starting to dig holes now. I guess I will be able to go abroad for free soon [Cool] [Cool] No, I dug the subway and am in trouble... [Crying] [crying] Good-looking, non-toxic, the heroine is a calm, strong, serious and lively single mother (currently raising a rabbit), and her partners are all healthy and normal people (handsome and cute sisters! There are quite good supporting partners in several survival books. I can't remember why I was so determined to be a lone wolf in the past🤔 Oh... Because of poverty alleviation and fake people, and I also have to write backstabs. But this kind of low-income relationship, the level of normal interaction is just right, I agree to this marriage!

The writing is super good, the plot is quite novel and interesting, there are no surprises so far, and the all-female team is a big hit! (´｡✪ω✪｡｀) It's just a bit short, please give it a try

Not bad, the heroine doesn't have any big gold fingers, she grows up slowly, and those who like the heroine who is number one in all aspects should be cautious, because the heroine grows very slowly and can barely be considered in the first echelon. If the author continues to describe at this pace, there will still be about 70% of the heroine's growth to the number one, but the heroine... Um... She has grown too slowly, maybe because her life is relatively comfortable? It feels like the mentality has not completely changed yet. Of course, it is also possible that this is the character of the heroine and cannot be changed. If you like evil girls, don't enter. The heroine is chaotic, neutral and kind.

The rhythm is very good. Looking at other survival novels with golden numbers flying around, this one is a bit more steady, and it's finally not the first place on the list. In some novels, the protagonist can get the first place without any special features. I really don't understand.